Your story is good but you seem to blame everyone else a lot for the crap that happened in bens life. I do like Ben he is a really good guy but he didn't make the best choices and I don't like all the blaming placed upon others. None of them are perfect. However i agree that Leo should have helped him more. I think most

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In response to your response you are RIGHT I did put blame on other characters. Most of what they are blamed for is Ben not trusting them. I did this to get the GUILT, which will carry over the next section of this story. But, as you read I did ensure that Ben held no ill feelings toward them, and he accepted the blame for all of his mistakes. I also gave everyone save for Ben the ending they wanted.

Adrian has Omar and is in New York with Amy. Ricky got Amy, and she is in New York guilt free, because Ben forgave her. Henry & Alice got forgiveness and each other. Jack/Grace got the break up both needed to figure out their lives. Chloe got the great family she always wanted. Leo still has the support of his immediate family save for Ben.

Ben's character got the freedom I always thought he needed to figure himself out. If you watched the show you will notice as others Ben's bad decisions inadvertently had positive results for others. So please stay tuned to the next story to see how it plays out