~Funny chapter break gone bad~

"Snowflake fetch!" Jamie yells throwing an egg in Jacks direction.

"What the-Argh!" Jack yelled as Snowflake pounced on him knocking him down running after the ball. Jack looks up from the ground to see Snowflake sitting on his chest with the red ball in her mouth, looking down at him wagging her tail innocently. Jack then looked over at Jamie from the ground. To see him laughing along side with Sophie.
"Smart kid," he mused still laying on the ground just as Snowflake started sniffing his face, before sneezing on him.

"Gross!" He muttered closing his eyes, then turning his head to the side.

"Snowflake!" Sophie says cheerfully clapping her hands, snapping Jack out of his thoughts.

"Well I'm glad somebody's still happy" Jack thought as he pushed snowflake off then using his sleeve to wipe his face.
A tall greyish tattooed bunny then chuckles, as Jack starts to stand up while dusting the grass from his hair and jacket.

"I'm starting to like her," bunny says giving Jack a small smirk.

"I wouldn't be so sure about that," Jack commented looking past bunny's shoulder. Bunny's raised an eye brow then looked behind him, then back to Jack, when he looked back again to see Snowflake with an unlucky egg in her mouth, violently shaking her head from side to side before laying down still chwing on the poor egglet.

"My goggies!" He yells horrified before taking off after Snowflake.

"Talk about double takes" Jack said laughing then slowly stopped as he realized Snowflake was terrorizing the poor egg.
Bunnymund chased her on foot...er paws..., while Jack flew after Snowflake around the underground for awhile.

"How many tunnels does he have down here?!" Jack muttered almost catching up to her, when she outsmarted both him and the oversized bunny. She got the wrong message thinking it was a game, so she ran faster.
Meanwhile Jamie and Sophie watched from the sidelines as the 2 guardians chased after the wolf pup.

"How long have they-"

"20 minutes," Sophie answered from her grassy seat, she didn't always say much but she was pretty smart for her age. Jamie taped her shoulder with something warm. She looked up to see it was a blue hot coco mug. She reached up and grasped it with her small hands.

"Will I ever grow?" She thought taking a sip, savoring the warm sweet hot coco.

"Marshmallows!" She said happily taking another sip trying to eat some of the little fluffy delights, when they angled away from her. She turned her cup clockwise and tried again, this time she was successful.
"Hmm sugar," she thought in bliss. The marshmallows melted in her mouth.

"Hey they finally caught up to her," Jamie says pointing to the now 2 very exhausted guardians who where dirt covered, tired and looked crankier then usual.

"We got her!" Jack says breath labored as he staggered towards the innocent looking dog.

"Man ya really gotta work out," bunny commented looking down at the panting teen.

"It's been a...very...long day," he stated dryly bent over trying to catch his breath.
"I haven't really slept in a while... I'm seeing dots are you seeing dots?" He asks waving a hand in his front of his face.
Bunny looked over at him with a hint of worry which only intensified when the winter spirit passed out immediately hitting the grass.

"Must've been real tired to pass out like that," he commented dryly.
Small feet scampered down the hill. "Jack!" Jamie yelled scared. Sophie trailed closely behind him. Hot Cocoa spilled from one green mug, staining the grass. While the blue, finished, empty mug sat upright from where they once sat.
Bunny had forgotten the kids where watching, and had to think of something before something bad happened.

"Jack's just taking a nap," he said making sure the kids didn't get to close to Jack.

"Hey why don't you guys visit North for awhile?" Bunny suggested hoping they'd go for it. They didn't look up for it, they still looked worried.

"Will he be ok?" Jamie asks looking up at him in the eye. Truth be told bunny sucks at lying.

"Yes he'll be fine," he answered reassuringly, before tapping his foot twice for them to travel to the North Pole.

"Poor kids," he muttered turning back to Jack.

"I'd move him, but..." He was being selfish, thinking of excuses not wanting to be cold. He was about to move him when the ground began to rumble and a blinding light flashed from behind him, a cold blast of air and flurries erupted from the light making him shiver. The rumbling suddenly stopped and the light faded away.
When he turned around he noticed Snowflake wasn't so tiny anymore, and she was now standing over Jack sniffing him, before grabbing his blue frosted sweater with her sharp teeth. Bunny jumped in action thinking instincts saying something bad was about to happen.
When all she did was gently pulled him up to where he was standing upright. Bunny blinked then realized what she was trying to do and hopped over to help her out. Soon Jack was snuggly lain down on the oversized, fluffy, Snowflake. His frown slowly disappeared, being replaced by a small smile.
As the winter duo catches a few Zzzz's, Bunnymund went inside his small hut, and brought out a blanket and carefully placed it on both them, leaving Jacks head out so he can breath. Jack turned and snuggled into Snowflakes fur, sighing in content. Bunny silently taped his hind paw twice making a huge burrow for him to jump down. In no time, he was at the North Pole. Luckily this time he transported inside the workshop instead of outside in the endless amounts of snow covered grounds. When he looked up elves and yetis were strangely looking at him.

"Carry on," he stated waving his paw trying to get them to continue their jobs.

"Bunny! My good friend wat is da matter?" A loud Russian voice rang from the other side of the halls.

"Still loud as ever," he mused to himself. He was about to yell back when he realized this was a private subject.
After 20 seconds of struggling he finally got to where North stood.

"Finally now we talk," North says cheerfully turning to walk into his office. As soon as he closed the door he faced Bunnymund with a serious expression, that was not at all cheery.

Could you perhaps send me a review by any chance? Constructive criticism...anything? This story would be really appreciated.