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Chapter 7: Magic Kingdom

We arrived at Magic Kingdom and headed right to the bag checking station. We had 2 backpacks with us, so we had to get them checked for anything. We decided just to let them check them, considering that everyone except me had their badges-I didn't have one, because I wasn't a 'real' agent even though I did all kinds of extra work- because we didn't want to have to do anything with them, because this was a vacation, not a business trip.

Then we headed to the ticket place. We pulled out our passes-which were hopper passes, so we could go to as many of the parks as we wanted in one day- and handed them to the ticket lady. Tony went first, followed by Ziva, me, Abby, McGee, and finally Gibbs. They made us put our index finger on this blue light thing as we put the tickets through the machine. I walked through and we waited for everyone to get through.

When we were finally all through the gates, we all walked over to the place where the park maps were at. I grabbed one, along with Abby, and we looked for where we wanted to go first. Apparently we were now in Main Street, and we wanted to get a fast pass for Splash Mountain first. We all walked up to the train so we could get there, because none of us really wanted to walk that far.

Once we got onto the train, we all crammed onto the same row of seats, because most of the other ones were taken. We drove around to Frontierland and got off the train right in front of the ride. We walked over to the almost empty ride, and decided to just go, since the wait was only 5 minutes. We walked along the roped course until we got to the area to get on the ride.

I sat with Gibbs-who had another fun side when we were places other than work-in the front, Ziva and Tony sat right behind me, and McGee and Abby sat behind them. We all put our arms up, and the bar came down on our laps. Then the ride started.

We rode through the course, each small drop feeling like the big one. Then we got to a spot where we knew it was going to be the big drop and we all looked at each other and screamed as we went down the drop. After the drop was over, me and Gibbs ducked so Tony and Ziva got soaked, and we were completely dry.

After we got back to the area where we reload, there was no line at all forming. Asking the man, he said that it was going to be a very slow day with barely anyone coming to the park today, because MGM was the park with extra-magic hours, plus it was a weekday in the off-season. We all got off, and decided to get fast passes later, so that we could go on it during the fireworks if we even needed the passes. Once we were all out of the line, we headed over to the line for Big Thunder Mountain Railroad, my dad and Ziva still trying to dry off, but feeling a little bit of coolness in the 96 degree weather.

We walked through the line for Big Thunder Mountain Railroad, and we had no wait at all again. This time though, there were 15 seats, so I got the front, Ziva was behind me, Tony was after her, Gibbs went next, Abby was after Gibbs, and McGee was last.

The ride started, and we put our hands up. We went through twists and turns, and hills. Eventually the ride was over and we got our picture code, so that we could look at it to buy it later. After we got out of the ride, we decided to go over to the Haunted Mansion.

That line was practically empty too. There was a 10 minute wait. So we waited. When we got on the ride, I sat with my dad, Ziva sat with McGee and Abby sat with Gibbs. We got to an area and the ride stopped. I screamed and jumped, because my dad pushed my shoulder and said boo. I hit him and we all started laughing, because the 'doom buggies' were at a spot where everyone else could see what happened.

Eventually the ride started up again and we went until the end. We all got off, and decided to go to Fantasyland. We started at It's a small world, where we all rode in the long boat with another family. Then we all went to Peter Pan's Flight, and I sat with Abby as we went over the scenes from Peter Pan. Next was Under the Sea with The Little Mermaid-which all of the guys hated- and I sat with McGee, trying to get him in the spirit. After that was The Many Adventures of Winnie the Pooh, where I sat with Ziva and we laughed the entire time. The Mad Tea Party teacups was next, with us all sitting together trying to spin the teacup as fast as it could go. Later, we rode Dumbo the Flying Elephant, and I sat with my dad, even though it was a pretty tight fit. Lastly, we rode The Barnstormer and I sat with Gibbs, making a record of sitting with everyone at least once.

When we got out of Fantasyland, we decided to eat at Cosmic Ray's Starlight Café. I got some chicken and we ate in the big room, that was now almost so full of people we couldn't find a seat. Eventually we did, and we all sat down and ate our dinner.

Once we were finished with our food, we headed out to ride more rides. We were in Tomorrowland, so we made the best of it. We rode on the Tomorrowland Speedway, and we all went alone in the cars, except my dad went with me, because he must not have wanted to drive. I noticed he got kind of scared when he said I drove like Ziva, but I just laughed.

When we were off of the cars, we headed over to Space Mountain. The ride was an hour wait, so we hurriedly got fast passes so that we could return in an half an hour to the ride. We went over to the Tomorrowland Transit authority ride. I sat with my dad and Ziva. We rode through for about 20 minutes, since we were worn out from the day.

It was 1930 when we got on Space Mountain, the order went me in the front, Abby, McGee, Gibbs, Tony, then Ziva in the back. We rode through it with our hands up and had the time of our lives. When we got off, we watched the fireworks.

After the fireworks were over, we headed back to the Hotel. We left at the busiest time to leave, so we had to stand on the bus. All of us were bumping into one another until we got off at our stop finally. We all talked about what we were going to do, and we decided on Epcot, but we were going to just do the World Showcase tomorrow, since we had a while left before we had to leave.

We all headed to our rooms and almost instantly fell asleep. That night I had a great dream, for the first time in what felt like forever.

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