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Chapter 8: World Showcase
I woke up around 0800, because I felt like sleeping in today, because the park didn't open until 1100 for the world showcase, which we were going to today. I got out of bed and put my hair into a high ponytail and grabbed my running outfit, putting it on and grabbed my shoes. I left my dad and Ziva, who were still sleeping, a note saying where I was.
When I went outside, I felt the perfect weather. I went down the stairs and started my run. I made it all the way around the hotel, before coming back, completely refreshed. I got back in the room, and no one else was awake, still. I threw the note I wrote in the garbage can and went to the bathroom to take a shower.
After my shower, I changed into a white tank top that said love pink and had a black 86 in the middle. I put on a blue, green and white sundress with some blue sandals. I then added my make-up and left my hair down.
Within this time, Tony and Ziva both took a shower and got dressed and we all had cereal for breakfast. I heard knocking on the door, so I opened it. "Are you guys ready?" Abby excitedly exclaimed.
"Ya, just a second." I replied, grabbing my aviator sunglasses and my phone.
Ziva walked out, and then we waited about 5 minutes for Tony. "You'd think he would be the first ready." McGee said.
"Key words 'you'd think'." I laughed.
My dad came out, dressed with his ray-bans on and we all walked over to the bus. "You better not be entering a wet tee-shirt contest there." He said looking at me.
I just shook my head and kept walking until we got to the bus station. The bus for Epcot was just starting to pull away and my dad ran to stop it. He caught up with it just before it left. We all got on it racing to see who would get the back four seats. We all ended up sitting in a space meant for four, but we all kind of fit. Except for the fact I had to sit on the end and felt like the window was going to break off and bring me out with it.
Finally, we got there. Going through the line for getting our bags checked took forever, even though we only had two backpacks. Once we were through, we headed toward the ticket area. After we were through the gates, I grabbed a map. "Let's start with the Canada, that's the last on the list, so it probably won't have that much of a crowd this early." I told them.
"Um, we kind of think maybe today we should go around separate ways today, you know, McGee, Gibbs and me, can start at the Mexico area and you guys can start at the Canada. Maybe you guys can talk about, some…things." Abby said winking at Tony and Ziva.
"Sure that works. If you guys want to meet up somewhere, text one of us." Ziva said.
All of us said bye to each other and we headed out. Once we got to the Canada, we started to look at the sights. We watched the video on the Canadians, for about 15 minutes. Then we decided to start toward the United Kingdom. We looked around for awhile until we got bored.
About 20 minutes later, we got to the next stop, France. I heard my dad mumble under his breath. "We need to tell her Zi. I have a way."
Then he walked over to a shop and left me standing with Ziva looking at the fake Eiffel Tower. We started to talk about how the trip was going until my dad came back with a small bag. "Car, we have something to tell you." My dad said, walking up.
He looked at Ziva as he pulled out a small box. "We're going to get married." He told me, pulling out a diamond necklace in the shape of the Eiffel Tower. "And this is where we're going to take you."
"WHAT?!" I exclaimed. "You guys have only been together for two weeks tops!"
"Carmendy, we have been together for the past year." Ziva told me.
"Wh-what about Sean?" I asked.
"He was just a decoy for an undercover mission I was on. I got pulled from it, because my old, well, agency found me." She replied.
"Oh, well what was your 'old agency'?" I asked. "And why didn't you tell me you guys tell me?"
"I will tell you the details of my life later. But right now, I would like to ask if you are okay with us getting married." She responded.
"Well, if I get to keep that necklace, I guess I can't object to having a sane mother." I said smiling as we all got into a group hug.
My dad put the necklace on me and I smiled some more. "The only people who know about this are you and Abby." Tony said. "We are going to take you to Paris and get married there."
"When?" I asked.
"June." Ziva replied taking a ring off of a piece of string around her neck and slipped it on her finger.
We walked out of France like one happy family.
After going through a lot more countries, we were done in Epoct. Tony thought we should go back and have a nice dinner at Epcot, and Ziva and I agreed with him. We walked halfway around the 'world' until we reached Italy. It was 1900 as we sat down at the restaurant, and we finished by 2030.
When we finished, we lined up for the fireworks show we got a front row spot, because we wanted to see what they looked like.
To say it was amazing would be an understatement. It was so cool, that when it was over, I wished it went on again. We decided to go out with the rush again, so we walked out with everyone else who had just seen the show.
There were about 20 other people on our bus and we had to stand in the isle. I was in between my dad and Ziva, first off, because it was freezing, and second, they wouldn't fall over. We discussed where we would go tomorrow and at the same time me and Tony shouted Hollywood Studios. "Like father, like daughter." Ziva exclaimed.
I got off the bus and we headed to our room. It was already 2200, so we decided to call it a day and head to sleep. I laid down on the bed and almost instantly fell asleep and dreamed about what happened today what we would do tomorrow.
Please Review with the place they should go after Hollywood Studios! I really don't know what to pick….. Thanks! Choices—Animal Kingdom, Magic Kingdom, and Epcot (Future World). Also, do you think it was too soon for me to have them get engaged?
