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A two pronged attack? Sure , why not?

Separate me from my girlfriend while she was with someone who amaze her? Thank you , I'm very grateful to you.

I mumbled thousands of curse that I know while we were running through the left side of the forest.

I know that I shouldn't be bothered by that.

But the more that I think that I shouldn't be bothered , the more that I'm pissed.

I mean , what's with the team arrangement? Can't he just put me and Annabeth in the same group?

And Annabeth shouldn't just accept it like that,this is seriously making me mad.

Unconciously I curse Willy louder that Lisa and Matt can hear what I was saying.

They were nice enough to pretend that they didn't notice that , but I couldn't care less of what they heard.

We finally passed the river and slowed down our pace , since we entered the Hunters territory.

'Perrrcyy...'Called Lisa as if she were Grover.

'Yeah?'I replied half angrily with Annabeth.

'Girls hate it when boys get over-jealous.'

'... I'm not jealous.'I answered without believing a single word of it.

'Then... why are you mad?'

'I'm not mad.'I grumbled.

'Yeah , you're as calm as the storm. Of course you're not mad.'Blurted Matt.

'.... Okay , so maybe I am a little jealous!!'

'A little?'Lisa asked innocently.

'I'm burning with jealousy!! There , happy?'I admitted.

'Well , you shouldn't.'

'Yeah , you're right Lisa. Annabeth is probably having some fun with Willy , and I should just calm down and just let them have their fun.'I answered angrily.

'He got a point.'Said Matt.

'Oh shut it Matt! Percy , It's a three man team , I doubt they're gonna have any romantic moments. Beside , you're Annabeth's boyfriend , not Willy.'

'... Maybe you're right.'I calmed down a little bit.

'I know I'm right , now focus on this game. I don't want to ended up being the laughing stock of the Ares campers.'

'Yeah , although Annabeth did saw you first.'Matt blurted.

'And Willy is more handsome than Percy.'Said Lisa.

'As strong as Percy , Percy only good point.'

'Smarter than Percy , and have you seen his hair? Makes me want to sniff and put my hand all over his hair.'Said Lisa.

'Thank you... for sorting all that out. I feel a million times better.' I grumbled.

'Ups... Matt!! You idiot! You're not helping at all!'

Lisa punched Matt on the arm.

'Ow... Hey , No fair! You did it too!' Matt groaned.

'You started it.'

'Guys , stopped it! We're in the enemy's ground!' I said to calmed them down.

They listen to me and stop arguing.

'Good , now let's—'

Before I got the chance to finish,Lisa pulled me to the ground.

'Hunters.'She whisper to me.

We hide in one of the bushes , and saw a couple of hunters are on their guard.

And not only that , the flag.

We can see the flag from where we are , that means we're in the heart of the enemy's territory.

The Hunters regroup and shown their whole number.

Five of them , just as Willy said.

This should be easy enough... Is what I want to say.

But looking at the size of those Hunters who guard the flag , didn't exactly convinced me that this is going to be easy.

Half of them is at least two metres tall , and trust me , they look more like a Cyclops rather than a human.

They have a very mean looking face and the size of a profesional wrestler.

...Deep down in my heart I pity the defense team.

Thalia won't show any mercy to her opponents , meaning that the one that's guarding their flag is not their best Hunters.

I wonder how big is the one that Thalia brought to attack our base right now.

We carefully observed the Hunters , but we didn't exactly have much time , since the Hunters is most definitely attacking our base right now.

There's a disturbing light keep bugging my eyes and I saw at that direction.

Annabeth was giving me a signal with her dagger.

They were ready , and we could start at anytime.

Annabeth stopped her signal , and I know the next time she gave that same signal is the time we charged.

Lisa looked a bit nervous , while Matt is eagerly waiting for the moment to charged.

I pat Lisa in the back , and she seemed to have calmed down.

I watch Annabeth patiently , and a few seconds later , she gave another blinding light.

I took out Riptide from my pocket and click it , showing my celestial bronze sword.

We ran down the hill stealthily to take them by surprise.

*******

I sneak behind one of the Hunters and knocked her out.

Obviously I knocked the one who seems to be the weakest.

Even the weakest of the Hunters is trouble for us.

'FOR THE CAMPERS!!'I yelled.

We were all screaming and the Hunters was taken by surprise.

Matt was screaming something like, 'FOR A DATE!!'

Annabeth team and my team joined forces and attack the Hunters.

The strategy worked and they were defeated easily.

If they were not taken by surprise , I doubt it'll be that easy.

'It worked , now we have to bring it back quickly. I don't think our defense team will last any longer than this.' Said Annabeth.

Matt took the flag and we're running through the trees and found the river right in front of us.

Easy Win , is what I thought , until Matt got knocked down by some sort of branch.

He lied down on the floor and seems to have been hit pretty hard.

'A trap!!'Said Annabeth.

I saw a rope was tied to the branch , and the branch hit Matt because somebody cut the rope that's tying the branch.

It wasn't over.

The Ares camper that was with us let out a small scream as he got pulled deep to the trees.

We heard a few yell and saw a girl jumped down in the front of us.

Thalia had a smirk on her face and the Hunters are surrounding us.

'Do you really think it will be that easy , Jackson?'

'I was , at least until you knocked one of my friends down.'

Thalia put a nice smirk on her face , 'I know that there's something wrong when I saw that you and Annabeth weren't there , luckily I have a strong feeling that my base in danger.'

'It would be nice if you just ignored that.'I replied.

Thalia smiled , 'Give it up , Jackson. This is only a small part of the whole team , the others are busy over-running your base.'

Even the small part of their team is enough to outnumbered us.

There's six of them and four of us.

We move closely to each other as the Hunters approach us slowly.

The Hunters flag are right behind us , and I could hear a horn was blown in the direction of our base.

That means that the Hunters have capture our flag , and we only have a few minutes before the Hunters bring our flag back to their base and we would lose this game.

'What now?'I asked.

'Technically... We win if we get their flag across the river.'Said Willy.

'I doubt they're gonna let us do that.'Said Lisa.

Annabeth seems to have an idea , and she spoke to us: 'Who said that we need their permission?'

All of us smiled as if we get the idea of what Annabeth trying to say.

Then after that evil smile , Lisa,Willy,and I ran to the Hunters while Annabeth grab the flag.

When Annabeth said that I have a seaweed brain , I was wondering , what if she's right?

I mean , I just did the dumbest thing.

That is... charging to Thalia , probably the Hunters best fighter.

Thalia gave me a smirk as if she was intrigued by the idea of me attacking her.

She won against Luke the best swordman in the camp , but Luke wasn't at his best condition at that time , and my swordplay is definitely not inferior than Luke.

I swing Riptide to her right as hard as I could.

Thalia unsheathe her long dagger and parried my Riptide with her Aegis.

Then she kicked me in the stomach and I rolled around.

'That's the best you got Jackson?'Challenge her.

I looked around and saw that Willy already knocked down one of the Hunters.

He took the initiative by striking first , and keeping busy the other Hunter.

Lisa looked a bit troubled by the Hunter skill and looked like she was having a hard time.

Annabeth is trying to find an opening for her to run across the river , unfortunately one of the Hunters didn't want to let Annabeth out of her sight.

I turned around to Thalia , and she didn't seem to mind taking her time.

Of course!! The longer this drag , the closer the Hunters to victory.

I let out a small yell and charge to Thalia.

I swing Riptide to her right again , she parried it with Aegis , but I know that would happen.

I spin as quickly as possible and gave her an elbow on her stomach.

She stumbled and I didn't let go of her , don't waste any chance is something you learn when you're fighting Thalia.

I tried to twist her right hand that is holding her dagger , but she backfliped and stomp me on the face.

I pulled backward holding my face in agony , and when I looked at her again , she already jumped and gave me a flying kick on my chest.

I fall and tried to get back up , but she quickly pinned me on the floor and the tip of her dagger is on my throat.

'End of the game Jackson..'She take a slow breath and smirk.

I turned my attention to Annabeth and gave Thalia an evil smile.

She didn't notice that Lisa knocked a Hunter down and keeping busy the Hunter that is guarding Annabeth.

It should've been over , but the Hunter that Willy knocked down got up , and scream at Annabeth.

Thalia finally notice and she stood up , running , trying to chase Annabeth.

'DON'T LET HER GET AWAY WITH THE FLAG!!' Thalia screamed.

As if the Hunters answer Thalia's calling , two of the Hunters jumped in front of Annabeth , blocking her path.

Thalia relaxed a bit and let her guard down.

I didn't waste this chance , I quickly get back up and hit Thalia in the back with the hilt of my sword pretty hard.

She got knocked out and I ran to Annabeth , helping her to get past through the Hunters.

They're good , but I've faced more formidable opponents.

One of them got stumbled , and I hit her pretty hard that she fell down unconcious.

Only one more Hunter to go and Victory is starting to shine upon us , until the Hunter that Willy knocked join our fight.

One more Hunter shouldn't be that hard , but another one showed up from the trees.

And this one is the biggest Hunter I have ever seen in my life.

To make it worse , I heard Thalia screaming , 'JACKSON!!'

Uh-oh... Didn't sound like she's calling me to give me some new year's present.

I looked at Willy and Lisa direction , they knocked down their opponent and quickly ran to us.

Thalia is still holding the back of her head , a minute at the most before she recovered.

The Hunters surrounded us , and the fight was dragged to the river.

Now the river is about two metres and a half in width , and the game is not over until the flag is across the river.

Meaning that on the river is not counted.

We're wet , and moving is harder in the river.

Not for me though , I'm the son of Poseidon.

Being able to walk freely and get stronger in the water is a privilege for being the son of Poseidon.

While the Hunters are trying to get used being in the water , I fight them there.

I was winning , but they're starting to get used to it and it WAS three against one.

Annabeth can't move until I moved , since the Hunters would chase after her the moment she move.

They tripped my Riptide and it's bouncing pretty far from me.

The giant Hunter literally picked me up like some toy and throw me three feet away from her.

That leaves Annabeth unguarded.

Willy tried to protect Annabeth , but he got quickly thrown by the giant Hunter to my place.

He fell next to me pretty hard , and even though he got back up , he looked tired.

The Hunters are approaching Annabeth closer , and I could see all of the other Hunters are back and they're running toward us while holding our flag.

Defeat seems certain but Annabeth smile and throw the flag to behind them.

'CATCH LISA!!'Yelled Annabeth.

Lisa was there and she got the flag

The Hunter panicked for a few seconds and they quickly chase after Lisa.

They'll catch Lisa for sure , and I can't allow that to happen.

I concentrate deeply , imagining the river raising above my head.

I can feel the all the water... Hundreds gallons of water swarming above my head circling in order.

Desperate time called for desperate measure.

I feel it and almost blast it off to the Hunters , but the sound of *BRAK* startled me.

I realised that I slowly losing control of the water above my head , and I saw Thalia tackled me.

'Not today Jackson!!'She said as she tackled me.

I and Thalia fell down , drenched in water.

Thalia look relieved for a moment , but the swirling of the water above us didn't stop.

Thalia look at me , turned to the water , and turned to me again.

She looks just as confused as I am.

But she ran out of time for thinking.

The hundreds gallons of water I gathered , burst like a hurricane , hitting Thalia and the Hunters.

Thalia and all of the Hunters in the river are washed down by the river.

They can't stand up anymore , they're too tired and out of breath.

Then the water slowly coming back to me... is what I thought.

But I can feel the water passed me and gathering in a circle.

Someone else was controlling the water.

I turned my back and saw the water forming some sort of waterfall that is circling a person.

I stared at the water , confused.

Then another burst came from the water , targetting the Hunter that is carrying our flag and attempting to cross the river.

The Hunter got knocked down ten feet behind her.

Lisa passed the river and we have won the game.

But that's not where we paid our attention.

We paid our attention to the waterfall , as it slowly returning to the river.

I saw Willy was playing with the water , as if he was dancing with the river.

Then he burst back the water , returning all of them to the river.

It doesn't end there , we saw something that is even more spectacular than that.

The explanation of what he was capable of doing.

A green hologram showed up above his head , in a shape of a spear , a Trident.

Spinning and gleaming , as it slowly dissapear.

But we all saw it , and my world seems suddenly upside down.

I stared at him with disbelief , even Annabeth look just as surprised as I am.

I felt a moment of betrayal by my father , as if his Trident stab my heart.

Willy looked back at me and he chuckled.

He's the son of The God of the Sea , Son of Poseidon....

'What's wrong... Brother?'He said while laughing.