We ended on a cliffy. hehehehehehe. The 50th anniversary is in 27 days. I think. \(',')/ *Shrug*

Josh: Louise owns nothing.

Aaron: All rights go to Russell T Davies and Steven Moffat.

Daniel: Enjoy!

The doctor: Wait Louise! You birthday's in 1 month and 21 days.

Me; I literally just had to figure that out sorry this is my way of counting down :D Anyway enjoy.


Chapter 9 Mind control.

It was cold. Extremely cold. She could hear shouting. She wanted to shout back but she was so sleepy. All she saw was blackness. She felt as if she was floating. Suddenly she heard a distant splash and felt an arm around her waist. She felt her self being pulled upwards. Soon enough they broke the surface. She began coughing and spluttering. "Louise, Louise! Focus!" She saw blue eyes. It was Josh. He saved her again. She smiled and leant on his shoulder.

Josh swum them back to the ship. The doctor was were the plank was holding out his arms. Josh lifted Louise up and climbed up himself. What happened your wondering well.

"Ugh. Let me go!" Josh was struggling against the doctor. "You can't go down there you'll both freeze!" The doctor said trying to reason. "She's my best friend! If I go back to the TARDIS without her I will not forgive myself!" He gave one final shove and the doctor released him. He ran to the edge of the ship and jumped. Plunging into the freezing water below.

The doctor wrapped them both in a blanket and made sure they were warm. He then turned to the captain. "What the hell was that? They are just children!" His face went red whilst shouting. The captain looked confused. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to I just... I have this thing where I lose control of my own body. I'm so sorry." He bowed his head. The other pirates began to gather around. "Don't just stand there. Get them some dry clothes and hot food!" He shouted. "I'm Green beard please except my hospitality." He begged. The doctor looked at Louise and Josh. "As long as you never put those two in danger ever again!" Green beard nodded.


A while later Josh and Louise were dry and had some food in their belly's. "Thanks Josh. I could have died." He put his arm around her shoulders. "No problem. anything for my best friend!" They both smiled. A member of the crew showed them to their room. They each sat on a bed. "What do think he meant... I lose control of my own body?" Louise wondered. "It's probably just a disease." Josh said. The doctor nodded. "Let's get some sleep and we'll head off tomorrow." Everyone nodded too tired to speak. During the night Louise couldn't sleep so she thought she would go outside for a bit. As she passed the captain's door she heard him talking to someone.

"But sir. They are just children." The captain explained. "I don't care I need them to work my ship. That is the only way I can go home!" A hissing voice said. Louise looked in the key hole and saw a short purple lump of goo. "But-" The goo held up a gun. "Do you want to be incinerated?" The captain quivered. "No" He whimpered. The goo put the gun down. "Then do as I command!" The captain nodded. "Aye sir." He said sadly. Louise's eyes widened and she backed away from the door into a wall. Or what she thought to be a wall. "Hello little lady where do you think your going?" A big pirate asked. She gulped.

The pirate through her into a small room and locked it. It was full of bones. Louise cringed. "Unless you can fix the control panel... Well you'll just die." The pirate laughed and walked off. Louise glared at the door and stood. She looked at the control panel but didn't understand a thing. "Well. I'm dead again." She sat on the floor and tried to calm her mind so she could think but she fell asleep.


It was morning and the doctor and Josh were looking for Louise. They saw the captain and asked if he had seen her. "Oh. That wee one got up bright n early asking for some work. I said she can clean me bedroom. Don't worry she'll be fine." Josh was unsure and looked at the doctor. The timelord looked back at him and gave the same expression. "Well do you want to help?" Green beard asked. "Sure." Josh replied. "Well you two can clean the deck." He handed them two mops. "On ya go!" He smiled. The boy's took the mop's and headed of to work. Something weird was going on.


Louise slowly opened her eyes and sat up. "Huh?" She looked around and saw the purple goo. It had red eyes and a mouth. She quickly backed up against the wall. "Hello. Child." She glared. "Why do you need children?" It began waving a thin arm around. "Human children have a big imagination. This control panel requires that." He said as if it was obvious. "Look. I know someone who can help. you know the older man. The doctor." "Oh. I know the doctor. The oncoming storm. Anything else. If he knew I was here he'd arrest me on the shadow proclamation." He said. It grabbed her collar and lifted her up. "That's why your going to help me. I wouldn't want anything to happen to your precious doctor. Oh and the other one." (HEY!)

Louise removed his hand and went over to the control panel. "I'll try." The purple goo nodded and began walking off. "Wait!" It turned around. "Who are you?" It glared. "I am Blucord. Of the glooponions." She nodded and turned back to the panel. Blucord left. She hit head on the wall. "FUCK!"

It was about an hour later and Louise was still staring at it. She sighed and stood. She went over to the keyhole and looked out. No one was standing guard. She tried the handle. "Still locked." She saw a screwdriver on the table next to it a hammer. She smiled. She got the tools and began breaking the lock. When the lock broke off she grabbed the panel and ran out. She ran through many corridors until she came to the deck. They weren't there. What time was it? She ran back to the room. They weren't there either. She clicked her fingers. "The TARDIS!" She turned to ran out and ran into Blucord. Her eyes widened. "You little sh-" Before it could finish Louise took off. The goo followed and swung punches. It arms extended like branches from tree's of a forest.

She got to the grating but it was closed she wouldn't make it. She ran to the edge. "Stop or I drop it!" "You wouldn't!" "Try me!" Josh walked past them without noticing. He walked backwards a few seconds later. "What the hell?" Louise turned to him. "Get the doctor quick befor-" She didn't finish because Blucord took the control panel and knocked her into the mast of the ship. She fell to the floor with a thump.

Josh looked at her then ran for the doctor. Blucord following. "DOCTOR!" The timelord ran out and soniced the goo. It fell and dropped the panel. The two ran past the goo picking up the panel as they went. They ran out to the deck and towards Louise. She sat up slowly and had a line of blood running from her head, down her face. The doctor turned to Blucord. "Why do need the humans?" "It said. We have more of an imagination, the children. He needs the panel fixed so it can go home." Louise said shakily. She slowly stood and Josh steadied her. "What do we do?" He asked. The doctor looked at the panel.

A wire was hanging loose at the side. He plugged it in and it lit up. Everyone's mouth's dropped. "REALLY?!" "I spent 3 years on this ship for that?!" Blucord glowered. The doctor tossed him the panel. "Anyway I will have to take you to the Judoon so that you will be punished for your crime. I guess you could say your in a gooey situation." He laughed and looked around. "No? Alright. Tough crowd." He mumbled. "You'll have to catch me first doctor!" He pressed a button and teleported. "Huh? We need to go after him!" Louise shouted. "Nah he's fine."

Somewhere far across space and time...

"Haha you'll never catch me doctor!" Blucord looked up from the panel to see the Judoon. "Oop's" He gulped a bit of sludge escaped his back end.

"Hahaha good one doctor." They laughed. He laughed to. Green beard came up to them. "I'm so sorry. Thank you for getting rid of it." The doctor shook his head. "No problem." "Is there anything we could do to repay you?" The doctor shook his head. "Wait!" Josh shouted. "I have an Idea!" A little while later Louise and Josh were fighting about who could steer the boat. "It's my turn!" Louise shouted. "Nu-uh Biatch." She stood on his foot. "FUCK! ow!" The doctor laughed. Travelling with him really get's you stuck. Huh-huh? Well F u too.


LOL Hope you enjoyed. Halloween special should come out Wednesday so look out 4 that. Hope you enjoyed. Review if you want and I talk to ya next time. BYE!