"Your Excellency we have loss total control! No doubt about it we will smash right into the holy ring" a navigator Barked. The navigator frantically tried to stabilize the rapidly falling cruiser by typing out many calculations and orders to the ship's reactor. "Halt, all of your actions are futile, embrace our fate for I see no grater death than on this holy ring" The sangheili in the golden combat harness said. The Sangheili That gave the order was no other than the Fleetmaster of glorious reclamation, Supreme Commander Thel's right claw elite. Glorious Reclamation bowed his head and closed his eyes. "let us pray to our gods the forerunners, that our deaths please them and may we join them in paradise" he said. Everyone on deck turned to the Fleetmaster and bowed. "Oh glorious and powerful forerunners, let my words please you as we fall to our deaths on you're sacred and holy ring, Halo, let our deaths be honorable in your eyes and may we join you in God hood" With that they all slowly lifted their snake like heads.

The Cruiser started burning up in the atmosphere. The shields held for a moment, flickered, then evaporated. The ship shook as the rings atmosphere burned and tore the warship apart. The hull started melting as the ship reached the last layer of the ring's atmosphere. It would've been a pretty sight if it weren't so destructive. The dark purple hull mixed with active orange and violent red as the cruiser speed through the sky. Finally the ship met the ground as if they were old friends. The sand from the beach actually fused with the ship as is exploded. The ship was then snapped in half when it hit the side of a cliff. The piece that was thrown bounced twice before skidding into its final resting place.

It was dark...TOO dark. Pain that's all he could feel, good that meant he was still alive. Then again maybe that was the worse thing that could possibly happen to him. He felt something warm, then he tasted copper. His next worse nightmare was happening, he was bleeding. "no..." was all Reclamation could utter . After what felt like an eternity, he finally could open his eyes and when he did he saw the unthinkable...

One side of the ring exploded.

"By the Prophets..."

Howdy,

just a little heads up: I'm sorry to say but most of my chapters are going to be short but to balance that out i will roll out more chapters when I can.

Also looking for a co-writer, got a lot of school stuff.

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