The children of time Chapter 17, a doctor who fanfic

New chapter blehhhh. This is difficult anyway I hope enjoy this chapter!

Josh: Hi

Me: -_-

Aaron: Louise owns nothing

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J,L,A: Daniel

Daniel: Wha- oh except the idea.

Me: Can't get good service these day's!

J,D,A: *Glare*

Chapter 17: Glogen returns

The Doctor sat on his bed in the TARDIS. "Why? Huh?!" He threw a picture at the wall. "Why do I have to loose her again?!" He heard a knock on the door. He opened it and saw Aaron and Daniel. "What?" He said a bit too harshly. "We wanted to know if you were ok. What's going to happen to Louise?" Aaron asked. The Doctor looked at them. "Sit down. This is going to take a while."

Young Louise we'll call her Louise Jr. Sat down at her desk. "Ok Everyone get out your art books." Her teacher said. "Draw whatever you want!" Louise Jr. smiled and got out her pencil case. She started by drawing a box then added windows and a light on top. She drew the TARDIS. "Louise!" She looked up to see Mrs Forest. She indicated her head to the doorway. Louise left the drawing on her desk and went outside with the teacher.

The younger version of the Doctor walked into the building and headed up to Louise's classroom. He opened the door and looked in. She wasn't there. "Mrs Bucket where's Louise?" He asked. She looked up. "Mrs Forest took her." His eyes narrowed and he ran outside. There he met the older version of himself and the boy's. "Where's Louise?" They both asked. Daniel stepped in. "Older Louise ran off and Josh followed her. Not sure where the young Louise is." The doctor (Young Doctor because no capital at the beginning of Doctor) sighed. "Mrs Forest took her. "NO!" The Doctor said.

"YES!" They looked up at the roof to see her standing there. She picked up Louise and showed her to them. "Mrs Forest she's..." The woman slowly began to change. One side of her face became burnt and the other painted like a clown. She lost her woman thing and had a clown costume on. "GLOGEN!" The Doctors both said. Glogen laughed and a dark cloud floated above the school. "Well... We're fucked." Daniel said.

"DOCTOR!" Louise and Josh ran up to them. "Oh there she is." Glogen said. He jumped off the roof and landed between Louise and the Doctor. "I'm not scared of you!" She hissed. He laughed. "Yeah but she is and you..." He picked her up and jumped back onto the roof. "Are scared of heights." He hung both Louise's over the edge. "Kyaaaa!" Louise screamed. "LOUISE!" Everyone screamed. Glogen became bigger. "Everyone stop! He feeds on fear! Calm down!" The Doctor said. Glogen laughed evilly. "Louise! Sing!" The Doctor shouted. "What this is no time for a sing song!" Josh shouted. "Of course it calms her down! Sing both of you!" The two Louise's looked at eachother. "This is me..." They both whispered. They closed there eyes and breathed in.

I've always been the kind of girl
That hid my face
So afraid to tell the world
What I've got to say
But I have this dream
Right inside of me
I'm gonna let it show
It's time to let you know
to let you know

This is real
This is me
I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be now
Gonna let the light shine on me
Now I've found who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I wanna be
This is me

Do you know what it's like
To feel so in the dark
To dream about a life
Where you're the shining star
Even though it seems
Like it's too far away
I have to believe in myself
It's the only way

The two Doctors stepped forward.

You're the voice I hear inside my head
The reason that I'm singing
I need to find you
I gotta find you
You're the missing piece I need
The song inside of me
I need to find you
I gotta find you

You're the missing piece I need
The song inside of me

This is me

You're the voice I hear inside my head
The reason that I'm singing

Now I've found who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I wanna be
This is me

"NOOOOOOOOO!" Glogen screamed he threw both girls onto the field. "LOUSIE!" The two girls landed away from eachother. The gang ran towards them. Glogen jumped down and grabbed Louise Jr. "If I kill off this one then poof goodbye Louise!" "NO!" Louise quickly got up and punched Glogen he let go of Louise Jr. and the two girls ran off to the side. "Louise you have to let go of your fear for him." The young girl fell to her knees. "I can't!" The older girl grabbed the younger. "Look at me. I'm you I turn out fine and no matter what I have stayed strong. Listen the Doctor he's going to have to leave for a while ok. But he's coming back. He always comes back!" The young girl looked at her Doctor who was staring at her. "See. I can tell you now. He loves us just as me as we love him." The two girls began to glow and Glogen screamed he began to walk towards them.

Louise Jr. stood. "I'm not scared of you! I have one thing you will never have. Friends, Family and..." She looked at her best friend. "The Doctor." Glogen glowed and dispersed. Louise Jr. fell to the ground. The two Doctors and the boy's ran over. "Louise?" The Doctor smiled. "Its ok she'll be fine." The younger doctors TARDIS dinged. "I have to leave now huh?" They all nodded. He looked at young Louise and kissed her head. "I'll be back." He looked at older Louise. "I can't wait to see you" He kissed her head then stood. He shook hands with the Doctor and said goodbye to the boy's. He then went back to his TARDIS and left.

They all brought Louise inside and went back to the TARDIS. They all walked in to see a woman standing by the console. "This is the TARDIS interface. I'm sorry for everything this has to happen i'm sorry Doctor." The doors closed and the TARDIS roared into life. Everyone grabbed onto a railing. "No! You can't!" The Doctor screamed. "What's happening?" Louise screamed. "NO!" Suddenly the doors opened and threw everybody out. The landed on the playground of the school. They all sat up to see a unit general and some soldiers.

"Ahhh Doctor." She said. The Doctor stood up and addressed them. The soldiers loaded their guns. "Woah woah! What's going on?" Louise said. "The Doctor has caused too many deaths. He must eliminate him." Louise stepped forward. "But think of all the lives he saved!" The general shrugged and some soldiers held back Louise and the boy's. "Ready." The soldier lifted their guns. "no" Louise said. The Doctor spread out his arms. "Looks like my times up." "Aim!" Louise began to struggle more. "No!" The Doctor braced himself. "Fire!" "NO!" Louise released herself from the soldiers grip. Everything happened in slow motion. Louise ran infront of the Doctor then fell to the ground.

The general shouted in panic. "Cease fire! Civilian hit! Civilian hit!" The soldiers let go of the boy's and they ran to Louise. The Doctor fell to his knee's and picked her up. "No!" He cried. "I was meant to stop this. I was meant to save you!" Louise smiled sadly. She lifted her hand up to his face. "S'ok. I need to tell you something..." He looked at her. "No. No you don't." She nodded. "Yes! Yes I do." He buried his head in her hair. "No..no." He mumbled. "Doctor I..." "No" "I...L..." Her breathing became more rapid and he lifted his head. "I ...lllooo" He bent his head down. "I know." He gently kissed her cold lips. As he kissed her, her body slowly went limp. He let go of her lips and looked her pale face. "no..." The boy's had tears in their eyes. "No." The TARDIS materialised around them. "NO!" The TARDIS began to drive off and Louise and the boy's disappeared from sight. "NOOOOOO!" The Doctor screamed.

Back on earth Louise's limp body fell to the ground and the boy's knelt beside her. Daniel felt her pulse. "She's dead." The general looked horrified. Josh's face was shadowed. He took a pistol from a soldier and aimed it at the general. He put his finger on the trigger and...

Done! This story is now complete! HAHAHAHAHAHA Bitches! I'm kidding I love you but yeah hope you enjoyed the story and I might make a sequel. but I am for sure making a prequel of when Louise first met the Doctor. Thank you 4 the support and now bye!