So, I feel the need to put a reminder about my review section in the story. I do have a set of rules in place for a reason. Here is the reminder about the rules concerning my review section stated in English/Swedish/Spanish/Welsh

Pst Hey
In case you don't know the rules relating to my review section here's a gentle reminder:
1.) Please do not hound for updates. You will be kicked from my page if you do
2.) Do not ask to have certain characters do things. It is not a part of the story. The only exception is if it's for a request
3.) Be kind and respectful to your fellow readers
4.) Please do not ask to have your pairing featured. The only exception is if it's for a request.
5.) Feedback/commentary/critiques are allowed.
The only reason why I have rules for my review section is to keep my review sections clean
Translacion en Swedish
PST Hej
I fall du inte vet reglerna för är min granskning-avsnittet här en skonsam påminnelse:
1.) vänligen inte hund för uppdateringar. Du kommer att sparkas från min sida om du gör
2.) frågar inte ha vissa tecken göra saker. Det är inte en del av historien. Det enda undantaget är om det är för en begäran
3.) vara snäll och visar respekt för andra läsarna
4.) Snälla fråga inte ha din ihopkoppling presenterade. Det enda undantaget är om det är för en begäran.
5.) feedback/kommentarer/kritik är tillåtna.
Den enda anledningen till varför jag har regler för min recension avsnitt är att hålla min granskning avsnitt ren
Translacion en Espanol
PST Hola
En caso de que usted no sabe las reglas relativas a mi sección de revisión aquí es un amable recordatorio:
1.) por favor no sabueso para actualizaciones. Usted será expulsado desde mi página si haces
2.) no pedir algunos personajes hacer cosas. No es una parte de la historia. La única excepción es si es para una solicitud de
3.) ser amable y respetuoso con los demás lectores
4.) por favor no pidas que tu pareja recomendados. La única excepción es si es para una solicitud.
Se permiten 5.) respuesta/comentario/crítica.
La única razón por qué tengo reglas para mi sección de revisión es de limpiar mis secciones de informe
Translaction en Welsh
PST Hei
Rhag ofn nad ydych yn gwybod y rheolau sy'n ymwneud â fy adolygiad Mae'r adran yma yn eich atgoffa'n garedig:
Wneud os gwelwch yn dda (1.) nid yn erfyn am ddiweddariadau. Bydd eich cicio o fy dudalen os ydych
2.) Nid gofyn i rai cymeriadau a gwneud pethau. Nid yw'n rhan o'r stori. Yr unig eithriad yw os ydyw i gais
3.) yn garedig ac yn barchus i eich darllenwyr cyd-
(4.) os gwelwch yn dda Peidiwch â gofyn cael eich paru dan sylw. Yr unig eithriad yw os yw'n ar gyfer cais.
Caniateir 5.) adborth/sylwadau/feirniadaeth.
Yr unig reswm pam mae rheolau ar gyfer fy adran adolygiad yw i gadw adrannau fy adolygiad yn lân

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Chapter Eleven

Sam waited out in the waiting room. He had spent some time in silence. He watched people come and go out of the waiting room. A deep sinking feeling sat in his stomach. He made it a point that he wasn't going to leave the hospital until he knew his nephew's condition. He didn't let the thought of his nephew dying on the job settle in his mind. James is a young lad. He has a long time to go before he can pass. Please don't take him from us. He begged silently in his head. He made a promise to Charlie a long time ago that he was going to look out for James. Right now, he wasn't doing a very good job. Sam leaned his head on the window behind him. He closed his eyes. He took a small nap while he waited.

"we're losing him!"

"someone get him stabilized!"

"Mr. Jones please stay with us!"

James eyes fluttered open briefly. He saw the incredibly bright hospital light above him. The ceiling began moving. It took him a bit to realize he was being carted off somewhere. He turned his head to the side to see a nurse looking at him. "you're going to be okay." She comforted. "we're taking you down to the surgery wing." He didn't hear the rest of her sentence after that. The room began to fade out from existence. James really couldn't feel his body anymore. His eyes slowly began to close. The voices drained out of his head as he fell back to blackness. James woke up in a meadow surrounded by white flowers as far as the eye could see. He sat up slowly. He felt someone sitting behind him. He turned to see Penny looking up at the sky. The wind blew through her blonde hair gently. He cracked a grin. "Penny!" he went to hug her only to have his arms go right through her. She disappeared into a cloud of white flower petals. James sat there confused. Charlie walked up to his son. "dad?" he asked. "I take it you aren't real either huh?" Charlie shook his head sadly. "where am I?" Charlie put his hand on James' shoulder. "the void. This is the between world. Right now your walking on that thin barrier marking life and death." James tilted his head to the side. "what am I doing here?" Charlie sighed. "you fell off a cliff to your death. Your injuries may be too great for you to handle James." James sadden. "so that's it?" His fist clenched. "the next step for me is to die?" James kept his gaze down. "what about Penny? What about mom? Uncle Sam? I can't leave them. I can't." Charlie hugged his son. "I'm not here to tell you that your as good as dead. Where you go is up to you." James leaned against his father's chest. "I want to go home." He whispers.

About four days go by…

Penny paced the floor of the waiting room. Her anxiety settled in. She tried to keep her composure. Ellie was already out cold next to Sam. She spent a grander part of the night before keeping an steady eye on Penny. Sam opened one eye. "Penny, why don't you sit down?" he suggested calmly. Penny shook her head. "that wasn't a suggestion, Miss Morris. That was "you have to" " Penny sat down in one of the chairs obediently. Today was the day that they were going to receive word on James. Hoshi kept Bronwyn at home. Ellie's head fell past Sam's shoulder causing her to wake up. She yawned looking at Sam. "any word on him yet?" she asked tiredly. Sam shook his head. He opened his eyes again. Ellie let out a groan of annoyance. "we've been waiting for a couple of days. They must know something." Sam stood up carefully. "I'll go and ask." He walked over to the receptionist counter. "excuse me." The receptionist glanced up at him. "I was wondering if you had heard any word yet on James Jones' condition." The receptionist motioned for him to wait one second. She got on the phone with one of the doctors in the ICU. She nodded hanging up. "James is out of the surgery but he's in a medically induced coma. They've been waking him up to check up on him and to administer pain medication." Sam nodded. "what kind of injuries did he have?" The receptionist pulled up James' chart. "the bones all on his right side were cracked, he also had a cracked skull with blood on the brain, and several of his organs were damaged." Sam backed up from the counter. "poor James." He whispered. "well thanks for the help." He walked back over to the rest of his team. He stood in the center of the waiting room. "James is a medically induced coma. According to the doctor all his bones on the right side were cracked, he also had a cracked skull with bleeding on the brain, and several of his organs were damaged." Ellie put a hand over her mouth. "poor thing." She whispered. Penny dropped her gaze. Guilt shot through her.

James was woken up again. Nurse Anacker, who had cared for Hoshi, stood over James. She was checking his vitals. She noticed James had woken up. "You're not supposed to be up for another hour." She murmured. James coughed softly. He tried talking but his throat came up dry. "hang on let me get you something to drink." Nurse Anacker walked briskly out of the room. She got him a cup of water. She went back into his room handing it to him. James downed it quickly. He welcomed the coldness he felt. "the medicine they gave me wore off." Croaked James. James felt really numb. A part of him was glad he couldn't feel the amount of pain he was in right now. "My family…are they here?" he asked. Nurse Anacker looked at his chart. "I'm not sure but I can ask for you." James couldn't move his head to nod. "please." He croaked again. His voice was more of a raspy hiss. Nurse Anacker used the phone at the nurses' station. "oh, he does?" she asked. "alright send them back." The receptionist went over to the waiting room. "Nurse Anacker has given you permission to go and see him." Sam smiled. "that's excellent news." Ellie got to her feet. She stretched her legs. "about time." Penny hesitated a little. Ellie tugged on Penny's arm. "come on you."

James heard his friends and family walk in. He gave them a weak smile. "I'm glad to see your awake." Whispered Sam. James looked like he was getting ready to cry. Penny rushed over to him. She tossed her arms around him sobbing into him. "Penny?" James looked down at her. "what's wrong?" he asked. "she's been really worried about you, James." Said Ellie. "I couldn't even get her to go to sleep at times." James managed to move his good arm around Penny. He let her lay on his chest. "I'll be okay." He comforted. "I'm in good hands." Penny just tightened her hold on him. "you could have died. It would have been my fault for not watching over you." James gritted his teeth as he moved his head. "Penny, it's not your fault. I couldn't move away from the rock in time." Penny touched his cheek. James could see the guilt in her eyes. James kissed her deeply. Penny ran her fingers through his hair feeling the stitches that set on the right side of his head. She looked at him again. One of his eyes were completely glassed over. "oh James." She whispered. James kissed her cheek. "I'll be okay. I promise you." He looked over at his uncle. "Uncle Sam will be staying with me until I'm well enough to come home. You need to go home and rest okay?" Penny sniffed. He smiled kindly at her. "I want you to keep an eye on my mom as well. She'll need someone to ease her mind." Penny nodded. "I will." James kissed her again. "good." James laid his head on his pillow. "Ellie, keep an eye on Penny." Ellie nodded. "I'll take good care of her. I promise." She added with a wink.

Ellie took Penny to Bronwyn's café. Sam stayed with James to watch over him. Penny walked into the café. Winter was at the kitchen station cooking. He had his back to them. "welcome back ladies." He greeted without looking at them. "hey Winter. Is Bronwyn around?" Winter nodded. He pointed upstairs. "she hasn't left the living room at all today. Hoshi is passed out in his room." Penny walked up the stairs carefully. She spotted Bronwyn staring at the wall. She had a picture clenched tight against her chest. "Bronwyn?" whispered Penny. Bronwyn snapped out of her daze. "oh, hey Penny." Greeted Bronwyn sadly. "I have some news about James. His condition is really bad. They said that his right side is completely messed up." Bronwyn whimpered. "my poor baby." Penny hugged her gently. "Sam is with him now. He'll keep us updated on how he's doing." Bronwyn nodded. She looked down at her picture. It was of Charlie and James standing in Charlie's boat with a fish between them. "I took this picture when they went on their last fishing trip." Bronwyn showed the picture to Penny. "the last one before James went to Cardiff." Penny took the picture from Bronwyn. James still had some of his teenage charm in the photo. "I'm thankful you came into his life, Penny." Penny blushed. "I'm glad he came into mine. He reminds me a lot of Charlie. I think you and Charlie raised him well." Penny handed the photo back to Bronwyn. "we have a spare bedroom if you want to use it." Penny nodded. Ellie looked at her phone. "I'll come back tomorrow. Right now Arnold wants me at the station." Penny smiled at her. "see you later Ellie." Ellie hugged Penny gently. "see ya Penny."