I hope this will be the final chapter for this fight (Goku vs. fatso) however I also intend to bring a new development into this one, a little twist in the plot. Hope you like. J
So this is what pain feels like…and this is what death feels like…well it could be worse… I mean for the most part I don't feel anything…and then it hurts again…hold on… I'm not dead am I?
Goku's thoughts were jumbled and colored with flashes of pain and relief. He felt somewhere deep inside that this is not what death ought to feel like. It should be clearer, simpler, pain and then relief, once and for all, not these endless, absurd flashes. It took him a while to realize what was happening, while the creature squeezed and smashed and wrecked his body, his soul, his conscience and with it all his considerable, remaining energy was trying to escape, be safe from this body because if it was inside it when it perished then the conscience would perish too. Meaning Goku would die, and that simply cannot be allowed to happen.
With one final heaving effort, Goku withdrew his soul from his body and let it float for a few seconds, and then he watched. The creature was laughing and laughing as its mega powerful hand lifted and crashed down on Goku's body over and over. He was now little more than a bloody tenderized steak, it was impossible to make out any features whatsoever. Goku was horrified with what he saw; all his hard work and effort had gone into that body, a body that was now being turned into a shish kebab. Why wasn't the creature stopping, Goku wondered? Why does it keep going on even though I'm already clearly finished? Goku realized it was because the white robed figure had not yet appeared to whisk him away. The fat creature was obviously not the most intelligent and figured it would simply have to beat him up until he perished. Goku wondered how to make him stop when suddenly an idea came to him, the creature could probably sense his astral presence and since he was floating right next to his body the creature figured that this meant he was still alive. It was a bit difficult to shield his presence in the astral plain but Goku managed and when its target seemed to vanish the creature let out a roar of satisfaction, turned around and went to sleep. Goku still had a mighty good deal of energy in his soul and slowly he channeled it to his body. At first he thought that his body had already been damaged beyond repair and that there was no point to all his efforts but nothing is beyond hope unless god so wills. Slowly but surely his muscles and skin started knitting together his bones mending and his blood finding its way back inside his newly reconstructed windscreen. What didn't kill him made Goku far stronger and it was as his soul and energy flowed back into his body that he realized just how much stronger it had made him. He stood his ground took a deep breath and powered up. It was with a mighty shout that he grew a hundred times stronger through kaioken level fifty; he barely felt the weary pull of such a great wave of energy. The creature turned around and shrieked in fear and frustration, was this pathetic thing never going to die? It thought.
It punched Goku with all its strength Goku leaped up and brought a spinning punch down from the sky. The creature flew back a dozen feet. And got up again, ready to exchange another series of blows, it was too powerful; it took all of Goku's strength to block even a few of its colossal punches. They crashed against his hands, and he knew he wouldn't last much longer than this. Somersaulting a few feet back he unleashed all his rage in the form of a hailstorm of energy through his hands. The creature however was not to be distraught, it roared, in pain or annoyance Goku did not know, and charged through the blasts of energy shoving itself against Goku's rib cage. Goku flew back another dozen feet. The creature reared itself and charged towards him again; mid-stride it leapt up and attacked in a crude impersonation of Goku's dragon fist. It seemed it was all over until a suddenly the creature fell back and cowered. Huge waves of energy were radiating out of Goku. He was concentrating all his energy all his remaining stamina, he had gathered every ounce of power he could, brought out all his potential and still the creature refused to fall. He could feel his kaioken leveling up…60…70…even further, he felt change coming upon his as his body could not bear the stress…improving…evolving…
The energy radiating out of him suddenly became unbearable to the creature that scurried back away from the blinding white light. Slowly as the light faded it became obvious that it was not simply a dazzling show. It was evolutionary adaptation in action. Goku's body could not withstand the amount of energy flowing through it. It caused his body to take all the power inside of him, which thankfully proved sufficient, and create a new better and far more powerful form for him. This form had slim aquiline features with not an ounce of fat, hard muscle through and through. With high energy content, sharp features and long jet black silken hair which fell to his upper back and around his shoulders. It was a form of pure magnificence of beauty and the creature that could not see would only sense the waves of energy it produced. He lurched forward hoping to finish it off quickly and end the fearful pain Goku now shed unto him. It punched and Goku caught its out stretched arms in his fist. He extended his other hand and pointed it on the creatures forehead, a second later a brilliant flash of light ended the pitiful creatures life.