Lets read some reviews
dveth chapter 2 . Mar 31
The author really needs to learn the basics of writing, because this story doesn't have any of them. No quotes for dialogue. Very little punctuation in general, actually. Run-on sentences. Reading this, I have no clue what's going on, and absolutely no desire to continue reading. This barely qualifies as writing, and I recommend potential readers avoid this entirely.
First off. Your one to talk you haven't even wrote any story's.
All you do is follow and read books so your comment is invalid so until you write something don't go around correcting people.
Secondly. I will admit I am not the greatest writer but I am on here to improve and I am taking classes so I will correct the chapters later on.
Lastly. Nobody no matter what somebody says will stop me from writing story's so keep on hating but you can't stop me.
