Sorry its been awhike ive had exams! will update again soon! please review on your thoughts of this chapter and how i can improve overall. thank you. please please please review even if its one word. please. :)
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ps tell me if there is any mistakes I wrote half of this it like 11:30pm and the rest this morning at 6am.
When the Doctor awoke he was lying on the floor of a small office. Sitting up, he straightened his bowtie and looked around the room. It was a typical office with filing draws, potted plants, a desk and a window view looking out over London. Sitting at the desk was River, she looked tired but happy, like for once in her life everything was at ease. The Doctor stood up, realising that Martha and Mickey had walked into the room. He sat down and watched with eager eyes as the scene played out.
"Hello Sweeties" said a smiling River, with giant hair, "My name is River Song and I've hear you're interested in buying a house?" She typed away at the computer in front of her.
"Oh yes, we heard from a friend that you're the best in the business. My names Martha and his is my fiancé Mickey." Beamed Marta.
"Oh congratulations! Well, I try my best. Some people would say I'm the best in the universe, but that's not exaggerating is it?" River laughed. "Anyway I think I have the perfect house for you two. It's only just came onto the market and I decorated it myself." River stopped typing and turned the computer screen towards the couple. Moving closer so he too could see, the Doctors eyes met a photo of The Smith-Jones' little blue house.
Martha gasped. "Oh River, it's perfect! Don't you think Mickey?" She's said turning to her husband.
"Yeah, it looks strangely familiar too. I think we'll take it." He exclaimed, clasping his fiancées hand.
The scene dissolved away and was replaced to one of River, Martha and Mickey standing in front of the house, they were chatting away. The Doctor moved closer so he could hear the conversation.
"Congratulations on the wedding! Anyway, now that you've looked round the house, signed the contracts and completed the full payment, this house is officially yours." River smiled and handed over the keys to the happy couple before continuing, "Just remember, you shouldn't remove the wallpaper due to it being old as it could be quite a difficult job. But if you do, just remember to have an expert there, like a doctor for walls or something." River laughed to herself.
"Um okay. Well thank you for everything Miss Song, we'll make sure to recommend your service to all of our friends." Martha smiled, shaking hands with River.
"Its Mrs Song," River corrected grinning, "and really? all of them?" she raised one eyebrow.
"Of course." Mickey nodded.
Once again the scene faded away, this time to black.
"Should we try and wake him? It's been an hour." Sarah Jane questioned. The group were crowded around an unconscious Doctor, who was lying peacefully on the Torchwood floor. At first they had thought everything would be fine, he was breathing normally and both he's hearts were working, so they had gotten cups of tea and reminisced about old times. Time had passed slowly but somehow they had ended up here, crowded around his body debating weather to wake him or not.
"I don't think so, we should let him wake up on his own." Martha said worryingly. "It would be the most medical thing to do."
"Oh heck with that! He's not human! I'm waking him up." Clara ran off down the corridor, returning a few minutes later with two buckets of icy cold water. Grinning at Jack she asked him, "Captain, care to do the honours?" She held out one of the buckets in his direction.
"It would be my pleasure Miss Oswald." Jack smiled.
"3...2...1...GERONIMO!" Clara screamed before her and Jack dumped the water on top of a unsuspecting Doctor.
He shot up in a flash, grabbed Clara and snogged her in front of the group. Clara pushed him away quickly before slapping him across the face.
"WHAT THE HELL." She shouted.
"Ahh I needed that! Thanks Oswin." The Doctor grinned. "To the TARDIS gang!" He motioned towards his blue box, "You know I've never really had a gang before, we should get T-shirts! Oh wait I have had a gang! Such a great team it was as well! Me, Queen Neffy, Riddell, The Ponds and Brian! Oh what fun! Good times! But no we really should get T-shirts, I know just the place! Barcelona! The planet not the country. The dogs have no noses..." He disappeared inside the TARDIS leaving the rest of them still standing where they were.
"Well? What are we waiting for?" Mickey asked. "To the TARDIS!"
Once inside the TARDIS the Doctor, after changing into a much drier and brighter suit, explained what had happened in his dream. This caused Mickey to ask the obvious question which they were all thinking. What exactly was going on.
"Really Mickey? You don't see it? It's staring you right in the face!" The Doctor questioned, grabbing Mickey's head and pushing their foreheads together.
"Is it your comically large chin?" Mickey asked, confused, gaining a laugh from Clara.
"No! Look the others know! Don't you?" He queered, looking around the group only to get a response of the shaking of heads and a chorus of nos. "Have I taught you nothing! Anyway if none if you understand I guess I could explain." He huffed. "Sometimes I feel I'm surrounded by idiots." The Doctor muttered under his breath thinking nobody could hear.
"Hey I heard that! Anyway I hacked into the Daleks pathweb and did a master delete on all the information connected with you, so I really doubt I'm the idiot in this situation!" Clara shot back in his direction, causing the rest of the group to star at her in awe and wonder.
"But that's impossible! I've been trying to do that for years! Clara Oswald I'm impressed." Jack said flirtatiously, moving closer to Clara.
"Did I mention I did it under a minute." Clara boasted, fluttering her eyelashes.
"Oi you two. Stop." The Doctor interjected, moving between the pair and steering Jack off in the opposite direction to Clara. "Yes, yes we get it, Clara's a genius blah blah blah. Anyway who wants to know what's going on?" He questioned again, trying to change the subject. In return he gained a large amount of frustrated yeses. Feeling he owed the gang an explanation he began.
"So basically last time most of you saw me I was the tall skinny guy with sideburns and a suit and then short after I regenerated and became the bowtie-loving madman I am today! Well then the TARDIS sort of exploded crashing me down to Earth and into the garden of seven year old Amelia Pond! Anyway she had a crack in her bedroom wall that held in Prisoner 0 and I told her I would fix it but then the TARDIS started flashing so I had to leave her while i saved dear old sexy, but i told her I'd be back in five minutes...which turned out to be twelve years." At this point the group all oohed in horror knowing that was bad. The Doctor continued, "yes bad, very very bad. I saved the day, with no sonic or TARDIS, and everything was good. I met her again two years later and we traveled together. Soon after with her fiancé and now husband Rory! Since then we sort of brought back her parents which had disappeared from existence and I married their daughter, River. Great fun-"
"Doctor. Does this story have a meaning?" Martha asked, annoyance in her voice. The group were sitting in the Tardis kitchen now, having slowly moved there when realising how long this story was going to be. Clara had made them all cups of tea to keep up there spirits, but it wasn't helping.
"Yeah, it getting late, are you nearly done?" Mickey looked at his watch which read 10pm London time.
"Yes, yes. Nearly done. Now where was I? Yes! So me, River, marriage. After that Rory and Amy went back home for a few years, but then we were all taken to the Dalek Asylum! Where we met Clara as Oswin Oswald and she sort of saved our lives..." He trailed off.
"Hey! I totally kicked the Daleks butts! Not to mention I sort of was a Dalek..."
"Then I fixed Rory and Amy's marriage as they were going to divorce and we travelled some more like old time! But." He stopped talking, not wanting to go on. It was to hard to admit what had happened. Slowly he continued. "But then they were taken from me, by the weeping angels. It's a fixed point in time. I can never see them again."
"Soooo why are you telling us all this?" Sarah Jane questioned, having not said much since her arrival.
"Because the only reason River would contact me in such a confusing way would be to tell me she knows who to get them back! You might all be here a while so I'm sure the TARDIS has put in your old rooms. I'll go set her up on the slow route to the Smith-Jones' house and we'll probably arrive by morning, London time."
"Wait why are we going to the Mickey Mouse house?" Piped up Jack annoying Mickey.
"To redecorate of course! Now go get some sleep we have a long day ahead of us tomorrow!" The Doctor grinned, pushing them all out of the kitchen and heading down to the console room alone.
