If you are reading this the you read chapter 1. There where grammar and spilling mistakes that i am shear most if not all of you have seen. There where to vary helpful people that pointed it out to me. So i went and toke a look...I was to lays to fix them so i am writing this for all my lovely reads. I have looked over this story so i hope it is better. But be wear there are still going to be mistakes in my writing. I am just not that good and i don't think i ever will be.
-dsa- thoughts
dsa dream/ memories.
_Ed's pov_
"Hay auntie" a voice said. -There is only one person i know that calls this bar owner auntie- I looked up from from my book thinking that i was going to see Roy, But in stead of Roy there was a boy not to much older then myself. he looked over to me. I chuckled to myself -Its just Roy in some fave ass disguise- The bar owner said something that made the disguised Roy smile. -THAT'S NOT ROY! HE NEVER SMILES EVEN WHEN HE IS IN DISGUISE!- The boy stated to walk to walk in my derision only to stop at my table. -Yeah he is definitely not Roy, Roy's taller-
"I hear you're a state alchemist"
I nodded in responds -How is this kid? he looks so much like Roy its not even funny.- he held out his hand to me.
"hello my name is Kira, whats your's?"
-Kira what a odd name- "Edward, Edward Elric, but you can just call me Ed"
He smiled again "It's nice to meat you Ed."
"It's nice to meat you too, by any chance do you know a Roy Mustang?"
A sad look passed Kira's face only to turn into a smile. "Yup! his my commanding officer" He said as he put both his hands on the back of his head and started to tap the ground behind with his right foot.
"That's cool...His mine two." -How can be happy about him being there commanding officer?-
His smile turned into a grin "that's awesome." He turned around then turned his head to look at Ed "well i guess i'll see you around." he stared to walk away now facing the bar lady. "Yo, auntie." he called out to her.
_later that day_ still Ed's pov_
I was setting on the sofa in Roy's office, he was doing his paper work.
-Why does Kira look so much like Roy? What's his last name? Why was he calling the bat lady auntie?- Even more question's where running throw my head.
"hay Colonel?"
"yes Fullmetal? Roy said still looking at his paper.
"Do you have a brother?"
Roy looked up from his paper with a surprised look on his face but it was soon replaced with a blank stare. "no, Why do you ask?"
"It's just that new kid."
"Hum, what about him?"
"It's just when i first saw him i thought he was you." I paused "I thought you where just wearing a fave ass disguise" I paused again "You too look so much alike."
They sat there for a bit. "i don't see it." Roy said faintly braking the silence looking back to his paper.
"There's more."
"What's that?"
"He called the bar lady auntie."
Roy dropped the paper he was holding. "Are you shear about that?"
"Yeah and when i said your name he got this sad look on his face."
Roy sighed. -Am i really going to tell Ed this?- "let me refers my answer."
A confessed look over toke my face.
"I don't know whether or not i have a brother." -Great i really am telling Ed this...-
"How do you not know if you have a brother."
Roy bite his lip "i can only remember my life from 9 years ago." He paused "the first mammary i have is setting at the kitchen table reading a letter then tell my auntie that i was going to become state alchemist."
I looked at Roy "Who what is from?"
"I don't know, They never left any hit's to how they where."
"Do you still have it?"
There was silence before Roy answered "Yeah, for some resign i keep it."
"Then you have a hit to who they are."
"How so?"
"The stile of writhing, everyone had there own stile weather they now it or not."
There was a knock on the door before Riza walked in followed by Kira.
"hello Lieutenant, hello Kira."
"Kira is hear Colonel."
"I see."
"thanks for everything Riza."
Riza turned around and stated to walk out of the office. as she passed Kira she put her hand on his head when she toke it off she said "no problem." then left the room.
I stared at Kira.
"You know the Lieutenant?"
"Hum...Yeah her father was my teacher for fire alchemy." Kira said as he walked over to the sofa and sat down.
"so Colonel why did you call the too of us here?"
"We have a mission."
"The three of us?" Kira said as he smiled.
"yeah, we are going under cover to find a murder. we will all be brothers. you two are going to be tween's, and i am the older brother that is also your garden because both parents have died."
Kira's smile turned into a grin.
-why's he so happy about that?-
"ed your name will be Sebastian mustang, kira your name will be Ceil mustang and my name is jack mustang.: (how can guess where i got the name's from? the first person to get it wright will bet a prize.)
that's all for chapter 2. what's going to happen?
chapter 3 will be out shortly.
