Okay, i guest reviewed on chapter 7. and here is what i say to it.
1: even tho doctors don't act like Dr. Flambow; Dr. Flambow does act like that.
2: it was the plan from the vary beginning that he has no sense of feeling, and it is because of something that happened to him that he does not have it. (hint...he just has to clap to do transmutation...that was said in chapter one)
3: I'm not writing this to be popular i am writing it for fun.
undercover names:
Ed-Sebastian mustang
Kira- Ceil mustang
Roy- jack mustang.
-dsa- thoughts
dsa dream/ memories.
~dsa~ reading in head/ writing
dsa other end of the phone
I walked over to my room and sat on the bed, on my bed side table there sat a phone (one of the old fashion one's where you spin the thing to dial the number) I picked it up and called Al.
Ring, ring, ring
"Hello?"
"hey win, is Al there?"
"yeah he is. I'll go get him."
For a moment there was no sound coming from the other end of the phone after the sound of it getting put down.
"Hello brother."
"Hay Al, sorry for not calling sooner."
"THAT'S OK, SO WHAT'S UP?"
"I'm on a mission with Roy and the new kid."
"NEW KID?"
"Yeah, he just became a stat alchemist."
"THAT'S COOL, WHAT'S HE LIKE?"
"he's so weird."
"HOW SO BROTHER?"
"well he's not telling us his last name."
"EVERYONE HAS THERE SECRETS BROTHER."
"Yeah, yeah I know that, but it's his last name, but he made some game out of it. It's like he wants us to know but he doesn't want to tell us."
"Yeah that's weird" there was a chuckle " that kind of reminds me of this kid I came across in Xing, what's his name?"
"his name, it's Kira."
"KIRA! YOU SHEAR THAT"S IT?!"
"yeah that's it, do you know something?" I asked a little confused.
"Well you remember that time i when't to Xing, right?"
"yeah, what about it?"
"well i ran into this water alchemist there how had this student..." there was a pause "his name was kira, i stead there for a bit, he would run into tree's and stub his toe's all the time and he would not say a word. then there was that time that the bottom of his foot was cut. he din't tell anyone, but ever night his teacher would check over him to see if he was hurt some where."
"that sound like him, he got cut in a fight today, it was down to the bone and he din't even feel it, so that boy did you ever see if he head a bloody book?"
there was no answer for a bit. "Yeah he did, he would always reading it when ever he was not training or getting hurt. or training on how to not get hurt so often." Al chalked
A smile grow on my face. "yeah that's him, did you ever catch his last name?"
"brother if he want's you to know then he'll tell you."
"yeah but i need to know. i have to find out more about him."
"fine i'll tell you." i heard the eye roll in Al's voice "his last name...oh what was it? ... Ah that's it, it's mustang."
I dropped the phone only to quickly pick it back up from the floor only seconds later. "you shear that's it!? your not just pulling my lag?" I asked frantically
"Why would i do that brother?"
"because you like to see your big brother suffer, that's why."
Al chuckled "that may be true brother but i promise i'm not pulling your lag with this." there was a pause "wouldn't the Colonel know if he had a brother?"
"Well he told me something, he never told anyone before i think..." i paused "he lost all members from the first 19 years of his life."
"That really sad."
"yeah, i wounder what happened that made that happen."
"you should call me when you find out."
i grinned "I will, so his last name is mustang?"
"i'm shear of it."
i smirked. "so Roy does have a brother."
"or it could just be a equidistant."
"yeah it could be, but i don't think so, they look to much alike."
"so now you know."
I jumped into the air with the sudden voice coming from behind me.
"brother how is that?"
"yeah, your Kira mustang."
"okay, never mind."
-other conversation from the last chapter-
"sorry Al i have to go, supper time."
"Okay brother, call again."
"yes i'll call again, but not to night."
"that's all good brother, good night."
"okay, good night Al.: there was a 'beep' from the other end of the line telling me that Al hanged up so i did the same. and kira and my self walked down to the dinner table.
chapter 8 done. .
sorry this update was so late.
R&R plz