Hello everyone, I finished chapter 3 and am currently working on chapter 4. Please review to tell me what you guys think.

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters, Hiro Mashima does. I only own the plot line.

This is my first time writing a fight scene, please review to tell me what you guys think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.

Chapter 3

I can't believe she's gone. Zeref, that bastard, took her. I couldn't save her if only Acnologia or whoever he is didn't stand in front of me and Gajeel's last attack. I clenched my fist and felt my body heat up before I addressed the guy standing in front of us. "Where the hell did that bastard take Lucy and who are you?" All he did was yawn at my question as if we were bored him. Before I could retaliate, I heard a low and dangerous growl.

"You've got some nerve to be yawin' like that. Now if you don't wanna suffer a major beatin', I suggest you answer the question about bunny girl and what Salamander asked." Gajeel finished with a scowl.

Acnologia just sighed "This is why I hate humans. You expect me to just answer any of your questions, please. You humans are nothing short of weak and pathetic. Getting all riled up by your emotions. And what did you say about giving me a beatin, on the contrary it will be the other way around. As if humans could beat me, the great Acnologia. Ha! The day that happens is the day fire boy gets a brain."

"Hey! That was uncalled for." I tried to retaliate until I saw stripper snickering. "Something funny ice prick."

"Yah! You're so dumb even the enemy knows it." Gray said laughing while everyone else sweat dropped.

"Why you, take this," I said then punched him right in his face.

"Hahahahahaha- Ack! You're gonna pay for that match stick." Gray yelled before punching me back and we started rolling on the floor fighting. We were both caught up in the fight to hear Erza coming towards us.

"Will you knock it off!" She yelled after hitting our heads together. Me and Gray refocused our attention on the enemy standing before us.

"This is why I hate humans." Acnologia said while sticking his hand out. "Black Dragon: Chaos Soul Spark." He said calmly. A black mist with souls and electricity came out of his palm heading for the Raijinshu who had no time to dodge.

"AHHHHHHHHH!" Bixlow, Freed, and Evergreen screamed. Everyone could only watch as they were electrocuted and then blasted into the trees before going unconscious.

"Lightning Dragon Wing Attack." Laxus retaliated after seeing what was done to his team. The speed of the attack gave Acnologia no time to dodge, but just before it him Acnologia, he disappeared only to reappear behind Laxus.

"Is that the best you can do, Black Dragon: Chaos Mist." The mist shot of of Acnologia and enveloped Laxus, suffocating him and making him remember his most horrible memories. "MAKE IT STOP! AHHHHHH!" He screamed sounding tortured. The stress of his brain and lack of oxygen left Laxus unconscious, but still suffering from recurring nightmare of his memories.

"LAXUS! Take Over: Demon Halphas!" Mira screamed transforming as she jumped in front of Laxus.

"Oh take over magic in the form of demons. Interesting, but it's still not enough. Black Dragon: Chaos Poison."

"Sorry that won't work," Mira smirked sucking in the poison. "You can't poison a...ACK!" Mira clutched her throat coughing.

"Did I forget to mention that is not normal poison. Only true demons can suck it in and unfortunately your human." Acnologia smirked watching the girl faint and return to her usual form.

"Mira-nee!" Lisanna screamed checking on her sister with tears in her eyes. "You keep calling us humans, yet you look just like one!" Lisanna cried out angrily staring Acnologia in his black eyes. Acnologia's smirk was replaced with a scowl and before anyone could react he kicked her so hard in the stomach that she flew and broke a few trees in the process, effectively taking her out of the fight. "I would watch what you say if I were you girlie." He said slowly and dangerously.

"Why? Are you afraid we will find out you're just a human playing dragon." Levy with so much venom that shocked everyone. Who knew the petite girl had so much strife in her. Acnologia's face only got darker and made a move toward her. Just as he reached her, Levy ducked out of the way reciting "Solid Script: Holy Light!" In that moment a light shined so bright that it could rival the natural brightness of the stars. The light caused Zeref to scream and cover his eyes in pain.

"Why you little...Ugh!" Acnologia was thrown back by a flaming fist and iron club hitting the side of his face. Just before he could regain his footing, he was pushed forward by a strong gust of wind and ice shards hitting him. Before any more attacks could be let on a portal was opened.

"Are you finished yet Acno-" Zeref stepped out of the portal opening his eyes, but stopped talking noticing Acnologia's position. Instead of looking upset he just sighed "Honestly you had one job to do." Zeref said releasing his magic freezing the remaining members.

"Well I would have been finished a long time ago, if you didn't tell me to fight in this insufferable form." Acnologia responded angrily while standing back up. "How did everything go with the girl?"

"She's more stubborn than I thought," Zeref said sounding annoyed. "Partly why I came back, I think she could use some motivation." He said smirking evily as he walked threw the group of frozen mages before stopping in front of a particular blue head. "She'll do."

This grabbed every Fairy Tail mages attention. "No! Please not her, take me instead." Makarov cried.

"Take any one of us but her" everyone cried.

"I wish I could, but she'll give me the results that I need" Zeref spoke sarcastically smirking at her. The girl trembled under his patronizing glare.

Just as soon as he came, he vanished with the girl and Acnologia, releasing the Fairy Tail mages from his magic. Everyone screamed in either pain, anguish, or both, They not only lost Lucy that day, but also Wendy.