Pokémon Journey I: Violet's Trial

Chapter 3: Encounters in Viridian Forest

Violet's Point of View:

I suddenly felt like someone was nudging against the side of me while I was in a dreamless sleep. I opened my eyes and looked over to my side to see my shiny charmander pushing against my arm. I jolted from my bed and looked over at the clock that was on the screen of my pokedex. It read five fifty-three. I heaved myself quickly from the bed and pulled on my sneakers. Amethyst jumped off the bed and helped me move out the things we barricaded the door with and put them back in their places as quietly as we could before we made up the room and grabbed our things, the key, and I picked up my pokemon in my arms before I rushed downstairs.

Once I made it to the bottom floor, I kept and eye out for the nurse, but I was relieved to see it was only her pokemon, the chansey. Knowing that I was more in the clear then I was before, I placed the keys silently on the desk and hurried to the front door. The chansey was busy itself with the work it was doing, and only dared to turn around when it heard the front door open, and I was gone.

I hurried over to the market next door with it now being six and its time for opening since travelers are always coming through at bad times. I saw the owner from when I was there yesterday open the door and held it open for me as I walked inside with Amethyst still in my arms. He had a warm smile on his face and released the door behind me once I was within the walls of this building.

"Good morning," he said as he stepped behind the counter. "Quite earlier for a stroll."

"I know, but it was the only way to get away from my brother and best friend." I quickly looked over the shelf of the pokeballs he had in stock and grabbed a few of them and placed them on the counter.

"Get away from them?" he questioned. "Does this have anything to do with your encounter with that Team Rocket woman yesterday?"

"Oh yeah," I rolled my eyes and nodded and pulled out some money. "So I had to barricade up my door last night too keep them out after they got here, and I know they are, so I could leave early with Amethyst and hurry off to the Viridian Forest before they got up." I sighed and paused for a moment, looking outside at the dawn. "My Mom freaked out and thinks I need body guards while I go on my pokemon journey, and those body guards are my brother and best friend who either lost or would lose to me in battle."

"You're her daughter," the guy tried to reason. "You mean a lot to her, she worried."

"And she's not worried about this happening to my brother?"

"I don't know what to tell you about that, but I bet it would be the same thing."

"Yeah right, she's never had a care in the world when we were little over what he did or who he was with, it was always me. I was the one that had to be constantly watched and never alone. I thought I was finally going to get some freedom with this journey across the Kanto region, make new friends, not be tied down by my mother's fears!"

"Easy!" He placed a hand on my shoulder. "No need to shout, you'll wake your friends next door, or someone will wake them for you." I sighed angrily but said nothing and nodded. My mother and the two boys were just getting too easily on my nerves.

"Anyway, ring these up for me please? I want to get out of town as fast as I can before the guys get up."

"Sure thing." He rung up all the pokeballs in my bag and showed me the price on them. "That'll be two-thousand dollars please."

At least money's easy to come by with a trainer's salary or else it'd be hard to get these items. I paid them man easily and watched him place them in my bag along with another ball I'd never seen before, it was white mostly in color and had a magenta purple color for the center line of it that also went around the button.

"Wait, I didn't pay for that," I told him. Amethyst agreed with a loud "Char!"

"Oh," he looked back at the ball he had in his hands and still shoved it in my bag anyway. "Its alright, I do this normally for trainers. When a trainer buys a certain amount of pokeballs of any kind, we normally throw in one of these primer balls with them. We don't sell them due to the fact that they're hard to come by. They apparently are supposed to commemorate some sort of event. Maybe the first pokemon you catch on your own?"

"Maybe, but you really gotta cut it out with the free stuff or else I'm gonna pay you back double what you're taking for me," I teased.
"Counting if I see you sometime in the future," he countered. "Your journey will take you all around the other side of the continent, and the gym leader, Giovanni Agostino, he's out doing business with a company and won't be back for months, if not a year, so take you time."

"Thanks…"

"The name's Luke, Luke Anima," he said.

"Thanks Luke, I think I might take you up on that offer. I'll be back one day, and I'll try to keep in touch when I can." The blond haired shop keeper chuckled and his crystal blue eyes shown. He led me outside to the colder morning air of the late spring. I set Amethyst on the ground and with my bag once again on my shoulder, I shook hands with Luke, who had kindly given me his number and times when I could call him on the way out.

"Oh and by the way Violet," he called out as Amethyst and I was heading down a back street to avoid the pokemon center. "When I see you again, I'll give you something free of charge." He jumped inside the tiny building before I could throw something at him for teasing me so. I didn't have time to hang around here any longer, I nodded to my pokemon and we quickly walked down the city streets toward the back of the city and toward the Viridian Forest.

Vince's Point of View:

I groaned as I finally rose from my bed at the early hour of whatever, but it was still too early for me to be up and Bulbasaur nudging me. I leaned over my legs in tiredness and yawned before I fell back into bed.

My bulbasaur apparently didn't like that and used its vines against me, lifting me up out of bed and dropping me onto the hard floor. I yelped in pain while I heard laughing off to the side. I opened my eyes and watched as my bulbasaur sat angrily on the end of my bed and on the other side was Alex with Squirtle and some other pokemon to his side.

It was small and kinda chubby like brown gold and dark brown colored figure that had squinted eyes and pointed ears. Its feet had three toes with claws on them, but one toe was on the heel of the food. Its legs were crossed and it almost looked like it was meditating. It had claws that also had three fingers to them, a thumb and two others. Its chest and shoulders were plated with thicker dark brown skin while the rest of it was a light brown gold color. Its pointed nose and tail were also in a still form while it was meditating (I think, don't quote me on that) but I think I saw a ghost of a smile come out of it from my fall.

"Hey Alex? Who's the new pokemon?" He calmed himself and looked over at the pokemon before he looked back at me.

"It's an abra," he replied. "A psychic type pokemon I found out on route twenty-two. I caught it this morning when I woke up around six-twenty."

"And Violet's still in her room?" I questioned.

Alex soured at the name of my sister and nodded. "Yeah, the door's still closed and I'm willing to bet she's still sleeping for another couple hours or so." He threw my backpack my way from the floor and stood up. "I'm going to get breakfast, come down when you're done." His two pokemon followed after him and I was left with Bulbasaur. My grass pokemon was laughing silently to itself on the bed.

"You know, you didn't need to toss me out of bed," I told it.

"Bulba! Bulbasaur!" it argued.

"I so would have gotten out of bed! I'm not Violet!" I hissed.

My partner turned away from me. "Bulba, bulba bulbasaur bulba."

I slapped my hand against my face. "Whatever Bulbasaur, I'm gonna get changed." I stood up from my spot and headed to the bathroom while my partner just sat there on the bed and curled up.

I splashed some water against my face and shook my head lightly. I'll show Bulbasaur, we'll get stronger then Violet; we'll prove her wrong, and I'll prove you wrong. She not the strongest, okay, maybe she is right now, but that won't last.

Alexander's Point of View:

I sat on the first floor of the pokemon center with my squirtle and abra on either side of me eating their meals of food. I was eating my own of a light meal since I wasn't particularly too hungry. Vince came down soon with his Bulbasaur as well and the two of them joined us at the table.

We all munched at our breakfast easily enough before we heard the nurse run downstairs in a hurry. She stopped before us out of breath and a look of panic on her face. "She's gone!"

I felt my heart still that moment. She's gone? Violet? Oh hell… not again…

"What do you mean she's gone?" Vince demanded.

"Her things are all gone! The door opens now and everything's back in place!" Nurse Joy said worriedly. "I asked Chansey if she had seen the girl leave earlier this morning, but she said she saw no one, but the door had mysteriously opened around six this morning. Then I saw her key on the counter. I hurried up to her room and I found the door was locked this time and I opened it to find the furniture back in place and she was gone! Nothing was left behind!"

"Shit!" I hissed. "How does she do it?"

"Cuz Sis is always ahead of us," Vince sighed. "If we hurry to Viridian Forest, maybe we can cut her off before she gets much further ahead of us."

"Then let's head out." I stood up from my spot and turned to Nurse Joy. "Thanks a lot for your help, but we gotta go." I brought back my pokemon into their pokeballs and rushed out the door.

"Wait up for me Alex!" I heard Vince call. I didn't dare wait another moment, Violet had a two hour head start ahead of us, we had to get going.

Violet's Point of View:

Viridian Forest was beautiful when we had stepped inside it; the sun and trees letting in small beams of light onto this forest floor, it was so beautiful…

Amethyst and I hadn't been here much more then a few minutes before some crazy bug catching trainers wanted to battle, I didn't mind, I knew that my Amethyst could handle them easily. Battles flew right by us as we kept winning, Amethyst really brought it all out, and it was amazing to see her in action. She was fast on her feet and could use her moves quickly without a moment of hesitation. It's hard to believe that we've only met a day ago.

The pokemon that we saw in the forest were mostly bug pokemon, with the occasional pidgey. We mostly saw caterpie, metapod, weedle and kakuna. I'd gathered all their data onto my pokedex and moved on my way with Amethyst as quickly as we could.

Though I couldn't help but think that over the time that we were in the forest, we were being watched, and I didn't mean by the bug pokemon that were all over the forest, up in the trees and attached to their trunks. I also don't mean the others either, it doesn't feel like my brother and Alex are watching, I'd be more paranoid if it was. This is something entirely different.

Amethyst looked up after a while and called out with a worried "Char…" I crouched down and rubbed her head gently.

"I know girl, I feel it too." I looked ahead to the large maze of woods. "Just be careful okay? We gotta keep moving forward." My pokemon nodded her gold head and we continued our walk.

A sudden flash blasted past us, narrowly tapping Amethyst on the top of her paw, like a gently slap. It froze us in our spots and we watched the streak jump out of the bushes again, I saw it was yellow in color before it fled back to the bushes; I never got a solid look at it.

I pulled out my pokedex and held it to the bushes. As it wiggled, I watched as the pokedex took a little longer to get the data, but it still came through, on the screen showed me a small yellow mouse like pokemon with red sacs on its checks and dark black eyes. I saw that there was a dent at the end of its lightning shaped tail and two large brown stripes on its back. Pikachu, the mouse pokemon. It has small electric sacs in both of its cheeks, if threatened; it looses a powerful electric charge from these sacs. Male and female pikachu can be told apart by their tails, females have an indent in them. Pikachu nests are rare to find and have only been seen in Viridian Forest and the abandoned power plant.

"So a pikachu eh?" I questioned. "Come have a battle with me then! If you win, I'll give you one of the things I have on me. If I win, you become part of my team. Fair trade?" The bushes rustled and out jumped the small mouse pokemon. She grinned at the two of us, eager to battle and play; an electric type would really come in handy when facing other water types like Alex's squirtle. I can't always rely on Amethyst, even though she is awesome, she needs some other friends and team members to help her in battle, and this lightning fast pikachu was going to be the one (if we can beat it that is).

The pikachu bolted forward toward my charmander and suddenly jumped over her head, swinging her tail at Amethyst's head. My pokemon jumped to the side to miss the hit and recovered quickly and I called out for her to use her ember attack. Fire brewed in her mouth and fired at the mouse, but she was too fast. She leapt out of the way and ran in circles around Amethyst. My charmander started to freak out and it took most of my effort to keep her from going bezerk.

"Don't worry about where she is, just pay attention to where she comes from!" I shouted to my pokemon. "She's trying to freak you out, don't let her do that to you Amethyst!" My pokemon nodded and slapped her face and kept her eyes out around her, waiting for the pikachu to attack.

Suddenly the illusion of the circle of yellow around my pokemon disappeared and a bolt of electricity shot at Amethyst. "Jump!" I yelled and my pokemon complied instantly. I then dove out of the way as the bolt hit the tree behind me and fried it, ending the poor thing's life, or at least really hurting it.

I looked around in the surrounding area, but the bushes the pikachu was using to her advantage to hide. She most likely was wearing down on energy from all the running and playing she's been doing. I just need to find her and hit with one blast from Amethyst and it should be all over.

I watched the bushes all around; any sign of moment would revile the pikachu's location. The air was stiff and tense with only the buzzing sound of the bugs around us in the forest and some of the light shouting from the trainers in the distance, they were always fighting with each other and others, or at least that was my discovery since I entered this place.

A small rustle I suddenly heard at my right. I turned and watched as the bush smoothed out, but I had seen it, and that was all I needed. "Amethyst! Torch that bush on the right!" My charmander jumped at the command and fired a brewed fire from its mouth and the bush was soon gone, at the same time a shriek could be heard. Once the flames died from my charmander's mouth, the pikachu was left, burned and knocked out.

"Yes!" I cheered and reached into my bag for a pokeball to catch it with when I ended up reaching for the primer ball. Well, Luke did say it was for special occasions…

"Go primer ball!" I shouted and threw the small white and pink/purple single stripe ball at the pikachu, which tapped it head and then suddenly opened and turned the pikachu into a white light and absorbed it inside the primer ball. The ball itself shook only once before it settled down and beeped. The ball didn't open again after that.

I gasped and hurried over to the still primer ball. I picked it up in the still stiff air and rolled it around in my fingers. I caught the pikachu… I thought softly. My first capture…

I turned back to my charmander who stood questioningly next to me. "Amethyst we did it! We caught a pikachu! We have a new team member!" Amethyst finally perked up at the sound of a new friend and the two of us quickly jumped for joy at that.

"Let's let out our new friend then and give her a nickname." Amethyst nodded and grinned and I released the pikachu from the pokeball. She still seemed a bit weak from the battle, but seemed to be doing better now then she was. I whipped out a potion from my bag and started to heal her. She squirmed for a moment before she settled down and looked up at the two of us.

"A deals a deal right pikachu?" The yellow mouse pokemon nodded her head and her eyes became downcast. "Hey, don't look so glum! Being on our team isn't a bad thing! It means we get to travel the region, the world! We get to battle new people that are powerful, just like when you faced us. You'll get stronger, and evolve when you're ready. Does that sound so bad?" The pikachu looked back up at me with tears welded up in her eyes.

"Pika!" she sniveled. "Pikachu pi pi pika…"

"Char char char." Amethyst translated to me since I wasn't on a connection level with the pikachu just yet.

"Oh you poor thing… you were abandoned by your family?" I picked up the pikachu in my arms and rocked her back and forth. "Well don't worry, we won't abandon you. I wouldn't be able to call myself a trainer if I did." The pikachu still didn't sound so convinced and I held her tighter in my arms.

"Pi pika chu chu," she muttered softly. I looked over at my charmander.

"Char, char char," she translated.

"Oh that's an easy question. It's because we're family now." The pikachu looked up at me and I gestured over at Amethyst. "I only met Amethyst yesterday and look how strong our bond is. It may take more time with you, but it will only take as long as you want it to take, you have to want to have friends and family and push back you're past. You have to want it Amber." The pikachu looked up at me in a confused manor. "Everyone's gonna do that when I name a new pokemon right? Eh, oh well." I looked back down at my new partner. "I thought the name 'Amber' would fit you due to your coloring and how bright an amber is, like you were when we first met you. If you don't like it I can come up with another…"

"Pika!" she shouted at me.

"You like it?" She nodded her head. "Then your name will be Amber." She smiled at me and I smiled back. "Things might be moving fast right now, but soon we'll have some relax time to rest and what not. Oh and by the way, I'm on the run from my brother and my best friend and their pokemon right now since I was attack yesterday and my Mom flipped. Just thought you want a warning for when they start chasing us, when they find us."

"Pika… pi pikachu chu pi?" Amber questioned me and crawled onto my shoulder as I stood up.

"Yeah, I'm actually surprised we haven't seen them yet. I know Alex has a squirtle, which you have the advantage against Amber, and Vince has a bulbasaur, which Amethyst has the type advantage against. And yeah, my mom does freak out too easily." Amethyst nodded furiously and we moved from our spot where we captured Amber and headed further into the forest.

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It was another hour into the woods and by then Amber knew much more about us then she had before, and I knew more about her and Amethyst. It was an overall learning experience for all of us to learn about each other, like, for example, Amber loves sour foods, like, really sour. She apparently really loves the iapapa berry because of how strong its flavor is (and its one of the few strong flavored berries in the area). The same went with Amethyst who really loved figy berries due to their spicy flavor. I'd have to remember to find some for them when we end up going into some of the shops.

"Pi pika pika pi?" Amber questioned as we continued through the forest.

"I honestly don't know, I thought you would know since you lived here for so long." I replied to her.

"…pika pi. Pikachu pi pi pikachu pi."

"That's okay, sure it would've been nice if you knew the way to the other side of the forest, but this way we'll get in more training," I explained to her. "Though the downside is that the guys could find us here, so keep your eyes out, and trust me Amber, you'll know them when you see them for the first time." The pikachu nodded on my shoulder and Amethyst curled into my arms some more.

The air suddenly turned stiff and I felt both of my pokemon stiffen both in my arms and on my shoulder. They sensed it too. Something was wrong and I'm willing to bet-

I screeched as I felt something shoot out of the area around me and grab my wrist. I started to kick and scream and Amethyst jumped from my arms to produce an ember when a water gun stopped her by dousing her in the face. Amber knocked the foe back and then vines came out and wrapped her up in them. She shocked the other foe, but it didn't do as much damage to that one and Amethyst was in no condition to help at the moment.

"For Mew's sake Violet, can't you just get over this? We're trying to help you here!"

"Then why does it feel like your trying to lock me up?" I snapped back and my captor didn't reply. I saw now that my wrist had been grabbed in Alex's hand and he was right in front of me, trying to grab onto the rest of my body to keep me from flailing. Amber was caught up in the vines of Bulbasaur and Amethyst was slowly now getting to her feet as she glared at Squirtle next to her.

"Come on, let's get through the forest." Vince led the way to a path that was just beyond the trees and Alex grabbed a hold of my other wrist and kept me nearly pressed to the front of his body and steered me in the direction of the path.

"You think I'm willing just going to follow you?" I seethed at the two of them.

"What choice do you have?" Alex questioned.

"A lot when I do this!" I swung my legs forward and back, using Alex's weight to keep me up with him holding onto me, and kicking him with the heels of my shoes in his groin. He nearly screeched in pain and released me on impact. Squirtle was at a loss for action or words as he watched Alex wither in pain while I picked up Amethyst and had her blow fire at Bulbasaur to release Amber. She jumped from the vines onto my shoulder and I took off into the woods in the opposite direction from the path.

"Violet!" I heard my brother yell. I ignored his call and continued to run toward whatever was before me. I suddenly felt feet and the ground separate from beneath me and watched as, in slow motion, I threw my pokemon to the side and took the full blunt of the crash and rolled on the ground until I crashed into something large and sturdy.

I instantly blacked out.

Alexander's Point of View:

Oh fucken hell did that hurt… Violet really did know how to hurt a guy that was helping her. I still felt the impact when both her heels hit me head on. I couldn't move or else I'd feel the echoing pain in rocket through my body once more. It was the most horrid feeling that I'd ever experienced in my life. Oh someone shoot me…

"Alex! Violet's hurt!" I heard Vince shout. I gently lifted my head off the ground and looked off in the distance. I turned toward my only pokemon out at the moment.

"Squirtle, let Abra out and then hurry over and help Vince in anyway you can, I'll be over as soon as I can." My pokemon did as I asked, releasing Abra to help me up with its psychic powers and it helped me walk to the clearing where Violet apparently tripped while running from Vince and Bulbasaur and hit her head on the tree before her.

Vince still wasn't anywhere near her though, nor was Squirtle or Bulbasaur. The pikachu and Amethyst both were dead set on not letting anyone near Violet, and made sure of it if we got to close by using ember and thundershock on our pokemon and us. We couldn't get near them.

I bent over in pain when I felt the echoing of my groin rocket through my entire body. "Shit!" I hollered when I felt another wave of pain flowed through my nerves. "Abra… help me get down, I shouldn't be standing up yet…" my newest pokemon complied and used its psychic powers to held me off my feet and onto the ground where I withered in pain.

"You okay Alex?" Vince questioned worriedly.

"Peachy…" I moaned. I breathed deeply, trying to calm my screaming nerves. "What do we do about them?"

"I don't know, either way we get hurt, those two have the type advantages against us and I bet Violet was thinking that when she caught that pikachu."

"So that's what that little yellow rat is." I hissed as I moved slightly on the ground. "We still gotta do something Vince."

"I know, Bulbasaur, vine whip!" The bulbasaur lashed out at the two pokemon before it with twin vines from the sides of its large bulb like seed on its back.

The pokemon protecting the girl across from us didn't take the attack lightly. Amethyst growled angrily and brew fire at the vines, effectively forcing Bulbasaur to call them back in an instantly.

"Squirtle use water gun!" My pokemon replied with the attack aimed at Amethyst. The tiny pikachu pushed the charmander out of the way and took the hit of water. In response it shook off the water attack like it was nothing and fired back a powerful thundershock. It electrocuted my squirtle and paralyzed Vince's bulbasaur, even though it was a grass type. The two fell to the ground in pain with me.

"All we have left is your Abra, Alex," Vince said hesitantly.

"I know, and I'm not about to lose the last pokemon I have. Just let them be for now, we'll make a fire and stay here for the night. Besides," I hunched over and rolled onto the ground. "I'm not going anywhere."

"Roger." Vince pulled off his back pack and pulled out the blankets we had brought with us. He set them out and threw one over in the direction of Violet for the pokemon to cover her with. It landed at her pokemons' feet and they draped the blanket over her before curling into her sides, but they stayed away to watch us.

Vince threw a blanket over my way and Abra helped lay it over me while I rested and recover from my pain. Vince then took off to the woods and I watched him leave, probably to make a fire later tonight.

Violet's Point of View:

Damn, my head feels like its spinning. I slowly sat up from where I was on the ground and through blurry eyes that soon became clear, I saw where I was. I remembered last that I was running away from Alex and Vince after they had found me into the Viridian Forest, just after an hour or so of my capture of Amber. I fled after I had caused some pain to Alex's groin area (to put it lightly) and I remember running off with Amethyst and Amber right before I tripped and hit the ground, and then everything had gone black.

"Pika!" I suddenly turned to my side and watched my pikachu jump from her spot near the fire and rush over to me. She rubbed her head into my chest and I hugged her back.

"Char!" Amethyst then ran over herself and cling to my chest as well, just next to Amber. She started to cry a bit as she held onto me and I pulled them close.

"Amethyst… Amber… I'm sorry; I didn't mean to worry you…" I sniffled myself and pulled them off the ground and onto my lap and lowered my tear filled face to their bodies as we cried together.

"So you finally woke up Sis, glad to see you." I jumped from my spot and looked on the other side of the fire, there was my brother sitting on a blanket. His bulbasaur was out cold next to him, I saw the scorch marks on its body and vines while I watched as painful electricity glided across its body, it didn't look like it was doing too much damage since it sleeping, but I bet it wasn't the most comfortable feeling.

I looked over at Alex also on the other side of the fire; he was down for the count and under his blanket, probably sleeping off the pain in his grown when I smashed it. Next to his was his newly acquired abra that meditated off to the side, but I saw its eyes were looking right at me. On the other side of Alex was his squirtle. It didn't look in good shape at all with large bolt of electricity jumping from one side of it to another. I could tell easily that Squirtle and Bulbasaur were both paralyzed.

"Hello? Earth to Violet!" I jolted and looked back over at my brother.

"Yes?" I questioned him.

He shrugged. "You spaced out Sis, just making sure nothing was happening." He then grinned and his face went dark on me in the light of the fire. "Or maybe you were looking over at Alex cuz you like him." I jumped at the thought and grabbed my bag and Amethyst while Amber jumped onto my shoulder.

"No way in hell." I hissed and wrapped the blanket around my body.

"Where're you going? You can't just leave!"

"Can't I?" I turned back to him and questioned harshly. "If I'm not mistaken, both Bulbasaur and Squirtle are out, not to mention Alex's probably in a lot of pain right now, even in his sleep. I bet his abra is recently caught since I didn't see it yesterday, and I don't think it can stand up to my two pokemon by itself. So I think I can leave if I want to."

I huffed to him and took off into the woods in the dark night. With the woods as thick as they are and how dark the area was now, I had a hard time moving about, but if I didn't move now, I'd be worse off in the morning.

"Char!" Amethyst called out and jumped from my arms. I watched her focusing in the dark and watched as the flame on her tail became brighter. I could see much more now and I could safely walk where I needed too.

"Pika pi!" Amber cheered.

"Yeah! Good job Amethyst, good girl, now let's get as far away as we can tonight, we'll rest at dawn. Amber," I turned to face my newest member. "Get some rest for now, we'll have you watch in the morning for the guys so if they get too closer, we can get moving and avoid them."

"Pi." My pikachu nodded and it crawled from my shoulder into my arms and quickly fell asleep. After I was sure she was settled, I followed after Amethyst along the thin path she made out for us in the night.

Witch's Note:

Chapter three down, who knows how many too go? I really don't myself since I'm just gonna keep going until I hit a good place where the story line is over, and that's after I hit most of the stops on this game from beginning to end.

The only thing in this chapter that bothered me was when Alex got heeled in the groin, I know that had to hurt, but was he in enough pain? I mean, I've caused that problem enough to know how it hurts, but I'm a girl, so I don't know if I explained it well enough, the closest thing I know to relate it to is cramps when we have our 'special time of the month'.

What do you guys think about that? Please send in your answer with you Review to me! And please send in Questions too!

Love you all and see you next week!

Halloween Witch