Darkened Jealousy

by Darkest of Storms

What happens when Ren sees Shou and Kyoko together and confronts her while they're acting as the Cain siblings? What will happen when he loses his self control, and when Shou comes into the mix of it all? R&R, My own continuation of Chapter 194 in the manga. Hope you like

10. Authors Note

Authors Note.

I'm sorry guys, but I don't know if I should continue this story anymore. I'm getting lots of negative feedback from random people, and I don't have to sit here and take it. Want to know why I was sent to the hospital? I was having suicidal thoughts. I was extremely young when I wrote this story, so God forbid I not write a story up to your levels.

People, start thinking. I understand, my characters are OOC. I get it. I'm not a perfect writer, and I'm barely grasping a good plotline. I'm close to discontinuing this fiction, and I will just write my Vampire Knight fanfiction. I already had no self-confidence in this story, but now, I just wanna curl up and die.

Thanks for ruining my day, to those of you who were ranting on a 12 year old. I was really young when I started this story, and when I wrote most of the chapters. Thanks. If I discontinue, I will most likely, (99%) NOT continue writing Fanfiction for this anime series.

So please, give constructive criticism and stop being jerks. I'll make the story better, a'ight. I realize how crappy it is.

~Stormy~