Requested by madosaya. I've been wanting to do Hitomi for a long time so thanks for the request! Remember, if you want to see someone become a magical girl, just make a request and Kyubey will make it happen!


So this is the music humans are so obsessed with. Kyubey thought to himself. Why do they love it so much? I fail to see what's so great about it.

The incubator was sitting in a huge ballroom, with a granite floor and a domed roof that was supported by eight gold and silver pillars.

Dance lessons are supposed to happen here. Kyubey thought. I wonder why humans would waste their time on something so stupid. But I'm not here to marvel on man's strange fascinations. There are supposed to be 15 young girls signed up for this class. I'm willing to bet one of them will make a contract with me! I don't care which one it is. I need a magical girl to kill Walpurisnaught and fast.

The first girl walked in. There were tears in her eyes, as if she had been crying. She had long green hair and green eyes.

Wait a minute. Kyubey thought. That's the girl Madoka and Sayaka hang out with! Her name is Hitomi if I can remember correctly which I can.

"Miss Hitomi?" the teacher said. "Are you alright."

Hitomi blinked away tears. "No." she admitted. "One of my best friends just died because of me."

The teacher blinked. "You mean Sayaka Miki?" she asked. "I heard she committed suicide. Either that or it was murder."

"No." Hitomi said. "It was because of me. I confessed to a boy she had a crush on and we started going out."

"Oh." The teacher said. "That's rough for anyone. Let's sit down and talk about it."

Hitomi nodded and the two sat on a marble bench.

At that moment however Kyubey stopped listening. She's extremely emotional because Sayaka became Octavia! Kyubey realized. Perhaps I should recruit her to become a magical girl. No, I will recruit her. It should be easy, once I tell her Sayaka was a magical girl as well.

Thirty minutes into the class Kyubey made himself visible to Hitomi who stopped dancing and gasped in horror. Once she had stopped the rest of the kids did as well.

"Hitomi?" the teacher asked. "Is there something wrong?"

"Wha-What is that thing?" She gasped.

"What thing?" One of the girls asked.

Hitomi pointed to Kyubey. "That thing! Don't pretend you can't see it!"

"What thing?" one of the girls asked while tilting her head.

"Hitomi." The teacher said looking relatively worried. "Go lie down. I think you might have a fever."

Hitomi's mouth opened but she quickly closed it. She walked over to the place where Kyubey was and sat down.

"I know you're there." Hitomi whispered. "Why can't anyone else see you? And what are you?"

"I am invisible to them" Kyubey said. "Only you can see me."

"Oh… I guess that kinda makes since." Hitomi said. She peered down and began to pet Kyubey on the head. "What are you?"

Kyubey flicked his tail. "My name is Kyubey. Nice to meet you Hitomi!"

Hitomi looked startled. "How do you know my name?" she cried.

"I saw you with Madoka and Sayaka." Kyubey said.

Hitomi jumped. "You knew Sayaka?"

"Of course I did!" Kyubey said. "She made and a contract with me and became a magical girl. And now it's your turn."

"Wa-wait a second." Hitomi said. "Are you saying I can finally stop feeling guilty for Sayaka's death?"

"You can! And all you need to do is make a contract with me! But let's take this conversation outside." Kyubey said.

"Teacher." Hitomi said. "Your right. I'm not feeling too good. I think I'm going to go outside."

Her teacher turned around. "Ok." She said. "Be careful."


"So." Hitomi said. She and Kyubey where outside of the ballroom and now in a garden full of roses. "Let me get something straight. If I make a contract with you I can stop feeling guilty about Sayaka's death?"

"That's right!" Kyubey said. "And all I ask in return is for you to fight witches! You know you could always wish for something else."

"No." Hitomi said. "I want to stop feeling guilty about Sayaka."

"Very well then." Kyubey said.

Hitomi winced as Kyubey ripped out her soul turning it into a soul gem.

"Accept it." Kyubey said. "This is your fate now."

One week later…

Kyubey watched as Walpurisnaught shattered Hitomi's soul gem therefore killing her.

Oh well. She was just a sacrifice anyways. Although I do have to thank her for getting rid of Octavia for me. Now. Time for the next Magical Girl!