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Done with that. So here's another chapter


Rin was bored. It was a hot day and the sun was shining brightly from the blue sky. Rin wiped the sweat off his forehead. He felt like he could die any minute in this heat.

"Rin" Yukio said. "You should do your homework."

Rin sighed sliding a little further into the chair he was sitting on. "How can you do it?" he asked. Rin himself found it way too hot to even think about doing his homework but apparently Yukio was thinking differently.

"It's not that difficult" Yukio said smiling. "You could do them now while I'm here to help you"

Rin just shrugged. "No thanks" He said in a tone that showed how little he cared about the homework. He was bored and needed some excitement for today. He felt like he was stuck, like he had been locked up and couldn't seem to get out. He needed something to do. He wanted to go exorcise some demons or something.

That was when a beautiful sound hit his ears. It was the sound of Yukio's cellphone. Rin smiled as Yukio picked it up and answered the call.

"Yukio Okumura speaking" Yukio said. Someone spoke in the other end. Rin ouldn't hear who it was or what they were saying but they sounded like something really bad was going on. Yukio sat up straight. "Where?" he asked. The voice answered and Yukio hung up.

"What is it?" Rin asked. his tail appearing from under his shirt moving around and showing just how excited he was.

"An attack from some mysterious unknown type of creatures that doesn't respond to any weapons." Yukio said. "At least not ordinary weapons."

"Sweet!" Rin grinned. "Can I come along?" he asked.

"You may as well" Yukio said. "I might need some backup"

Rin was surprised. on a day like today he'd expected that Yukio would force him to stay back and do his homework but from the looks of it, this was way too serious a matter for Yukio to actually argue with him.

The place was peaceful and it sure still looked peaceful but as Rin and Yukio appeared on a hill near the village they were supposed to help Rin froze feeling chills running down his spine. He looked worried at Yukio who stopped at that same moment.

"What's wrong Rin?" Yukio asked watching his twin brother closely.

"I don't know" Rin admitted. "But something's not right"

"Indeed" Yukio said fixing his glasses. "It's way too peaceful here"

Rin sighed. It wasn't exactly what he meant but whatever. It really was too quiet. according to what Yukio had heard on the phone this place should be covered in blood and full of screaming people running around in a panic.

Yukio walked down to the village with Rin in toe. He watched their surroundings and looked for a possible attack. He also looked for someone he could talk to and ask about what had happened around here.

As Rin and Yukio reached the village Rin stopped. Yukio turned to look at him. Rin was pale and looked terrified. Yukio had never seen him like this before and it caused him to worry.

"What's wrong Rin?" he asked again.

"I don't know" Rin repeated.

Yukio was worried now. Really worried. What was it about this place that scared his twin so much that he would actually show it?

They continued to walk into the village. There was nobody around. The place was deserted.

"Hello?" Yukio called out. There was no respond. "Hello?" He tried one more time but there was still no answer, no reaction, no anything. It was just Yukio and Rin alone in a deserted village. "Maybe it's the wrong place." Yukio mumbled as he walked into a house.

"Yukio!" Rin called from the outside.

Yukio turned around to see Rin stand with something in hand. After taking a closer look Yukio could tell it was a doll. It was homemade. It had blonde hair and was wearing a pink dress. It had most likely belonged to a little girl who was now gone.

"What's with that?" Yukio asked.

"I found it on the ground. From the looks of it, the doll was dropped" Rin said.

Yukio went in to check the house. It was dark and it looked like those living there had been packing up in a hurry and left. the front door was wide open when he'd entered the place.

Rin now came in and walked around as well.

"They were in a hurry" Yukio said.

"Looks like it" Rin responded. Then he gasped causing Yukio to turn around.

"What's wrong Rin?" He asked the third time.

"I knew there was something wrong with this place" Rin looked at Yukio. his face was gray and he looked more scared than ever. Yukio knew Rin, he knew that Rin hardly ever got scared. Rin wasn't weak at all. "There is something going on here." Rin pointed to a corner of the house. "I thought you said they weapons they were using were ordinary weapons" Rin continued.

"I did. That was what I was told" Yukio said.

Rin bend down and picked up a small figure. A house demon. A small one of them and it was lifeless. Yukio could tell that it was dead, He could tell it had been killed, but he couldn't find a single wound on it's body.

"What could have done this?" he wondered.

"I don't know" Rin mumbled looking down at the demon. "But I think we are in way over our heads"

Yukio nodded his head. he'd realized that as well.

"We take the body back with us" he said. "Let's hurry"

The Okumura twins went back the same way they came. Rin carried the body of the dead demon in his arms. As far as the twins knew demons didn't usually killed each one another just like that. There was usually something more to it but this was just wrong. If this demon had been killed by another demon it would've left some kind of injury on it's body. And the same if it was an exorcist who had done this. But Yukio had been informed that there was no exorcists in the village so what could have caused it?


Thanks a lot for reading

Jackie ^_^