SO, I edited a part of the story that appeared in the first one. I think it turned out really good though! Has way more detail.

I'm trying to get these chapters done in four days, but I have a lot of crap going on so I apologize ahead of time for not updating on time and updating late. I'm going to extend the chapter update time to five days after this.

Shion tried with all her might to summon out her keyblade glider in her hand, afraid to do it the old fashion way with having the risk of loosing her keyblades to the lanes between. She didn't realize how fast she was going until she was falling from the sky into a new world she's never been to and her armor deactivated. She managed to turn so she'd land on her arm and not damage her spine.

The impact was fast and hard. The ground below her shattered along with her right arm. Shion screamed for a few seconds until the pain started to die down unexpectedly. She sat up and looked down at her arm to see the darkness healing it without her knowing. Before long it was numb but she couldn't move it without it aching.

After hearing a number of gaps, the darkness disappeared and she looked up to see who it was. There was a group of animal people wearing clothes, were looking at her. "Who are you?" the female duck wearing a violet ball gown like dress asked.

Shion went on her knees, groaning when she moved her arm suddenly. "My name is Shion," she answered for a moment.

"Why are you here, sweetie?" The mouse with the pink ball gown dress question kindly seeing that she was hurt.

"I don't know," she admitted, not wanting to tell of the events before. "I was searching for someone to teach me. . . . something because the last teacher didn't like me at all and he didn't bother hiding it."

"You're from another world, aren't ya." A male dog dressed in armor covering half his clothes figured out.

Hesitating for a moment, Shion nodded. "Yes, I came here from the world Land of Departure."

"So that means you're searching for someone to teach you how to use the keyblade!" The male duck in a magician costume concluded.

"Yes, do any of you know of someone?"

"I can teach you." The male mouse, who looked like the king, offered. "But I have a couple question I'd like to ask you, if you don't mind."

"Not at all, sir." she replied politely.

"Why did your previous master not like you?"

"I wouldn't go as far as call him my master," Shion said. "He didn't even teach me anything, his student went behind his back to teach me. The day before I left I found out he wouldn't train me because I have darkness inside me."

"And you don't think someone should be judge by the darkness they posses?"

"Of course not!" She exclaimed. "Just because someone has darkness inside them doesn't mean they're evil!"

The king nodded his head in thought. As he helped the girl stand on her feet, he requested, "May I see your keyblade?"

"I have two, sir."

"Then both of them," after looking at how her right arm still hanged limp, he added, "if you can."

Shion closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She cringed in pain as she tried desperately lift her arm. Though it made it no difference with her effort she was putting into it, in a flash of light both keyblades appeared. In her left was the one of light, as its main color is white with hints of grey. Its shaft displays two hearts while the handle is shaped like an angel's wings. The teeth looked like it could be the symbol for light. Then there was the other one.

On the right the entire keyblade was black with the hilt being bat-like wings pointed downward. A chain-like design runs up the length of the blade with a blue gem in the hilt. The teeth of the keyblade looked like it could be the symbol for darkness.

"Which one did you learn to summon out first?" The king interrogated again.

"The right one," she answered truthfully. "About four years ago I started to be able to summon out the one on the left."

The king nodded his head once. "Well, I won't be able to teach you how to fight with two since I can't either, but. . . ." He smiled greatly as he said happily, "I'll teach you with the one blade."

"Thank you so much! When can we start?"

"Tomorrow," he insisted as he held out his hand. "My name is Mickey, it's nice to meet you Shion."

That night Queen Minnie and the Duchess Daisy led the young keyblade wielder to her new room. It was simple and plain with only a bed, dresser, and a closet slightly big enough for her to walk in. "Thank you," Shion thanked graciously as she sat at the end of her new bed.

"You're very welcome." Queen Minnie replied with her voice in a happy tone. "Now let's see what I can do about your arm-"

"Please don't," Shion began as she jerked it away with a wince. "I've tried to heal it with light but it started to hurt even more."

"Maybe you should get some sleep instead." Daisy advised. "You'll need it for your training tomorrow."

Shion giggled lightly. "Okay, I will. Thank you so much." The other two left her alone and closed the door behind them. As they did, Shion laid down under the covers of the comfy bed muttering with worry, "Vanitas, what happened after I left?" She drifted off to sleep when a portal appeared in her room.

Vanitas walked through letting out the breath he was holding. "Good, she's safe," he mumbled as he sat on the floor by the sleeping girl. He stayed there watching her sleep for a few minutes before sighing. "Maybe one day, when the war is over, we could see each other again." He stood up and kissed her cheek unconsciously. He left without another word as Shion opened her eyes for a moment and muttered his name before going back to sleep.

"Fantastic!" King Mickey complemented the young keyblade student as she executed yet another difficult move. "You're very talented Shion."

"Thank you, Your Majesty," Shion thanked breathlessly. "It's just so much fun. I didn't expect it to be."

"And I didn't expect you to get it on your first try," he admitted. "It took me a few weeks to get it down. By this rate you'll be better than me!"

"I don't think so," she said slowly as the others walked to her. "I'll never be better than you."

"Are you kidding?" Donald quaked as he stood beside his king. "If you spared against each other right now, you could probably beat him!"

"Thanks for the loyalty," Mickey teased as the others laughed at Donald's panicked expression. "Since you've got done so quick today and there are a couple hours before night, why don't you go to another world?"

"Really?" Shion asked incredulously. "You're letting me go without any supervision?"

"We trust you Shion," Queen Minnie answered for her husband. "But since you are a child, you'll have a curfew. How about three hours after your training's done for the day?"

"That's fine by me!" Shion complied. "Thank you so much." She left knowing exactly where she was going.

Back at the place where she met Vanitas, Shion called out his name trying to find him. When she was about to call his name for the last time, someone placed their hand over her mouth. "What are you doing back here," he hissed in her ear.

Shion pulled away from him and turned to face him with a frown on her face as she saw the mask covering his face. "I came to get some answers."

"Answers?" Vanitas questioned innocently. "About what?"

"Who is Xehanort?" Shion countered. "What does he want?"

He sighed. "You're not going to let this go, aren't you." When she shook her head, he explained. "Xehanort is a keyblade master who's heart is nothing but darkness. He is a bad man, evil, man that will do whatever it takes to get what he wants."

"What does he want?" she snapped at him irately.

"Why should I tell you?" he countered. "You shouldn't have come back any ways!"

"I came back to see you!" Shion shouted in anger. "And you owe me!"

"For what?"

"Because of you, my arm was shattered! I tried to heal it back to the way it was before but I can't. Want to know why it was your fault? Because you summoned out my armor and because we were out of range, it deactivated in the air and I couldn't reactivated. I'll ask again; what does he want?"

Vanitas paced back and forth before saying, "He wants to take over all of the worlds. He also wants the ultimate weapon, the x-blade which is created from light and darkness. I'm the darkness he needs for that plan. And. . ."

"And what?"

"He knows of you," Vanitas replied reluctantly. "He dropped off this kid at Land of Departure and the master there had made a comment to him about how he hoped the kid, Ventus, would be a better keyblade wielder than you."

"Eraqus. . ." Shion growled as the darkness appeared in her hand. "He doesn't know that I can summon two keyblades so that secret is safe from Xehanort. Luckily all Eraqus saw was the darkness in my heart so he doesn't know I also have light which I can use to my advantage-"

"Wait," Vanitas demanded as he realized what she was thinking. He grabbed her by the shoulders. "Are you seriously thinking about what I think you are?"

"I can beat him." Shion confirmed. "Today I trained with a master and I was able to get a move that took him weeks to do in a day."

"You can't beat him though," he denied. "Not yet anyways."

She shoved his hand off her in disgust. "How would you know?"

"Because I fought him," he retorted. "He wanted to see how strong I have become. I didn't get a chance to attack because he attacked me. In that one move, he won. Stay away from him for now."

"Only if you come with me," Shion insisted, her anger slowly going down. "We can jump from world to world to try to hide from him."

"You don't get it!" Vanitas yelled as he tried to reason with his friend. "I have darkness in me like you, but you have light inside you as well. I'm evil while you're good. We can't stay like this."

"We can try." She pushed desperately, not knowing why. All she knew was she didn't want him to fight that man or stay with him any longer, but was that the real reason? "Can't we?"

Vanitas sighed in defeat. "How about in a few years when you, when we, are stronger, we'll challenge him together, alright?"

"So we can see each other again?" Shion pestered.

"Yes," he said. "In fact, I'll see you tomorrow, same time, ok?"

"If I get my training done at that time, then okay, I'll see you tomorrow." Shion summoned her armor and glider and summon a portal to go back to the world Disney Castle.

It's kind of rushed because I did rush it for the last section of this.

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