Special Author's Note 3:
This is just another note from me. Hi. It's been awhile since I did one of these.
I am having trouble with the second gym battle. I want the battle to actually be GOOD. I have been getting a lot of feedback about how the battles are not described enough so I am going to go into uber detail this time. Tell me if I over do it, okay?
Plus, I have recently gotten an idea for another Pokémon story. One totally unrelated to this one. Once I iron out more of the details for that I will let you know. I think it is a fun idea, though also rather serious.
Do people like this story? I am an insecure writer- or an insecure puppet controlled by fictional characters, really- who is actually pretty used to being told that her writing sucks. I plan on finishing the story and any others that come after it, but would like to know that others find reading it to be worth their time.
On to other things, the story is nearing Pinwheel Forest. I have a lot planned for this place. It will most likely take place over several chapters, because, hey, it's a forest.
I still need help deciding on which name to use for the in game hero- Hilda, Touko, or White?
Also, if you have any fancy smancy names that you are willing to let me use—put 'em in a review or just pm them to me. Jen will love you!
Sophie and co. will be back next chapter in the ultra battle. Seriously, when you read it, tell me if I should keep doing gym battles this way or if I should figure something else out.
See you then!
I am not a writer! I am a puppet controlled by fictional characters!