Children of the night authors note
To all of those who have read this story I would like to say thank you for reading. Any doubts about being a horrible author are diminishing but still I could use improvement. One of my favorite authors is Stephen king and i love his stories. But coming up with a story like that was very hard for me to get to. It probably didn't scare you, but no grim dark I have read ( including cupcakes) has ever scared or even creeped me out. Cupcakes made me want to throw up, rainbow factory was an ok story and not nearly as gory as cupcakes. I had to stop reading it at the part where pinkie pie removes rainbow dashes organs. What they give us similar to what you get in Friday the 13th when the killer brutally murders his victim. What these stories lack however, is suspense and creepiness. It's that feeling that feels as though you aren't scared but you have a sense of dread. That's what I experimented with this story. If you noticed, there was a lot of suspense held to the end. I tried to focus less on gore and more on suspense, It doesn't mean there wasn't gore just not a lot of it. And I also made it so that where the character went insane I replaced with a character who thinks they are doing the right thing by killing every one. I hope to make this a video to amplify the suspense. And please no negative reviews. If you have suggestions for my improvement, don't put it harshly. I don't want to be told what I need to fix, just how to fix them. Anyways read my other stories princess of the night, night of the galloping dead and my new story A Day With Derpy.