Hello all! Updating after a year, ohwow. My characters have also developed as did I ;v; well hopefully. If they seem a bit out of character it's because I tweaked them and this is how they're going to be for now on (talking everyone). I'm also changing the rating to M, nothing big, just the use of language and a bit sexual theme, but nothing like a lemon. Just better be safe than sorry

and I have a potty mouth.

I might as well recap so you won't have to skim the awful chapters. Okay. Most of my characters I drew and are at my deviantart account c: so you can see them there too.

Eggman is in cahoots with my character Adriana, remember? black vixen yeahyeah.

THE MAIN CHARACTERS OF MINE YOU NEED TO KNOW IS ADRIANA/ THE REST ARE JUST FOR THE RACE PURPOSES AND NOTHING BIG. ERIC MIGHT BE A LEADING CHARACTER ALSO. BUT THAT'S IT SO I'M NOT SPAMMING YOU GUYS TOO MUCH WITH THE NEW CHARACTERS I HOPE .u. just for the race and who to go up against.

She drags the same amount of players as Sonic Team has. Both in this really big stadium, supposed to the event of the year, like the Olympics and all. The first race went and Sonic Team (Sonic, Knuckles, Tails) won that one against Andre, Dimitri, and Steel. Another, not an official race, has happened, with characters belonging to my gal Alex (Alex, Alphonse, and Devin) vuv. Adriana, Eric, and Steel raced along them and lost. Sonic was there so.. yes. I was stalling and added some fluffandblah. Amy is going to be on Adri's case and will try to catch her because no one really sees that this whole competition is Eggman's plan from the start. Because they're dumbasses.

Okay we're here.

I'm going to add more scenes with cannon characters because I because this is all original characters, but it won't be too bad, I promise!~

Alex, Alphonse, and Devin (c) AlexTDV

Sean and Nick (c) Beatleboy62

Adriana and Eric and Jenn (c) me .u. enjoy!


[Eric's View; Hotel Room; 2:00PM]

I can't handle this at all. Here I have Adriana sick in bed, so is Ebony; Alex, Alphonse, and Devin as well. Just of all the luck. I mean, we were taking risks about having the race in the rain. Ebony still wants to sleep on the floor.. I better not step on him. I bring her tea for the third time and see her sleeping again, and look at her for a moment. I lean forward to kiss her forehead but-

Sean and Nick kind of bombard in and I stand upright immediately.

"Mornin' Eric! How's your day?" Nick grins. I didn't lock the door right again.

"Uh, well, okay. How are you?" I stutter, trying to make my muzzle pale again.

"Just dandy! Haha! Sean here, had a spare key and we just popped in to see what's for breakfast"

So the door was locked right.

"Oh, Adri sick in bed? Hah! Poor little doll" Sean teases, poking her awake.

"I'll sneeze on you" she glares at Sean and goes under the covers.

Sean smells the baked pie Adri received -from someone she didn't tell me- and makes himself right at home. It's not rude, actually. We did invite them and all, and it's common courtesy to share food. With Nick's help, they devoured the pie in minutes.

I like them, I really do. They're great guys. Funny too.

They started to look green and Adri had to move to the end of the couch for the boys to rest up also.

Our hotel room is for the sick.

Adriana looks really nice when she's sick.. I mean, I DON'T WANT HER TO BE SICK ALL THE TIME OR SOMETHING. But she isn't yelling as much or scowling. Her cheeks are redder and all she does is sleep. She has the serenest expression when she's sleeping. Her black hair was everywhere, her eyes were watery and shut, and she sneezed obnoxiously every five minutes.. but she's lovely all the same.

I serve the poor dears tea, coffee, gave them all medicine and wet rags. Some utter thank you's other just take my company as a ghost. I don't mind. I just want them to feel better and as the only good healthy boy, I will have to sprout out eight arms soon. But I need a smoke.

And now.

I need a babysitter for them. I can't just leave them. They're all so helpless. Adri needs me.

"Refill, Falk!" I hear Alex call me from Adri's original bedroom.

"And here too, lad" Nick grins.

"Hit me up too, Falk" Adri lazily says, raising her cup.

Then just a chorus, a startling chorus follows. I almost ran to the phone to call Jenn. She has to help. Not that I'm tired of them and all, but two of them are Alex and Adriana and they're the most frightening if I don't take their orders quick enough.

"Oh? Hello?"

"JennJennJenn"

"Oh, Eric, sweetie! How are you?"

"I'm fine! Uhm, it turns out, Adri has a cold"

"A cold?"

"Yes.. and Ebony"

"Poor things. Are you taking care of them?"

"Yes.. Um, but I have a quick errand to do.. so if you don't mind at all -"

"Course not! I'll be over there in a sec!"

"Great. Fantastic. Thank you"

I hang up and still feel all shaky. There-there's just so much to think. Not think, worry. So much to stress over, and I've been circling around the rooms for many hours straight.

"What are you looking for, Falk?" Alphonse muttered, sniffling. The brown kitsune sleeps in my room, he's wrapped up in blankets and sheets and I quickly gave him a fresh new rag on his forehead.

I rummage around my dresser, taking out the pack from a box I hid under my pants drawer.

"Oh, nothing. How are you feeling?" I ask nicely. I probably look like a lunatic with how frantic my hands pull and throw things out. I feel my eyes darting from him to the floor and then back.

"I feel a bit better. Thanks for having us stay here"

"No problem! You won, fair and square and we can't just kick you out on a rainy night if we did win"

"Right"

"Now, excuse me. Your tea will be ready soon"

I hide the pack behind me and slide it quickly into my pocket. Just as I leave I hear the door knock. That's my que. I open the door widely and pull Jenn in.

"Hey, Jenn! Thanks again!"

Jenn has her warm smile beam at me and then see's Adriana on the couch. "Oh, the poor baby" She rushes to her and also sees Sean and Nick's sniffling faces. "What! Nick and Sean are sick too?!"

"Uh also some others in our rooms.."

"More?!"

"Just three!"

"Plus Ebony! Who's sleeping on the floor! Is seven, Eric! SEVEN!"

"I'll be quick to come back, I promise! Thank you again!"

"No! I'm willing to help but not alone! You can't-"

"I'll be back! Soon okay? Thank you!"

I rush out and hope she isn't too mad. I can't handle taking care of seven people for too long. I wish I could. But even Adri is a handful, even if she needs me.


R&R ; u ; and I'll update even sooner! i have chapters up and getting edited so ah, i want to finish this by 2013 ; w ;