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"Wonderful," Thalia grumped. "I'm going to walk down the street, see if anybody in the other shops has a suggestion."
"But the clerk said-"
"I know," she told me. "I'm checking anyways."
I let her go. I knew how it felt to be restless. All half-bloods had attention deficit problems because of our inborn battlefield reflexes. We couldn't stand just waiting around. Also, I had a feeling Thalia was still upset over our conversation last night about Luke.
"Nice rat," she said at last.
I set it on the porch railing. Maybe it would attract more business for the store.
"So...how do you like being a Hunter so far?" I asked.
Suddenly, a flash of light appeared behind us, that startled me. There was a boy laying on his stomach. He was about 12 or 13, he had messy black hair with olive skin. He also had a jacket and black jeans with a chain for a belt. He had a sword as black as shadows in nightmares.
He groaned and looked up. His eye were a very dark brown.
Bianca had her bow drawn and aimed it at the boy. I forget how quick they are.
"Who are you? Where did you come from?" She said.
The boy had a hurt look in his eye," Bianca?"