I hate doing these kind of updates, however, I believe it is necessary, as this is the only site I publish on (for now).
I'm in the mists of rewriting, a majority of what has already been published will stay the same. There are just a few things that I would like to add, particularly the initial meeting between Maddie and Mary, maybe get a little more natural emotion instead of the forced that I feel like I did in the moment to get everything out. And the conflict / agreement between Vlad and Azazel needs so much work.
I'm thinking of stripping the first two chapters, as I find them unnecessary to immerse my readers into the story. It won't change, as I am using it as a basic guideline and reminder on what I am doing.
For those who are not on Tumblr (I post updates logaofficial), please keep the AI Writing away from my stories.
Now, my dearest readers, through what you have read so far, what would you like to see expanded? What have you enjoyed so far and is there anything you want to see less of?