Chapter 1
Crystal Castle
5 minutes after Twilight went through the Portal Mirror
Celestia stood silently as she began her wait along with the others. She pondered what could happen in this other world and what could happen in her's. What could happen while she is away. What if a prophecy could ensue. She realized at that moment that a prophecy had already begun. Begining with her sending her student away. When the planet's great protectors are one less, An ancient Evil will awaken and infest. The only hope is the help of once great protectors, The Humans. They are the only beings capable of besting these foes and have done so before. when a great leader is at risk the Humans will come back and save the planet as they have before. She grew a worried frown at what was about to happen and braced herself for the inevitable. Screams were heard down the hall from the room the Princesses and the girls were in. Flash and the other guard in the room got in front of the princesses and girls. A creature walked in. It stood at the height of Celestia and was wearing metallic black armor this Electric shocks going around it.
It spoke." Are you the Ruler of This land." Celestia nodded. " What do you want and why are you here."
It laughed." I want this land and the world ." It drew a weapon from it's back and aimed it at the ponies." You will die along with the rest of the populace." It said as the weapon started to glow blue. All of the sudden a crashing sound was heard and an object came down through the roof of the room and stuck in the floor. A hissing sound was heard then the sound of a lock unlocking and the object opened to reveal another creature that looked like the first. The second creature looked at the ponies then at the other creature.
"How many times do I have to kill you for you to die." The second creature spoke to the other creature.
How did you like that? Dat Cliffhanger Doe. If you want to submit an Oc please if you want to have your Oc pair with another pony or Thing from MLP please don't pick Luna I already have part of the story planed out with my Oc and Her.