Hirinoutaka: Hey everyone I just want to say thank you for all the reviews, story alerts and favorites. But I've some bad news I'm discontinuing this story and I also want to say GOTCHA. Like I'll actually discontinue this story I love it and this is one of the best story I've ever written plus I've being getting positive reviews so come on out naruto and greet the audience.
Naruto: Hey guys how you doing I hope your week hasn't being troublesome because that will be too much of a drag.
Hirinoutaka: Why are you talking like shikamaru? And stop looking at the clouds you're freaking me out.
Naruto: I decided to start acting like shikamaru and I love it. All I have to do is just nap and look at clouds so unstressful.
Hirinoutaka: If you're going to act lazy I just have to make sure you work.
Naruto: And how are you going to do that?
Hirinoutaka: I have my ways*chuckling evilly while brandishing a frying pan*.
Naruto: So scary. So that's how shikamaru's mom gets him to work, I think I will stop acting like shikamaru.
Hirinoutaka: Good idea now let's go get some ramen.
Naruto: Okay. FYI, hirinoutaka doesn't own naruto she only owns this plot but she sure wishes she owned naruto.
Summary: What if naruto was a girl and after she failed the academy exam the 2nd time she met somebody who trained her will things still be the same as they are OR will it change for the better. And will she become stronger and also find love let's see
~Training in the forest of death~
~Naruto's P.O.V~
I woke up on a soft bed and when I opened my eyes, I saw that I wasn't in my room. I was scared at first until I remembered the previous day experience and I quickly got up from the bed and ran to the bathroom to take a shower so I could go train.
When I looked at my reflection my eyes still had a ripple-like pattern to it I then sighed.
'Guess I'm not getting out of this house now' I thought.
I quickly took my bath and dressed up before I went to the kitchen to look for something to eat.
"I wonder where kakashi is" I said out loud, feeling scared because everywhere was dark and I couldn't find the light switch.
"Yo" A voice behind me said making me scream and turn around.
"Were you scared?" Kakashi asked trying not to laugh.
"No, of course not" I said.
"I believe you" Kakashi said still not trying to laugh.
"You can laugh if you want to" I said before kakashi burst out laughing.
"Hmph, I don't see what's so funny" I said looking for the light switch and thankfully I found it. I then put on the light and walked into the kitchen. I checked the fridge, the cupboards and I still couldn't find it. I continued checking everywhere and checking….
"What are you looking for?" Kakashi asked.
"Ramen. Where did you keep it?" I asked.
"Oh, I hardly ever eat ramen" Kakashi said.
"What? Ramen is the food of the gods, how can you not eat it" I said looking at him like he was mad.
"As a ninja you need to eat a balanced diet and from now on you will eat ramen twice every two weeks" Kakashi said. "Or do you want to be small forever".
"I'm not small, I'm still growing" I said because I hated when people called me small. Besides it's not my fault that I was small since instant ramen was the only thing I could buy since store owners either kicked me out or overpriced me and still sold me rotten produce. And if I go to any restaurant I'm still kicked out plus Ichiraku ramen is the only place to actually serve me and they are nice to me.
"Well, here are your glasses, wear them" Kakashi said handing me a pair of glasses.
I then tried them on and they were a perfect fit. Kakashi then fried some eggs, bacon and made some toast then he served the toast, eggs and bacon with orange juice and it tasted really good so I quickly wolfed them down and soon felt energized.
"So what are we doing today kakashi-sensei?" I asked.
"Well, let's go to training ground 44 also known as the forest of death" He said.
"Okay" I said.
We then went to the forest of death and when I looked around the forest of death, I saw a caterpillar as big as three grown human beings I then shivered.
"I want you to do 200 push-ups, 200 sit-ups and 50 laps" He said.
"Whoa, that's a big workout" I said.
"That's the warm-up" He said.
"What?1" I exclaimed, my mouth hanging open.
"Close your mouth unless you want to catch flies" He said. "Now start.
When I finished the warm-up I collapsed on the ground panting.
"You're done already. Good, now time for the real training" Kakashi said reading his book.
"You're crazy" I said panting.
"Thank you" Kakashi said closed-eye smiling.
"Now I want you to climb a tree without your hands" Kakashi said but before I started interrupting him. "While dodging what I throw at you".
"What?" I exclaimed. "How am I supposed to do that?"
He just shrugged and then we started the torture. I was able to only get a few cuts at first but later on I was able to dodge without getting cut and soon fell on the ground feeling exhausted.
"Time for a lunch break" Kakashi said bringing out bentos.
I soon sat up in a sitting position and quickly ate.
"Now it's time for me to start your physical conditioning since I have being limiting your training to only chakra control" Kakashi said handing me ankle weights. "The weights are 10 kg and they will increase once you get used to it".
"Easy-peasy" I said.
When I put them on I fell flat on the ground.
"Try channeling chakra to your limbs" Kakashi said.
Once I tried that I found out it was easier for me to stand up.
"Now let's start out with the basic katas of paolin fist" He said. "Paolin fist centers on adding chakra to your hands and legs while attacking and blocking. Since you're a wind type you can add wind chakra to your hands and legs making them as sharp as a knife. It is a mix of taijutsu and ninjutsu.
After Kakashi showed me the basic katas I got it instantly and after I trained with it for two hours kakashi told me to stop.
"Now I want you to attack me using only paolin fist" Kakashi said.
"Are you ready to be beaten" I said but kakashi just smirked while I charged.
I punched him but he blocked it with his hand and wrapped his hand around my fist bringing me forward then punching me in my stomach. I staggered back from the pain and did a roundhouse kick my target being his head but he grabbed my leg and twirled me around up in the air then he threw me into a tree. I then collapsed from the pain
When I woke up I was lying in a sewer facing a cage that had a seal.
"Where am I?" I said.
"You are in your mindscape" A voice coming from the cage said.
"Who are you?" I asked.
"I am the great kyuubi. The great queen of the kitsunes" Kyuubi said.
"You're a girl and I thought the fourth killed you" I said feeling confused.
"Of course I'm a girl, isn't it obvious" She said scoffing before she said, "And a mere human can't kill a tailed beast it can only be sealed into a container and you are that container".
"So I'm like a prison for you and also your jailer" I said.
"What? Aren't you sad, don't you think you're the demon itself" Kyuubi said.
"Of course not. If you put ramen in a bowl will you say the bowl is the ramen?" I said.
"Hmm, you've impressed me, kit. From now on I will be giving you my chakra. It will be like paying rent" Kyuubi said chuckling.
"Thanks, kyuubi" I said.
"Your welcome. By the way your sensei is trying to wake you up and you better train hard so that you can become strong no container of mine will ever be weak" She said.
"Bye" I said before I woke up in the outside world.
"Thank Kami you're okay" Kakashi said. "I was so worried maybe I shouldn't have put so much chakra into that throw".
"Nah, it's okay. If you don't put your all, how am I supposed to learn" I said.
"Come on, let's go home" Kakashi said.
"Kay" I said before we left the forest of death going home.
Hirinoutaka: Finally, I'm done no more typing seriously I need a hand massage.
Naruto: Baby hands.
Hirinoutaka: It's not my fault my hands and body are fragile. I mean I'm a girl do you expect my body to be all muscular so I will now look like a boy.
Naruto: No.
Hirinoutaka: Anyhoo, how did you like this chapter. Did you Like it, Love it or Hate it or all three anyway review. Ja ne.