Cliché

by Hello I'm Not Writing

"Because my life is anything but cliché." Or is it? This another Divergent High school fanfic, but I love these and I want to make my own. I will not say what couples in this story happen because then what will keep on the edge of your seat? *Okay, so I tried to edit it and now the thing that says what chapter it is (that I wrote on the top of the page) is off. Deal with it*

23. Chapter 23 & 24

Chapter 24

Last time: I'm shocked beyond comprehension.

Present:

Four POV:

She just stands there staring at me with her mouth open.

Great.

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Okay so this is another double chapter because that chapter was short.

Don't forget to submit characters for this story! It would also be really nice of you guys to submit characters that I could use in a hurt/comfort story that will be up on the 3rd!

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Chapter 25

Last time: Great.

Present:

"Well you know what you have to do now, right?" She asks, the shock finally fading.

"What do I have to do now?" I ask confused as to what she is talking about.

"Get back in there and dance with her."

Tris POV:

When the song ends I apologize to Tyler and leave him. I walk around looking for Chrissy. I really hope I find her soon, she's my ride home.

I'm still walking around the room when suddenly I walk face first into someone's chest. Oh how cliché! I look up to say an apology to the persons face and am met with the most beautiful blue eyes I've ever seen. They make me feel safe yet they also make me feel adventurous.

These eyes also hold secrets untold to any other human being. These eyes hold years of pain and misery. These eyes make me curious. These eyes make me feel drawn to their owner.

I've been staring too long.

"Umm, sorry about that." I say quickly and start to walk away, but I am pulled back by blue eyes.

"Tris?" He says.

"Umm, hello?" I ask.

"I've been meaning to ask you this all night." He says scratching the back of his neck nervously.

"Would you like to dance?"

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I added Fourtris because you guys were good. Also because Im in a really good mood for some reason!

Please please please please pllllleeeeeeaaaassssseeee send in some more SYOC characters! Also I plan on releasing a hurt/comfort fanfiction to the public on Febuary 3rd! So please send in some characters for that too!

155 reviews please! And unlike these last two chapters I am not updating until I get 155 reviews. No less. Not 154 not 153, 155.

QOTD: Have you ever read a fanfiction and loved it and then the author said that they would make a sequel and you started fangirling?

My answer: Yes! I just did a few minutes ago! There's this really awesome Hunger Games fanfiction that got me started on Finniss and it's called "Grey eyes beautiful smile" and the author just posted the first chapter of a sequel the other day. Btw guys I already have the ending of this story all planned out and I will tell you right now that there will be a sequel.