Well here are some reviews so far,and I love all the good ones! So heres some nice ones and one bad one!
Unexpainable Awesomeness 10/8/13 . chapter 10
I'm shocked about the kid, I really am. I did love how she slapped him, he deserved it a LONG time ago. I think that she has feelings for him, but she either doesn't realize it or just doesn't want to admit it. Also, I think that Wanda and Ian will be a couple soon. You're blowing me out of the water with this story, I mean, you've kept me hooked very well. Keep writing and updating please!
Guest 10/4/13 . chapter 3
Update please this is soooooooppoo good
Guest 10/9/13 . chapter 13
I really like your story. Please update soon!
A 10/9/13 . chapter 13
Love it! Update update update :)
Micaela 10/7/13 . chapter 9
I cant wait for the next chapters to come. I really want to know why Melanie is jealous, because she didn't like Jared in the first place. And i think I know why that girl wants to come back into his life. Oh well update soon.
Now the bad one :)
EdwardCulleniseverything1918 10/11/13 . chapter 6
I don't know what you're trying to say with this story.
Melanie agrees with an arranged marriage with a hateful person purely out of tradition? Really? On 2013?
And she's just taking every single bit of crap from this despicable guy without a second thought.
For any reason at all, but their parents will, she's moving in with him. Quietly. Submissively.
There's not a single believable reason for her to agree with this. It's pure nonsense AND it says that women should be quiet obedient pets to their parents and husbands.
It's really poor.
Well heres my little answer to that! If you dont like it, dont read it. When you read fan FICTIONS let me remind you it is all fiction. I want people to come here with an open mind. And when they do their minds blossom, so if you cant imagine im sorry. Theres the back space.
So this chapter might be a little short but I hope it's like able :) and I want everyone to know that I enjoy when they read my story! Even if you don't review, if you read it and come back for more i just love you. :)
Melanie's point of view
I woke up, chilly with a thin blanket covering me. I surprising woke up earlier than Jared. I stretched my body to wake it up from the sleep state it was still in. I walked over to the wardrobe the hotel had in the room, I put on dress that wasn't to formal but it wasn't to casual. I braided my hair to the side like Wanda always told me to do. I put some makeup on, the perfect look for fall. I threw on a cardigan as I went over to Wanda's door and knocked on it. She happily answered it already dressed and ready to go. "Shopping?" I asked her. She nodded and threw on a pair of heels like mine. We walked outside to the sidewalks and started along the stores. We went to at least every store they had and bought anything we wanted. It was about 2 hours and we figured we should head back, so we did. We walked to our rooms with our bags. I went to open the door when I seen an alarmed Jared. "Melanie where did you go?" He asked me. I lifted up the bags and he nodded. "But you didn't tell me?" He told me. "We have a thing called cellphones" I said while putting my stuff down. I felt my back pockets as Jared help my phone up. "We'll shit" I laughed. He rolled his eyes as I went to go put on a new outfit I bought. Today the Howes planned for us to go look at extra things for the wedding and the place they planned for the wedding. I really didn't have to much of a say in things anymore. I just wanted to get this all done with. Not that I didn't appreciate his parents doing all of this,I was just sad over the fact that I didn't get to choose to marry him. I walked out in my outfit to see Jared shirtless in jeans. My eyes traveled his body for a minute, wanting every inch of it. I tried to shake the thought the best I possibly could but nothing was working. "It's not nice to stare" he said while laughing at the ground. I fixed my outfit so it looked like it was to on the models. He looked up and swallowed hard, I don't see why. I mean sure this shower a little skin but that's fine right? "Not nice to stare Jared" I mocked him. He just shot me a look while I laughed. He sprayed on some spray which I could barely smell from where I was standing. He looked to me and I walked to the door with him to see his parents standing there smiling. "Awe I bet you two are so happy." They said. I just nodded, at this point I didn't know what we were. We were good then bad and it kept going like a broken record. I could smell my perfume that I put on start to get strong. I smelt like walking candy, like a vanilla cloud. Jared put his arm around me and I could smell his spray really strong now. It smelled too good to not enjoy smelling. "Are you wearing perfume?" He whispered to me? I nodded with a smile. "It smells good" he said with a smile. I thanked him and told him the same thing. He just smiled. All he did was smile at me and it was starting to get annoying. Then the thought of Lacey snapped in my head. I wanted to frown but I let the thought slip because it was pointless to worry about. We were walking to the car with the group and got into the SUV looking thing. "So how's the love life?" My mom asked us. I started to blush rapidly. We both looked away. And everyone started to look at us. "You didn't!" Wanda yelled to me. "Of course no!" I yelled back. Everyone started to laugh, but me. Was my love life really that much of a joke? I felt kind of rejected by everyone at that point. Sure I've had sex many of times with people I'm sorry I don't announce it to the world. That was my business am I not correct. We got to the place where we would get married and walked into it. It was so nice,maybe a little too nice. "This is amazing." I told his parents. "I know, and I can't wait to sit here and see you and Jared be happily married. "Oh I can't wait either" I lied. We had maybe a week and a half left. It sadden me that my life was set out for me. Right In front of my palms, it was always like that though. Always so strict and set out. I looked around this place, it was every girls dream. I haven't even asked for this and I'm living someone else's dream. I looked over to see a laughing Jared. Isn't knowing someone for like 5 months a little short to marry them? I watched him move, every little perfect thing about him. His body movement, his laugh and smile. As I could feel my stomach start to roll around, it felt like I was a little girl again. Running around the playground chasing the boy I liked. I looked back at him to see him looking at me. I smiled at him and he smiled back. It was like an understanding, we both knew we had to work on things. I walked back over to Jared and we looked around more and we all soon left.
Later That Night
Everyone was in their rooms. Ian took Wanda to go see some fancy fountains that were all around. I was just in the room bored with Jared. "Lets go do something" he suggested. I nodded. "Like?" I asked him. "There has to be some sort of night club or something open, I guess the drinking age is lower here. (Okay I don't know if it is but just go along okay.) " he said. I nodded. "So should we get ready?" I asked him. "We'll yeah!" He said. I agreed to do as he said, I knew I brought a little black dress anyways. I went into the bathroom and put on a dress and have myself a smokey eye. I let my hair fall down the way it wanted to. Finally I walked out to see a waiting Jared, looking pretty nice I must say. We walked outside and got a cab to the nicest club in town. We were walking in and there was a line, so I went to the front and they let us in. That's what me and Wanda usually did most of the time. We made our way over to the drinks and ordered some. Everyone over here was just tan and muscular and looked like Greek gods. This guy came over to me and grabbed my hand as I was finishing my drink. I agreed to dance with him and Jared didn't do anything about it. I could feel the music beat with my heart. Like my heart beat was getting deeper and deeper as the music grew louder. The night grew on and so did the drinks I was drinking. I could feel it flow through my veins, like fire. It felt as if someone had lit a match in my system. Sadly this guy was still dancing with me and I was getting tired. And I started to worry about where Jared was. Something just didn't feel right about this whole situation. The guy brought back one more drink and it was hard to swallow. It felt like I swallowed a bug. Then the thought hit me, he drugged me. I started to panic inside, and quickly started to hit me. He put his arm around me and led me out as if I was just really drunk. I knew if I didn't get out now I couldn't leave the situation. When we were in the parking lot I threw myself down. He tried to pick me up by the waist but I tried to kick him. I could feel myself getting weaker and weaker by every move I tried. The one last time I tried to get down and cut my hand. I could feel my blood start to run down my hands and feet. I tried to crawl when I ran into a figure. I looked up to see someone who looked like Jared. I just laid against him as he picked me up. He turned to the guy who had done the damage to me. He set me down for a second. "You did this?" He growled. "Come on man,she's a babe. I just needed some help" is all Jared made of this guys English. Before he could keep explaining Jared started hitting him. All I remember is Jared hitting the guy and me getting picked up.
The Next Morning
I rolled over in my sleep. I felt a figure beside me who was also sleeping. I could feel nausea take over my feelings. I got up and ran to the bathroom to throw up. My body felt drained and my hands and legs hurt. I looked down to see I was wearing pajama pants and a tee shirt. I don't remember changing or even getting back. I pulled myself up,flushed the toilet and rinsed my mouth out. I checked my phone to see it was still fairly early and everyone would still be sleeping. I sighed and went back to lay down on the bed. I didn't mind sleeping next to Jared, he kept me warm. It was like sleeping next to a guy friend. But it was like I wished for him to touch me, to run his hand down my arm. I relaxed against the bed when I felt a force pull me back over. I turned to see a still sleeping Jared pull me in,he must do it in his sleep. I didn't mind, he was warm and comfortable. And I knew we would probably be back to sleeping by our selves sooner than later. Time passed and I fell back to sleep into my own little world. I must have dreamed because in my dream we were at the wedding and he said he loved me, and I loved him. And then we went to our honeymoon and I got pregnant. Then some how Wanda died and aliens took over. I shot up from the bed as soon as we were all getting killed in our dream after being stuck in a cave? That was a bad dream. I could never imagine a world like that. I looked at my phone, it was around 11. I knew everyone would be waking up and I was feeling better. I got up and took an Advil and laid back down and just turned to my side to look at Jared. To see his features, they were perfection. The way his brow settled right above his eyes. The way his jaw was so manly and near perfect. I just wanted to run my fingers along it, the way his lips settled. I turned the other way as soon as I felt this feeling in my body. It was like a sizzling, like a firework had been set off and it was ready to go off. I'm not sure what I felt but at that moment I could hear Jared wake up. I acted like I was asleep, force of habit I guess. I could feel him pull me closer, I was right against his bare chest now. I could feel him rest his head on my shoulder,he was rubbing my arm. I could feel goosebumps start to flow through my skin. Every time he made a move like this my body felt like I was in the sky. I'm not to sure why, usually when I start to fall for someone I need time. So why is this happening like this? Am I falling for him? My thought was interrupted when my phone started to ring. I opened my eyes and went to grab it when Jared did. "Hello? Yeah we can be ready!" He told someone. It must have been either my mom or his mom. Most likely his mom. I could feel him set my phone down, and he lightly shook me. I turned to look at him. "I could have got it" I smiled. "I didn't want it to wake you up." He said. "So did I dress myself?" I laughed. He just shook his head and looked down at his knuckles,which were cut up and bruised. "No,you ran into a little problem so I brought you back and dressed you and stuff" he told me. "And stuff?" I asked. Curiosity was eating me alive, kind of sense of nervousness too. "You had blood on you so I took a washcloth and wiped it off." He smiled at me. "Well thanks" I said to him as I turned to stand up. I knew it couldn't wear a dress today, and it was hopefully going to be kind of windy today. I knew it wouldn't be though, I sighed and looked at knees. It just looked like I took a bad fall. I picked out a dress and went into the bathroom to change. It was tan, and me and Wanda just bought it yesterday. I sighed and sprayed a new spray on myself. I walked out to see an already dressed Jared. He was spraying spray on too. I put on a pair of nude heels. I still didn't know where we were going but my hair was going up today. "Jared where are we going?" I asked him. "I'm not sure" he said while opening the door for us. We walked downstairs to the lobby to see everyone waiting there. Wanda and Ian were standing oddly close to each other. I think there's something up with them,but she won't tell me just yet. I don't see why she wouldn't tell me though we told each other everything. I sighed and walked up to our parents. "So what's going on today?" I smiled. "We're going to see the wedding planner" his mom smiled. I suddenly felt faint. This was all happening so fast, not even to the fact that I had cold feet. To the fact that my life was speeding right I front of me. I didn't have control of it. I felt sick, why was this all happening to me. I could be going on dates with guys and getting married to someone I chose. I knew that, that would be hopeless thinking because my wedding was set out right I front of me. We were all in the car when these thoughts hit me. I could feel my whole body tense up, and I knew Jared felt it to. "What's wrong?" His whispered in my ear. I could feel shivers run down my spine due to his closeness. His warm breath shook my nerves. "I'm fine" I got out. I didn't think I had an attraction to him and I'm not sure if I do, but my body was sure doing wonders.