Hey guys. I know, I know it's been a while. Or slightly longer…Ok it's been ages. I can't believe I'm sixteen this year already! How time flies. I'm sorry I haven't updated. I kind of lost all inspiration for it. But I want…no I need to learn to write. So I'll keep trying. If any of you people out there have any pointers and suggestions, don't hesitate. BUT no flames. I'm a learner. Ok. Enough about that. The good thing is, I'm not as horrible as I used to be. Oh well, with time I'll improve. Have a nice read? Meh.

Disclaimer: I do not own anything. Not the characters or the ideas I got from star struck. Sadness. I'm not that great

Max POV

beep, beep, beep, beep.

Beep, Beep, Beep, Beep, Beep!

"Just five more minutes…"

BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!BEE-

"Oh for f***s sake!"

*smash*

Oops. There goes the 50th alarm clock. Maybe I should celebrate. Sleep seems like the perfect way…

"MAXIMUM RIDE DON'T TELL ME YOU BROKE ANOTHER CLOCK!"

Oh sh*t! Well, time to get up…


Here I am in a car… again, going to another Nick Venom concert with Ella…again. You'd think my own mother would try to save me. But NOOOOOO. 'It's going to be fun' she said. 'Good bonding time with your sister!' she said…mothers these days.

It takes us an hour to get the entertainment centre. Stupid traffic. This time I'm going into the concert with her. Heck no am I staying! We walk to the ticket booth and get tickets. We get some snacks and water then continue into the arena/ stadium whatever you want to call it. It is HUGE though, no lie.

"Hey Ella what time does this concert finish?"

"Shut up! The concert's starting!...eeeekkkkkkk there he is!Omfg! He's so hot! He so-"

I slap my hand on her mouth. I mean seriously there's already enough screeching fans. Jeez…

"Ladies and gentlemen." I look up and see Iggy mc-ing and smile.

"I present to you the one you've been waiting for. The one and only NICK VENOM!"

Cue inward groan. What's a face walks to the front of the stage and starts singing. I gotta admit, he's got a good voice. But that doesn't change the fact that I hate him. After a while I get bored. I tell Ella that I'll be in the car or maybe go backstage later. Oh yeah I forgot to tell you that Ella and I got backstage passes. Courtesy of Iggy.

When I get to the car I listen to music on my iPod. An hour later I sit there bored. I abandon the car and go to the back door of the stadium. I reach out to open the door when it suddenly swings open and knocks me in the head...really hard. Just my luck. I feel a warm liquid running down my face, before my vision gets blurry and I feel myself slipping into darkness. The last thing I remember seeing is a tall dark figure, then I black out.

Fang POV (Soz for OOC-ness)

I finish my concert and go back stage. I hate the screeching fans but I love music too much to give it all up.

My name's Nick Venom. I'm your average teen sensation. I hate my name, so I go with Fang my nickname. I'm 17, tall, and hot! Don't go thinking that I'm up myself, just telling the truth.

After another successful concert I return to my dressing room. I change my clothes into my usual attire (use your imagination! :D-AN).

One more month in Cali then, I'm going home. I turn to see a frame with my parents in it. I miss them. After some reminiscing I put the frame down. I think I need some fresh air.

I walk through the hallways looking for Iggy. Hmmm, not here. Might as well go out and catch him later.

Third Person POV (experimenting)

The door swings open and Max falls to the ground unconscious. Fang realises his mistake and rushes to her aid. He looks her over and sees the bleeding of her head. Fang curses and takes his jacket off to apply pressure on her wound.

He lifts her up and places her in his car. As he drives to the hospital he calls Iggy, telling him what's happened. Iggy agrees to meet him at the hospital after taking care of some things. Arriving at the hospital he takes Max in to the emergency room.

"Someone help me please!" He shouts in exasperation.

A young nurse comes in with a gurney and Fang places Max on it. With one last look Fang turns around, walks into the waiting room and waits…


Max POV

Darkness. That's all I see at the moment. I can feel my body, but I can't move it. This is insane. As soon as I wake up I'm gonna find the Bastard who did this and kick his sorry ass! Now what am I supposed to do?! Hold on. I hear voices!

"Is she going to be alright ma'am?" A deep voice says.

"Yeah son, she'll be alright. She should wake up soon."

I'm guessing that's the nurse…

Hmmmmmm. Maybe I should try moving my body…nope, no luck. Just. Great.


Still Max POV…

I don't know how long it's been but I'm ready to wake up. Com on Max wake up! Great. Now I'm talking to myself. First step to insanity. Yay.

I try to move my finger. Nothing. I try again. Nothing again. I give up.

Come on Maxie just one more time…

What the hell? Did I just here a voice inside my head?

Yes, yes you did.

Sweet nibblets I've officially lost my mind.

No you haven't.

Yes I have! Wait a minute why am I talking to you?

No you haven't! And I'm you conscience, it is normal for a human being to talk to their conscience. Now try and move your hand again.

Yeah normal people who are insane. But whatevs. I'll try again.

*Inwardly gasps*

Aaaaahhhhhh! I can move my finger! And my toes! Wait, wait! I can feel my body again! And my senses are tingling!


Fang POV (backtracking a bit here! :D )

I hope she's alright. She has to be. No she is. I think. Where's Iggy? He better be here soon. The nurse told me to wait in the waiting room. Typical. After 30 minutes the nurse comes in. She motions for me to follow her. We reach the girl's room. Room 39. I turn to the nurse.

"Is she going to be alright ma'am?" I say

"Yeah son, she'll be alright. She should wake up soon." The nurse replies.

I nod in return and she leaves. I move to sit next to the bed. Hhmm. She's not too bad looking. Meh. My phone starts ringing.

Boom boom, it's getting hot in here.

Boom boom, it's getting ho-

I pull out my phone and check the ID. Iggy.

"Sup Iggy."

"What room is she in?" he asks

"Jeez, a hi would be nice!" I reply.

"Hi. There. Happy?"

"Whatevs. 39."

"K. Be there soon"

I hang up the phone and not long afterwards Iggy walks ins, shaking his head.

"Dude, she's gonna kill you, what happened anyways?" he says smirking.

I tell him the whole story….not that interesting. He grabs a chair and joins me next to the bed. Now all we can do is wait.


Max POV (where we left off :D)

My whole body is now tingling. I feel myself regaining consciousness. I open my eyes. Aahhhhh! Stupid bright lights. I smell the familiar smell of the hospital. Ew. I hate hospitals. My vision clears and I try to sit up. A guy dressed in black carefully pushes me back down. Then he speaks

"Don't do that, relax for a bit, I'll call the nurse." That deep voice again.

"Hey Max!" Someone chirps. Iggy.

I turn my head and smile at him. He smiles back and gives me a small hug. The other guy comes and stands back next to Iggy. He looks familiar. He apologises for the incident. As I'm about to tell him not to worry about it, I realise who he is. Nick Venom. Oh there's gonna be hell to pay now. I can't believe he, of all people, did this. He is sooooooo going to pay. And wait a minute? Where's Ella? UGH!Just. My. Luck.

Oooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk. Review anyone? Suggestions? Help? Remember…..NO FLAMES! Be Nice-ish at least. Haha oh well. Is my third person ok? need to know...Read on peepz!

Ps. REVIEW! thx! xD