Hi, thanks to my first reader, jansails.
To reply to your review, she's introducing her past, telling the reader/audience about what happened, as they 'shouldn't' know what happened in her past, but as we have read about it, we do. I will also add twists to the story and alter her past a bit here and there, including flashbacks.
Disclaimer:
I, sadly don't own any of the characters in Twilight, although I do own my enthusiastic imagination.
Enjoy!
First day back at school since 'they' left. First day of the stares. First day of the questions. Oh, joy. It wasn't what I was looking forwards to. I slammed the door shut on my truck and sighed, Jessica would be drilling me for information of course, which I was defiantly excited for. Sarcasm. I walked into the school, ignoring the whispers and giggles. I scowled at the many stares and walked into homeroom. I heard a shout from across the room. Lauren. "Hey Bella, what was Edward like in bed?" She asked, laughing. "I wouldn't know Lauren, but I'm sure you've bedded more men than a prostitute on a good night's work." She gasped. "You bitch!" She shouted coldly.
It was at that moment the teacher walked in. "Lauren, go to the headmaster immediately!" He shouted. "But...But Be-" She attempted to protest. "I don't care, no ifs or buts, I expect to see you at detention after school." Lauren gasped and walked out sobbing. I stifled a laugh. "As for you Miss Swan I expect you to be up to date with your homework and the things you've missed." I nodded. "Yes Sir." He smiled. "Nice to have you back Bella." I nodded. The bell rung out and everyone jumped up and grabbed their bags. On the way out I was stopped by Angela. "Nice comeback back there." I nodded, smiling softly. I had decided to try and give up old self and attempt to be a new person. Of course that came with a price. The nightmares I had every night was one of them. I would be stronger than ever before. Try and beat my Issues. "I know, where are you next, I'm in PE, you?" "Same here...Are you okay Bella?" Angela asked me. "I'm fine, but from now on, it's Izzy."
So, first chapter. Like it? Hate it? Review! Also this is going to be a kind of past chapter, the next chapter will be about 3 months later. I need some pointers as I write other fanfiction's on other websites but this is my first Twilight one. Bella will be a bit OOC, but it's all good...I hope!
Bye guys!