AN: Here's chapter six. I'll update once the reviews reach sixteen. I know that that's a really thirsty thing to do but I really want to know your guys feedback.
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Tris Pov:
I can't believe he just said I look good. I look up into his eyes and tell he's sincere. I am overjoyed right now. I smile at him and my cheeks flare red.
"Why won't you just accept my compliment?" He asks me getting a little angrier in his demeanor change.
"I am not beautiful or anything so why take interest in me?"
"I think you're beautiful." He says a little sheepishly. He pulls me into a hug and I return it to him. I pull away and find everyone staring at us.
"What are you all looking at?" He asks his voice lowering a little.
"You guys are so cute!" Christina shrieks. I cover my ears and laugh.
"We aren't dating we barely know each other." I state. Their faces drop a little and I just smirk. That's what I thought.
"Where are you guys from?" Four asks.
"We are all from Michigan." Marlene says, "Do you guys want to after the ceremonies tomorrow come to where I live in Chicago?" He asks us. Yes! I say in my head. I won't be going home to my family just yet. This is perfect. "Yes!" I say before anyone else and really excited and loud. "Tris you seem really excited." Zeke says, I crack a small smile and look towards Four. He looks very handsome right now. He flashes me a famous smirk of his.
"Yeah us girls are all up for it!" Shauna says and Zeke couldn't look any happier right now.
"Zeke you look a little happy don't you?" I shoot back at him for what he said earlier.
"Tris what the hell?" Lauren says. Zeke looks flustered at the moment and I look at Lauren and explain what happens. She bursts out laughing along with Peter. "I hate you all!" Zeke exclaims. "I love you too brother!" Uriah shouts and shoves his brother into the pool. Four is dieing of laughter, I'm holding my stomach from laughter, Christina is holding on to Will for support while the rest are on the floor rolling in laughter! Zeke grabs Uriah's foot who isn't looking and drags him into the pool also. This just makes us laugh even harder then we were.
"Anyways are you guys gonna come to my house?" Four brings us back to reality.
"Fuck yeah dude." Zeke says, "I already knew the guys were coming back." Four says irritated.
"Oh yeah we'll definitely go. We just have to go home and get clothes!" Lauren says smiling at Peter flirtatiously. They would be so cute together!
"Why don't we just go shopping?" Christina suggest. I hate shopping so does Lynn.
"Oh yeah I need new clothes anyways." Shauna says.
"No I'm not going shopping." Lynn disagrees. Thank you!
"Finally someone has some sense." I say and avoid Christina's eye contact knowing she's glaring at me. "We're going shopping and that's final." Marlene says, "Yeah and you guys are going to like it." Christina smirks at me. I sarcastically smile back at her.
Four sees our exchange and raises one eyebrow at me. I raise my hands and laugh.
"Let's meet back in the lobby in two hours so we can go to dinner." Will says and we all leave. Christina and I arrive back at our room and she says; "You like Four."
"What gives you that idea?" I say trying to look her in the eye knowing that she can tell when anyone is lying. I accidentally bite the inside of my right cheek and she picks up on it right away. "You're lying to me."
"Fine I just I don't know I just met him and he's super sexy but I barely know anything about him." I say and I feel myself yawn. "I know how you feel and that's exactly how I feel with Will. He's perfect but I want to know him before I get in a serious relationship with him. Especially with basketball you know?" Christina says. This is the first time she has ever said anything like that about a guy. Usually she just flirts with him and has a one night stand.
"Aw Chrissy's got a little crush!" I squel. "Trissy is actually starting to act like a girl for once." She teases me I just laugh and get into the shower washing the chlorine out of my hair. I walk out and Christina hands me a maxi skirt and a teal crop top to go with it. "You actually picked something out that I would like." I tell her. She smiles and also hands me lacy underwear and a bandeau.
"Put this on and when I come out of the shower we'll work on your hair and makeup."
"What about yours?" I ask her hoping to get out of playing barbie.
"Don't worry about me. We need to make you stunning, once Four sees you he won't be able to look at anything else." She laughs and walks into the shower. I dry off and slip on the panties, skirt and then the bandeau and crop top. I look into the mirror and gasp. The skirt actually makes me look like I have curves and also makes my legs look way longer then they actually are. The shirt fits perfectly on me and looks amazing against the skirt. I actually feel pretty right now. Christina walks out of the shower twenty minutes later and looks very proud of herself.
"You look good!"
"Thanks."
She sits me down and starts on my face "You aren't going to be able to make me look pretty you know," I tell her
"Who cares about pretty I'm going for noticeable." She says, and adds a little bit of foundation and some rosy blush to add color to my cheeks. She takes the mascara and extends my eyelashes making my eyes bigger, she adds eyeliner and gives them the piercing look. She adds a little bit of eyeshadow and is done. My eyes look amazing. They look like the moon in the night sky. She puts my hair in a waterfall braid and picks out her outfit.
"Christina thank you!" I beam at her.
"Anything for you." She has on a black mini skirt and it makes her legs look amazing. She has a white top on and her chest looks huge. I'm so jealous of her yet she's my best friend.
"Ready?" she asks me while picking up her bag.
"Let's go." I tell her and we make our way down towards the lobby.
