A lot of you said for Ash and May to be together so if that's what you guys want I will try to put some advanceshipping into my original idea
Pokémon Broken Heart
Chapter 4
Bold- what is happening
thoughts-(...)
Flashback/recap
Brock: "I think I know where Ash is"
Max & May: "Where?"
Brock: "The Orange Island!"
Max & May: "WHAT!?"
Present time
Max & May: "WHAT!?"
Brock: "Yah, that's the only explanation I can think of that involves lugia."
Max: "But how is lugia involved in this? For all we know is could have just been flying around and the feather dropped"
Brock: "BUT, you know that huge chain of natural disasters that happened a couple years ago?"
Max & May: "Yes…"
Brock: "Well Ash was supposedly the chosen 1 and lugia helped his free the 3 legendary birds from this hunter named Lawrence iii"
Max & May: "No way!"
Brock: "Way. Well it looks like we are taking a tip to Shamouti Island."
With Ash
Ash: "Wow so much has changed since I was here saving the world.
Melody: "Yay I know. So did lugia bring u here besides the fact you needed a hospital.
Ash looks at the ground and sighs
Ash: "Do you really want to know?"
Melody nods In agreement
Ash: "Well…"
Flashback
Ash: "Doesn't anybody know me?" He screamed.
Random Person 1: "I think I've seen you before."
Random Person 2: "He's the loser from the Johto league"
By now Ash had run out of town and May and Max didn't realize it.
Present time
Melody: "Oh…"
Ash: "Yah that happened. So I ran out of the city and then fainted after I told lugia what happened."
Melody: "Now that you mention it where is lugia?
Ash: "Nowhere ;)"
Melody: "Really?"
Ash: "Fine if I must."
Ash then throws a poke ball into the air and out pops lugia.
Melody: "H… wha…whe…WHAT?"
Ash: "Hey I told you he was nowhere"
Melody: "Fine but how did you catch him?"
Ash: "Well he sort-of caught himself…"
Melody: "Oh well ya can't change the past."
Little did they know that Lawrence's son had been plotting against Ash this whole time.
Lawrence jr: "I will have my revenge for what you did to my father"
