A lot of you said for Ash and May to be together so if that's what you guys want I will try to put some advanceshipping into my original idea

Pokémon Broken Heart

Chapter 4

Bold- what is happening

thoughts-(...)


Flashback/recap

Brock: "I think I know where Ash is"

Max & May: "Where?"

Brock: "The Orange Island!"

Max & May: "WHAT!?"

Present time

Max & May: "WHAT!?"

Brock: "Yah, that's the only explanation I can think of that involves lugia."

Max: "But how is lugia involved in this? For all we know is could have just been flying around and the feather dropped"

Brock: "BUT, you know that huge chain of natural disasters that happened a couple years ago?"

Max & May: "Yes…"

Brock: "Well Ash was supposedly the chosen 1 and lugia helped his free the 3 legendary birds from this hunter named Lawrence iii"

Max & May: "No way!"

Brock: "Way. Well it looks like we are taking a tip to Shamouti Island."

With Ash

Ash: "Wow so much has changed since I was here saving the world.

Melody: "Yay I know. So did lugia bring u here besides the fact you needed a hospital.

Ash looks at the ground and sighs

Ash: "Do you really want to know?"
Melody nods In agreement

Ash: "Well…"

Flashback

Ash: "Doesn't anybody know me?" He screamed.

Random Person 1: "I think I've seen you before."

Random Person 2: "He's the loser from the Johto league"

By now Ash had run out of town and May and Max didn't realize it.

Present time

Melody: "Oh…"

Ash: "Yah that happened. So I ran out of the city and then fainted after I told lugia what happened."

Melody: "Now that you mention it where is lugia?

Ash: "Nowhere ;)"

Melody: "Really?"

Ash: "Fine if I must."

Ash then throws a poke ball into the air and out pops lugia.

Melody: "H… wha…whe…WHAT?"

Ash: "Hey I told you he was nowhere"

Melody: "Fine but how did you catch him?"

Ash: "Well he sort-of caught himself…"

Melody: "Oh well ya can't change the past."

Little did they know that Lawrence's son had been plotting against Ash this whole time.

Lawrence jr: "I will have my revenge for what you did to my father"