Hello folks and thanks for the reviews i will put polls up if you want to decide what direction he should go
So please review if you think I making naruto too serious or brash
Fox plushi- I'm actually never gonna think about pairings but I could put up a poll when he is 12 .. I mean don't want him to have his first kiss younger then me lol and still trying to figure out how to undo bold words .. Hai hai I'm such a noob
Neo leagend-yeah I'm trying to not get him too brash but I do like your way of thinking but I'm not gonna turn him into yami just trying to mix those two in .. If it even working lol
Guest - let me look through my book to see if I give a crap .. Nope I don't :3 *epic Miami beach music going on* yeeeeaahhhh Enjoy the shitty yet cool ? Fanfic lol
As Hiruzen did all the options he sigh
"Alright all have voted for option- " jiraiya smashed through the doors looking scared plus his sweating so panicky too .. Yeah
"Sensei akatsuki got Naruto!" Shouted jiraiya as everyone just stared at him jiraiya sweat drop ..
"A group .. Of dangerous ... Bad guys ... who are S class ninjas ... who want the jinchuuriki and they kidnapped Naruto " jiraiya said very very slow
Now everyone but jiraiya sweat drop " jiraiya i'm not stupid ... But the civilians are .. " said a amused yet serious Hiruzen
Everyone begin to panick " oh may god we doom without our jinchuuriki "
And " noo I want my mommy "
"SHUT the Fuck UP! " shouted Hiruzen everyone gain their composure and begin to sit back down while going over the information ' hmmm Naruto my boy what have you gotten yourself into' thought Hiruzen
'Damn it now I won't get my little secret weapon to control the world at least i prepare for this' thought the scheming war hawk danzo while silently commits hand signs as a sign to commence operation Track Naruto and kidnap him (What kind of world has it come to for old guys want little children )
With all the children at the play ground as their parents at council
"Sasuke kun (gag) what do you think of Naruto the monster as everyone is calling him ... Sasuke ? Sasuke?!" Said sakura and ino to the focus serious looking kid called Sasuke
' Naruto so we meet again .. And in the academy the point is why did you hold back ... Your at least my level .. Maybe itachi will know ...I mean he is a top secret shinobi .. I remember when we met .. Naruto ' thought Sasuke as leaves flew around him while ino and sakura are in the background arguing .. Again
FLASH BACK last year
Sasuke pov
I was at the pond trying to practice my fire ball justu .. But I still fail to use it I needed to focus chakra into my lungs to kneaded it into fire chakra .. Which is not easy for a 5 year old except if your itachi
As I was going through the Hand seal Tiger Snake Ram Monkey Boar Horse Tiger which I later on had to memorise I took a breath while focusing chakra and using the air I had ,to 'fuel' the fire I blew out only managing a small bed sized which is weak compare to the average uchiha which I will never admit
I stop as someone said "your doing It wrong you focus chakra into having more air .. Like so your lungs can have more air to breath out more flames .. Or something well see you later .. Dipshit " I turn around to kill the little bastard but only saw orange and yellow and we met each time for half of the year until he said something about a old man needs help with stupid boxes
flashback end
Sasuke chuckles and that stop sakura and ino and they instantly swooned at Sasuke And tried clinging on him but Sasuke sprinted off home while silently crying out " help me big brother!"
With choji Shika kiba
" ahahahah and then I took the water balloon to chuck it at the other kid in my family who came around ahahahah " said a laughing kiba
"Such a drag kiba why don't you ever just play watch the clouds" said a lazy Nara called shikamaru
" or maybe watch clouds while having chips numnumnum" replied choji while eating his chips
"What and become fat like you no tha-" got interrupted as choji began to beat his ass
" shouldn't of done that you troublesome Child" said a amused shikamaru
Couple minutes later
"So guys what you think of the resident prankster Naruto" said kiba while holding his ribs and glaring at choji who glares right back
"You mean the troublesome kid who causes a lot of trouble and saved the day of boring lectures .. Pretty okay I guess" replied shikamaru while thinking of naruto
' what was that red chakra I saw glowing around him... And bits of golden flames ... Better keep notes of this strange event ' thought shikamaru
"He is scary numnumnum though he was badass cause he stand up and I respect a guy like that numnumnum" choji said through eating
With hinata and shino (am I missing someone!? )
'Na-naru-naruto kun a-are you okay ... I ho-hope you are na-naruto I rem-remember you saving me naru-naruto kun ' thought the shy and creepy hinata as she looks up and leafs flew around her ( lol )
FLASH BACK 4 weeks ago
I was sleeping on my bed when suddenly I was tossed in a bag I thrashed and thrashed and I activate my byakugan so I can see where I am and I saw I was in a bag with cloud ninja kidnapping me
And then I saw a flash of orange and yellow i thought it was my imagination then I saw him in the tree with my byakugan he was a angel in disguise ... ' amazing' I thought
The angel drop kick the cloud ninja holding me and it knocked him in a tree knocking him out then the angel froze then look at the bag that I was in
He left as soon as my uncle came and killed the cloud ninja in a few seconds .. I couldn't under stand how he simply dissaper .. But I did saw a blue and red flame. In his stomach connecting ..with a small golden flame on top I truly believe he was a angel
FLASH BACK END
'Naruto kun..' Thought hinata
"Eerm shin-shino do do you th-think naruto did was ri-right to attack the Stu-student" said a conflicted hinata
"It was logical to struck the person who insulted your parents ... Especially if your a orphan since it is rather cruel of people to do that .. especially to a child "stated a logical shino
" ye-yes especially orp-orphans" replied the shy hinata while pushing her two fingers together
" do-do you think nar-naruto is al-alright " said a sad hinata
"logically no but with Naruto's will power and determination he will be fine .. At least I hope so" stated shino
With jiraiya and Hiruzen in the hokage tower
"Sensei I was getting ready for the awesome entrance and I did it and then I Told my clone to take him to the forest for some training but he got hit and poof the clone gone and all I saw from the memories are red clouds on a cloak .. So I went to the forest .. No signs of Naruto or the akatsuki so I came here as quickly as possible after the search .. I did found blood .. And a patch of fur and bits of leather but nothing else sensei" said a concern jiraiya
' hmm could mean anything I will have Kakashi track him down with his summoning dogs' thought Hiruzen
" Anbu summon Kakashi and jiraiya it's time to discuss on why didn't you took naruto in your care" stated Hiruzen as he lean forward arms crossed
"Sensei I had a spy network and orochimaru and .. Come on I'm not even.a good role model for Naruto" said a slightly depress jiraiya
Hiruzen just stares blankly at jiraiya .. Then said "fair point"
Couple minutes later
" Kakashi jiraiya I'm giving you a mission a S class mission track down naruto and rescue him GO!" Shouted Hiruzen as jiraiya and Kakashi shunshin to the gates while focusing chakra in their feet to move much faster and consuming solider pills
' don't worry naruto We are coming to rescue you! ' thought jiraiya and Kakashi as Kakashi summon his dogs to start tracking.
Sorry for the lack of naruto and this. Chapter is for the day as I'm going to bed :)
And could someone at least give me a beta :) lol good day good morning good night good evening and good bye everybody! The ending. Song
I re made the lyrics and stuff from a song I don't remember knowing lol a friend mention to make one for shit and giggles and maybe for a fanfic who knows ;) anyway here it's about sauske sorta lol this is a special event cause I have my first three reviews so give ya thanks to neo leagend and fox plushi .. And guest
And thank you 170. Views :)
In a time of need only few can see what's wrong
millions tend to chakra but only those who choose can make it through this all,
only few can kill like ninjas 'cause we kill until we're gone
and we've got each others backs until we're back where we belong,
a kuniochi held my kunai and through the battle we did wrong,
a man who taught me justus through the war we recall,
and maybe when we' re gone our names will echo through the wars,
every start's got it's ending even when we've learned to rise above it all,
[Chorus:]
These lies are leading me missing its too much for me to stay
I don't wanna live this destiny it goes on endlessly
I see you so please stay strong
I'll kill you one last ninja and then I'm gone
I don't wanna live this destiny it goes on endlessly
And we once also had a story too
you can see that good ninjas only come in few.
Even in our greatest moments we may win or we may die
every ninja got it's rules, you've got to learn to make it through.
Maybe one day we can choose how it feels to be a kuniochi or a ninja
without rules but burried underneath there's a picture glued.
So when my body burns with the curse mark only ninja see the truth
Let these words strengthen all your views
because these words were meant for you
[Chorus]
An' now I'm floatin' right above my coffin as it closes I look down
I see as sakura cryin on naruto's shoulder.
I look up into the sky as the gates to heaven open somethin's wrong
is this destiny or am I goin' home,
what will happen to my soul will I come back I don't know,
will you meet me when its over let me know,
You can meet me here in heaven don't you ever let me go
This curse this demon is burning me away
[Chorus]
This curse this demon is burning me away