Okaaaay. Even though im having my monthly exams I'm updating because I got more than the number of reviews I wanted. But I don't know why I get the feeling there not authentic. I've never got this many nameless anonymous reviews but then again I might be wrong.
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MY NEXT FAV- AYO TECHNOLOGY BY KATERINE.
DISCLAIMER: I OWN THIS STORYS PLOT AND CHARACTERS.
Oh my.
After a second I could see the ground coming towards me in great speed.
I was going to die.
Before I hit the ground David caught me.
He saved me like the many other times he had. I wonder how much I owe him now.
Breathlessly I screamed "that was the meanest thing anyone could ever do!"
He laughed even harder "You think this is funny?"
He kept laughing "Laugh like this when you see my dead body!"
He stopped suddenly and had a really serious face on.
"I'm… Ahem.. Sorry"
He looked so funny saying sorry that this time it was my time for laughing.
He frowned "I say sorry to the first person ever and she ends up laughing"
I laughed harder "well you deserve it! I almost had a heart attack!"
He brushed my cheek with his hand and said "well.. I am.. Ahem.. Sorry"
"It's okay" I smiled.
He put me down on the ground and I winched in pain.
"Ow! My leg!"
"You should I think let me.. Ahem.. Bite It and eject venom into it"
"Eww no!"
"It'll heal faster!"
"Let me think about it- NO!"
He laughed "suit yourself!"
He picked me up bridal style while I protested. "Let me down!"
"Nope! Close your eyes."
I huffed and obeyed, crossing my arms across my chest.
It felt like I was flying.
After a minute we were at the camping area.
David still didn't let me go as my friends engulfed us.
"Where were you?" they all enquired.
"We were so worried!"
"David here- decided to throw me off a tree" I said venomously.
"What?" boomed Daniel.
"Hey! I was saying it sarcastically" I looked at David and said as a matter of fact "now you know why I don't say what I want to.. People just over react"
"I'm fine Daniel, put me down David!"
He didn't and everyone giggled.
"Will you put me down if I cry?"
"Maybe" he said childishly.
I suddenly grabbed my injured leg which hurt a lot! Thus bringing tears in my eyes.
Instead of what I expected- which was to get off- I grabbed his arm even harder.
"That hurt" I said in a suppressed groan.
A tear rolled down my cheek when I said. "See that tear. Now let me down"
He did as I said and added "you didn't need to do that!"
"Yes I did" I sighed.
Suddenly everyone's phone buzzed a SMS tone.
They all looked at each other and took them out.
They all read the text and their faces lit up.
"Uhh hello! People-standing-here-wanting-to-know-what-they-don't?"
"Lizz it's the annual party!" said Daniel.
"The one-" I started but was cut of by a squealing Tracy.
"We were all waiting for? Yes!"
"Who's-" this time silver cut me off.
"Kesha is!"
"Oh that-" Jake cut me off.
"Bitch? Yeah! Add slut too!"
"But-" Tracy cut me of again.
"I know! We were so suppose to do it! You were supposed to lead the committee!"
"Uh that-" Trace cut me off.
"Klutz"
"I-" Daniel cut me off.
"Hate her? Me too!"
"Me three!" added Tracy.
"Me four!" added Silver.
"Well, me five!" added Jake.
"Who's Kesha?" asked David.
I hadn't realized he was there too.
"She's-" I started only to be cut off again.
"She's a tramp!" said trace.
I rolled my eyes. They were interrupting me a lot!
"Trace, can't I even talk to my fiancée for even a second without getting interrupted?"
"Sorry" she said a bit embarrassed.
I smiled. This was the first time I actually called him my fiancé.
I guess David realized this as well because he smiled the sweetest smile as well.
"Kesha, well, is one of those girls whose always comparing herself to me, she's no good, trust me, I hate her." I turned to the others "I'm sure she's been having a blast with me out of the picture." I said venomously. "I can't believe she didn't even have the courteously of inviting me."
I took out my iphone from my pocket.
"Oh" understanding lit my face.
"It's.. Not working. Probably due to.." everyone nodded.
David took out his phone which was a blackberry "take this"
I took it and put my sim card in it. "Thanks"
"Don't mention it"
After it was switched on I received a new msg.
I read it out loud.
"Greetings fellow students, I kesha, yes kesha. Has organized the annual prom! You all are invited.. Hope to see you all there! Loads of love your future Prom Queen- there's no way you will be Queen, Elizabeth! Your reigns over!"
I scoffed. "Yeah right! In your dreams Kesha! I can't believe she's so free that she edited this text just for me!"
"Yup!" everyone else said in unison.
"We totally have to prove her wrong! I can imagine her face when she sees us all walking in" Tracy said.
"Yes totally!" I squealed "Oh I have the perfect dress and all! I've thought about it so much!" me, Tracy and Silver jumped up and down while Jake and Daniel sighed, rolled their eyes and shrugged saying "Girls!"
Suddenly remembering David's presence I stopped acting like a kid.
"Umm.." I looked up at David "I.." looked at Tracy and Silver. "Cant go."
"What?" asked Daniel.
"Why?" whined Tracy.
"No!" squealed Silver.
And Jake faked the crying.
"Cause.. I'm.. Umm.. Ahem.. Busy" I said looking away.
"Stop lying!" whined Jake. "You always look away when you lie" added Tracy.
I rolled my eyes.
I looked at David.
This time David spoke "Elizabeth you should go.."
I couldn't get any happier.
I ran and hugged him as hard as I could and whispered "thank you!" to low for anyone else to hear it.
He chuckled.
I pulled back and said "only if you go with me!"
"Really?" asked Daniel surprised.
"Aww! That's so sweet!" said Silver.
"Kesha will be so.. Jealous" added Tracy and Jake said together.
"uhh. Yup all the above! And I get to show him off!" I squealed, rolled my eyes and looked back at David.
"I'd love to accompany you" he said with a beautiful smile while stroking my cheek.
His eyes suddenly drifted to my neck and he let go of me immediately while moving a few steps back.
"Alright if we want to be there in time then we should be on the move because we will reach home tomorrow morning and then a four hour drive to your school and I'm sure you all want a good few hours to get all dressed up."
"Alright" we all said together.
"Lindsay's gone back with another vampire party that showed up in the hummer" whispered David in my ear. "Call her to give her an idea about what kind of outfits you all want and she can get it arranged for you all"
I nodded.
I took my cell out and called her.
"Hey Lindsay, how are you?"
"I'm good, David called me, describe your outfit" she sounded distracted.
When did he call?
"Um.. Okay, Lindsay is everything okay?"
"Yes."
"Are you sure?"
There was a pause and then she said "everything's fine!"
"Okay" I said. Something is defiantly wrong!
I walked towards the car.
"I want a red dress that flows till the floor and has a v neck with spaghetti strap, I don't want the neck to be a bit too revealing. It should be backless and hug my upper body perfectly. There should be silver sequence on my chest only. Then from the waist bellow it should flow brilliantly with a slit near my right leg that comes till my thigh. It should preferably be silk. If you could, please get me silver stilettos as well"
"Sure, it'll be perfect. What do the others want?"
"Umm.. I'll give them the phone"
By now we were all near the car and I had made it to it while limping with the help of David.
Everyone got in the Mercedes Benz.
James took the drivers seat and my friends got in the back.
I was gonna get it the back as well but David stopped me. "Sit with me.."
I nodded.
Since we were so many Tracy was sitting on top of Jake and Daniel and Silver were sitting next to each other.
If I got in the back I would be most probably sitting on top of Daniel or Silver.
But since silver wont be able to hold me Daniel would.
Makes sense doesn't it.
I smiled at the plain logic.
His brain really does work faster than ours.
He got in and I climbed in after him.
I was sitting on top of him and it was really embarrassing cause I could feel him behind me.
He lightly put his arms around my waist.
Everyone one by one explained Lindsay what they wanted.
When I got the cell back I had to grab David's shoulders and lift myself up and put it in the back pocket.
As Soon as I sat back down it vibrated.
What the hell!
This is super embarrassing!
I got up again and took my cell out.
It was one of my high school friend.
Hey! Are you coming?
Yes, I am.
Where are you these days? We all miss you!
Out on vacation with family.
Family?
Umm yup!
I didn't know you had one.
That stung Betty! Of course I have family!
Sorry I didn't mean too
It's alright.
Hope to see you soon! Can't wait to see your outfit. Even though Kesha is planning something big against you I know you won't get trapped in it. I'll keep you updated as I'm keeping an eye on her. You. Will. Be. Our. Queen.
I had to laugh at that. Even though I didn't want to be Queen everyone wanted me to.
Yeah, you too! Can't wait to see your outfit either. LOL! I couldn't care less. It's probably going to be a lame attempt to make me look bad. There's nothing she can do to even try to ruin me. I don't want to be a Queen. I just want to have fun. See u soon!
WE WANT YOU TO RULE.
LOL! Thanks.
This conversation really hurt me! God! I mean come on. I have a family. But oh well.
I didn't realize that David had read the whole chain of texts.
He rubbed my arm soothingly and kissed my neck while saying "you'll always have me and you will make a great Queen"
I smiled a little at that.
After an hour everyone fell asleep and I was a bit drowsy.
I yawned and turned my head to the left leaning against David.
David started nuzzling my neck.
Umm okay, that's a bit weird.
He started placing butterfly kisses along my neck.
Umm okay that's really weird.
Then suddenly he grabbed my waist.
Now that's extremely weird.
"David.." I mumbled.
"Hmm..?" he said seductively.
"Stop" I said breathlessly. Every touch sent shivers down my spine.
"hmm.." but he kept doing what he was.
Freaking out I said to James "James, David's not feeling well I think, what's wrong with him?"
It was like he was there but he wasn't. He seemed like he wasn't even listening to what I was saying.
James on the other hand was also spacing out.. "Hmm.. What?"
"I said what's wrong with David? He's acting really.. Strange"
As if on queue David grabbed my hair.
"He.. Umm" he mumbled something in another language and said "fine"
As soon as he mumbled those words David froze.
His eyes were wide.
He cleared his throat "I apologize for my misbehavior"
He shifted uncomfortably in his seat and glared at James.
"Am I missing something?"
James laughed and said "he's getting weaker and unless he feeds he'll remain vulnerable.."
"Vulnerable to what?"
"Magic."
"Oh, he was possessed?"
"Yup!" he said with a popping p.
"Who would do it?" asked David confused. "To posses me.. needs a lot.. of power.."
"Why?" I asked.
"I'm a pure blood, its no joke and the vampire prince. It technically makes me immune to magic unless its very.. powerful! Umm the weed around your leg was strong. Even for me. It was magic that's why your skin has gotten badly damaged."
What? Oh my god. This is bad..
I think I should tell him about the vision.
But it couldn't be possible.
Nothings going to happen.
Relax.
How could I? With David sitting so close to me I'd probably feel giddy the whole way home. Can you believe I'm not freaking out? Magic is real. How weird! Hats off to me! I really am taking this in calmly. Supernatural exists and not just vampires. Werewolves and witches and magic etc do too! WOW.
The long ride home was very long.
I rested for a while and I knew David was thirsty as his eyes often now and then drifted to my neck. Then he would suddenly clear his throat and look away.
Surely it made both of us uncomfortable.
As home was near I fidgeted with my swollen wrist.
It felt like it had been ages to the mall incident rather than a day.
Noting my stare David gently held it and kissed it but as soon as he did it he suddenly pulled back and placed his hand over his mouth.
I knew his fangs had probably elongated.
I looked at him and he smiled slightly with his hand still in front of his mouth. I smiled too.
David was strong. I think I like him. He has so much self control!
Mostly everyone was up.
Finally home came, we all got off.
Helped by David I walked to the door.
Everyone rushed in, excited to see their outfits while David whispered "Don't lose heart no matter what. Always know I will be with you till the end of time."
I looked at him confused.
I didn't understand what he was saying.
Neither did he look like he would explain any further.
My friends were no where in sight.
Probably rushed here and there.
"I should go see my parents."
I really should make sure she's okay.
David nodded as he reluctantly lead the way to their room.
He seemed as if something was bugging him as he was walking extremely arrogantly.
"Is everything alright?" I asked out of habit.
He didn't reply.
Now I was getting anxious and I picked up on the pace to my parent's room.
I thrust the door open.
I nearly chocked on what I saw.
My mother, lying on the bed.
Unconscious.
I froze.
It was a habit I had picked up from these vampires.
Whenever they were stressed out they always froze, especially David.
My father rushed to me "you must not tell your friends and don't worry she will heal fast"
"Someone stabbed her lower abdominal." I stated emotionlessly rather than asking.
My dad nodded.
They were true, it was true! And I hadn't done anything to stop it.
I couldn't breath.
Tears started rolling down my eyes.
"Oh my God! This is entirely my fault, I should have done something" I whispered. I should've killed myself..
"No sweetheart it isn't." Said father.
"Yes! It is." I walked toward my mom and gently grabbed her hand.
After lightly squeezing it I got up and whipped my tears away.
"I think you should let her rest.. I'll let you know when she gets up."
I nodded and left the room silently.
David followed me.
Soon the sadness was filled with anger as David asked "how did you know about the area of the wound?"
"Why didn't you tell me?" I whispered.
Before he could answer my question I went on "is this what you weren't telling me? How long did you think you could keep this from me? How long did you think that I wouldn't find out? How could you be so selfish! Out of the people I thought at least you were the one who understood me! Like really understand me! Not just what I want people to see. How could you do this to me?" by the end I was screaming at him, tears were overflowing.
He moved towards me and hugged me as I protested and hit him with all my might.
"I'm sorry" he whispered.
Soon I gave up and just stood there weeping.
Suddenly I heard a sarcastic voice behind me.
"Who died?"
I turned around.
John.
Oooo what's going to happen now? =)
Btw if you guys haven't noticed the trouble is slowly starting to creep up.
First the vision then magic. What's next?
ANOTHER LONG CHAPTER!
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Till next time!
Zoe.