Psychic Pokemon Master
Hey everybody ReapxFactor here and welcome to your favorite story Psychic Pokemon Master Chapter 13 yay let us see some reviews some people might not like it but those that have questions might want to read them.
Chapter 12- Dream Guardian King Allen: Oh no of all the the Jenny's in the world it had to be Mable, but this is your story and people voted for it but it was a nice little chapter no of the less.
ReapxFactor: *cough*, Marble, *cough* probably a typo, anyways I chose Marble for the reason that she would be competitive towards Ash making him become a better trainer by making him work harder and try to surpass and or beat Marble.
Chapter 12- Xerzo LotCN: hum i can do that and cool you gonna continue farther then kanto? or just have some from other regions? is that in the pokemon xd darkness whatever it was called cause if so i saw that mentioned in another story never played that one nor Colosseum and a good number of the mystery dungeon and ranger only a couple I've mainly just played the core game series up to black and white 2 though i started but stopped though anime like to 16 i think and manga not to much ... sorry random side tangent! oh makes sense though i swear it said so that he was the gym leader before she took over and he was co exiting gym leader with the fighting gym meh i guess i was wrong or read to far into it thanks ... hum other girls i got ideas for other region girls though those are off limits for now hum maybe misty not a fan of shipping her unless it harem shipping which this is i'd think maybe some character he meets in the anime for like one episode but meh it to far in the journey for all of them more or less maybe duplica?
ReapxFactor: I do plan on continuing after kanto and not stop it there, Duplica ah yes, almost forgot about her actually one of my favorite pokemon ships now that's a good idea, great now I have to add four more into the harem and Marble isn't even official yet.
Chapter 7- Dawn Ketchum Fan: Good chapter. Although I thought Sabrina was very insecure in her relationship with Ash. After all, he knew her name and she automatically thinks he is in a secret relationship with her and he heals her Pokemon and she accuses hi of flirting with is good that they came to a peaceful decision. I wonder what other Pokemon he will get and if there will be any more "sharing."Keep up the good work.
ReapxFactor: Most girls or guys tend to jump to conclusions even though there is little evidence so I just thought to use that at the time.
Chapter 12- Dawn Ketchum Fan: Good chapter.
This Marble sounds like an idiot. I hope Serena joins Ash. I do wonder if Ash will have Fennekin who while not a Psychic Pokemon evolves into one.
Keep up the good work
ReapxFactor: Emphasis on sound, she's not really an idiot, acts like one sure but is one I don't think so, I think your looking way too far ahead because it's going to take me a while to reach kalos.
Well now that that is over with
LET'S GO.
After a while of searching the gang had found a dock with a boat heading to Cinnabar Island and waited for the boat to arrive.
While everybody waited everyone had thoughts just because I want too will be shown.
'Wonder what kind of shops they have, I heard it's a popular tourist area, ooh I'm so exited' Erika thought with a sparkle in her eye.
'I hope Ash isn't disappointed when he finds out they closed the gym a long time ago, dammit this is bad' Sabrina thought nervously.
'I wonder if chansey is doing okay, I wonder if she has found a replacement yet, ooh I hope the Center is all right' Joyline thought also nervous.
'I'm totally going to beat this gym and get closer to competing in the Indigo League' Ash thought raising his confidence.
'Haha, they don't suspect a thing, soon I will find out the truth behind Ash and put him under arrest, but first I have to save the girls, they probably got hypnotized and tricked but they will soon be safe if my name isn't Marble ace detective' Marble thought also raising her confidence.
As all these thoughts raced throughout there minds they didn't notice two people sneak up behind them and take their tickets.
When the boat arrived the group had made their way towards the boat and a man asked them for a ticket, but when they checked nothing was there and they were tolled to move for the other people in line.
"What happened to our tickets" Sabrina shouted looking for her tickets, everyone doing the same but none of them had a ticket.
"Well there goes my dream of psychic pokemon master, I should have not even tried" Ash said with a sigh and laid himself down across the floor.
"How pathetic and to think you and everyone around you actually believed you could do it" Marble said with a smirk.
'Lets see here, from what I remember in basic brainwashing lower their confidence make them feel worthless and then they will A) Confess or B) Run away, now lets see how it works on him' Marble thought.
'That's right everyone, they are expecting me to reach my goal and have been with me most of the way, I can't give up, for them, for my precious people' Ash thought regaining his confidence.
"I'm not giving up we are going to find another boat no matter how long it takes we are going to Cinnabar Island and i'm going to get that badge" Ash said standing up and motioning them to follow.
"Why hello there I couldn't help but overhear your conversation and heard that you needed a boat and I just happen to have five tickets with me and I don't really need them but it looks like you do" a 'lady' said digging in her pocket and pulling out five tickets.
"Really, thanks" Ash shouted tacking the tickets, "Oh it's not a big deal, I need to go now goodbye" the 'lady' said walking away.
"Thanks again" Ash shouted waving goodbye "yes now we have the tickets necessary to go to Cinnabar Island and get my badge" Ash shouted raising his fist in the air.
"Are you sure that they are real maybe they are fake and just gave us those tickets to get us in trouble" Sabrina said looking at the tickets closely.
'This is my chance, the tickets are fake and when they try to give the tickets to get on the boat they will go to jail for piracy but then i'll prove the innocence of the girls and then he will stay in jail' Marble thought smirking.
"Let me see here" Marble said tacking the tickets "yep these are one hundred percent real, you can trust me i'm an ace detective" Marble said giving them a thumbs up.
"Well if they're real what are we waiting for lets go find that boat" Ash said looking for the boat that would take them to Cinnabar Island thanks to the tickets.
He looked around the dock checking each boat until he found the one he was looking for, when he spotted he frowned when he saw the bad quality of the boat but thought something is better than nothing it was an average boat but he thought anything was better than nothing.
Ash walked towards the boat and signaled for the rest to follow and made his way towards the boat.
When they reached the boat a 'man' walked towards them and asked "tickets please".
"Of course" Ash said reaching into his pockets and pulled out the tickets and handed them to the 'man'.
"This look alright, okay, if you would please make your way inside the boat and make yourself's at home and make sure to be comfortable" the 'man' said with a smile and gestured for them to go inside.
"BUT THOSE TICKETS ARE CLEARLY FAKE" Marble shouted startling everyone.
"But Marble weren't you the one that said they were real" Joyline asked tilting her head in confusion.
'Crap I don't know what to say, me and my big mouth' Marble thought inwardly face-palming herself and then it hit her a good excuse.
"I uh was just playing yeah uh playing I was just seeing how you guys would react if I said that" Marble thought giggling nervously.
"Well that sounds somewhat believable, lets just forget this ever happened and go inside the boat" Ash said with a small smile as he began walking inside the boat Sabrina, Erika, Joyline, and Marble following close behind.
"Have a great time" the 'man' said with a smile "yes have a great time" he mumbled to himself.
Well there goes chapter 13 I'm sorry it took two weeks for just a short chapter but I will try harder next time, it's really hard doing it by yourself and trying to edit some of it but I still manage to miss somethings, if anyone wants to Beta-Read this story you can, you get a preview to the chapter.
Well I hope you enjoyed I will try to make longer chapters and leave a review if you have ideas or want to flame me and be a big douche but you can, please.
This has been story time with ReapxFactor GOODBYE :)
