BloodLily16- No, it's not the Mara. It should have been though... That villain fits the description perfectly. I didn't even know about that villain until now...
For FanGirlEmma- Think older. A lot older and maybe a different gender...
thechamelioncircuit- I don't think that this baddie has ever been to Gallifrey... I could be wrong, of course, but I just don't know.
The Doctor
"AMY!" The Doctor yelled as he pounded on the thick glass. He saw as the little girl stepped closer to the Ponds and River, hand outstretched.
"NO!" The Doctor yelled as loud as he could and he threw himself against the glass as hard as possible, but the glass didn't even show a single crack. The Doctor stumbled back, holding his now injured shoulder, too overwhelmed by what was happening outside of the thick impenetrable glass to even notice what was taking place behind him. It was only by looking at his hopeless reflection did the Doctor see the black smoke that was forming behind him.
Fearing the worse, the Doctor turned and faced the smoke. It didn't have any form but it still curled towards him like crouching tiger, coming for it's prey. Frightened, the Doctor turned back to the glass and threw all of his strength into the trying to break the glass.
"NO!" The Doctor yelled with every hit. Exhausted, the Doctor tentatively turned his head back to the black smoke. It was getting closer, but yet at the same time it was slowing down. The Doctor turned back to the Ponds and River, who were talking to the little girl. The Doctor couldn't hear what they were saying, but whatever it was they were talking about, it was working.
"WRONG!" The little girl suddenly yelled, loud enough for the Doctor to hear and loud enough make the glass shake but didn't shatter. The Doctor stepped back from the vibrating glass and found that he was suddenly surrounded by the black gas and before he could even think he took a deep breath in.
It burned his lungs and made his eyes water. Everything was blurry and everything was starting to sting. Pulling a red handkerchief from his pocket, the Doctor covered his mouth and tried to get away from the black smoke, but he ran right back into the glass.
One hand covering his mouth and nose with the handkerchief and the other hand pounding on the glass, the Doctor tried to hold his breath for as long as possible. But even as large as his lungs were, the Doctor was quickly running out of breath.
Lungs burning, the Doctor uncouisusly took in a breath. The black gas set his lungs on fire and he fell to his knees, coughing. Looking out the glass, he could see that the Ponds and River running towards him.
His vision going black, the Doctor gasped as he fell on his back when his legs no longer supported him. He looked back to the Ponds when he landed, struggling to take a breath in with his lungs fighting every step. Amy was covering her mouth with her hands, trying not to cry, Rory was pounding on the glass and River was squatting by his head, looking down at him, tears in her eyes as well.
The Doctor watched as a tear fell down her cheek. He want so bad to tell her not to cry, that it couldn't possibly end like this but as soon as he took in another breath everything faded.
Yeah, short, I know. But bang! What's going to happen to the Doc now? Will he survive? Please review and give me your thoughts!