Mass effect Shepard rises
Shepard found himself standing in a ruined town bodies lay burnt, smoking and buildings lay in tatters, civilian shuttles lay burnt and melted the very air smelt of death and a foul acidic smell, Shepard instantly knew were he was Akuze he looked down at himself his armour was burnt and blooded his legs dripped with blood from shrapnel, his arms felt like there was liquid lava flowing through his veins, his breathing was shallow and hard his head spun blood ran down his arms and dripped on the floor he had no idea how he was alive and even standing but there he was, he stood there not knowing how long it had been until the earth around him started to shake shepard narrowed his eyes and held his breathe suddenly earth and metal and even a few bodies went flying and out came a thresher maw, it rose into the air until it stood a good 50 foot high its head whipped round searching for the flesh blood it craved until its eyes landed on shepard and its mouth opened and it screeched, shepard pulled his last three grenades and primed them a sadistic smile spread across his tired form " come on you son of a bitch you want me come get me" he screamed and started to hobble and then run towards the thresher maw, it went to swallow shepard but he threw the grenades into its mouth and dived out the way, the thresher maws started to move its head toward were shepard lay and moved to attack until it exploded as the grenades blew, flesh and blood went every were soaking the ground and what little buildings were left standing. Shepard slipped in and out of consciousness pinned under a large piece of what was left of the thresher maw blood flowed from his mouth making him gag when he was awake until blackness surrounded him.
Shepard's eyes flew open and he smashed his way out his sleeper pod a scream emanating from his throat, he landed on the floor and threw up all over the place as his body shook and his eyes rolled back into his head, doctor Chakwas and kaiden were discussing his L2 implant when they heard shepard the doctor rushed up the stairs closely followed by kaiden until they reached shepard, " kaiden quick go to my lab and get a sedative he's hyperventilating and going into shock" Chakwas watched as kaiden ran off she looked down at shepard and tore his shirt to wipe his mouth as sick spewed out, kaiden returned a moment later with a vile and syringe, Chakwas primed it and injected it into shepard who after a few tense moments calmed down "lets get him to the med-bay" kaiden nodded and lifted shepard into his arms and followed after Chakwas.
Shepard was floating in the dark he couldn't move or talk, he didn't know how long he was like this until at the very edge of his hearing he could hear a beep that slowly grew louder and louder until he could hear the steady voices of Anderson and Chakwas,
" what the hell happened doctor" he heard Anderson ask " im not sure sir all I know is when we found him if we were a moment to late he would have choked to death" shepard heard Anderson sigh but before he could speak the doctor cut him off " sir also I've found a discrepancy in his medical records" " what is it doctor" he heard Chakwas open her Omni-tool " well sir in his records it doesn't say anything about him having any cybernetics or an implant but when I gave him a M.R.I scan his got muscle and leg implants and a implant I've never seen before" " what" Anderson voice sounded shocked, Shepard forced his eyes to open at that point and when they did he hissed and shut them again as the light stung his eyes when he spoke hes voice was dry and raspy " doctor I can explain" both Chakwas and Anderson rushed to his side and looked at him expectantly " there from Akuze my legs and arms were burnt and damaged beyond repair so I paid to get the implants" he coughed and bite his teeth together as pain and dizziness washed over him, after a moment Anderson nodded and spoke " is he fit for duty doctor" Chakwas rubbed her chin as her eyes glazed over in thought "well his system still abit shaken but ill give him a stim to boost his levels and a anti-nauseous pill" Anderson nodded "after you have finished here grab your gear and go see joker we should be just about to hit the mass rely" shepard nodded.
Shepard stood at his locker fastening his armour to his body the shot the doctor gave him made him feel better straight away but still he was deeply concerned it had been a long time since he reacted like to Akuze but he pushed the thought aside to reflect on later. His armour now fitted and weapons strapped to his back and hip he entered a battle stance and punched the air testing his range satisfied everything was as it should be he started to walk to the cockpit.
Authors notes so what you think so far any suggestions will be very helpful and as you can see I've changed the name thanks again to ArchreaperN7 and kill-phil