Mass Effect shepard Rises.
Shepard found himself in the elevator "god why is this elevator so slow," he heard kaidan chuckle but it was Ashley that replied "not sure commander" was her clipped and professional reply "Ashley look im sorry we haven't gotten of to the best start but there's reasons for that and please call me shepard," he watches as Ashley smirks ever so slightly "of course shepard and no problem," they all stand in silence.
Eventually the doors open and the team head out shepard stops and leans on the railing thinking "hmm were would we find this Barla von be" as he gazes out onto the lake he hears kaidan reply "maybe we can ask avina she's the citadels VI." nodding shepard pushes himself off the railings and walks toward the nearest VI terminal which happened to be near a keeper going about his work, he walks to the terminal and pushes the button "welcome commander shepard how may I help you" the VI says, "yes im looking for Barla von," "yes he's got an office in the financial district its just over the bridge" "thanks log out" he walks away heading over the bridge as he walks he looks around at the citadel it's a pleasant enough view but something in the back of his mind knows its all an illusion from the fake sky and light to the fake air "commander I think were here," kaidan voice snaps his attention to were he is,, he see kaidan standing by a door with a sign above the door, he nods and walks in to see a volus behind a desk " ah commander shepard what can I do for you," weird how does he know me " yes and you must be Barla von I was told by captain Anderson you might have some information concerning saren," " ah yes normally this information will cost a small fortune but these are interesting times so im giving it to you for free" god what's with the hsk after every other word " if you say so," relies shepard "a quarian came looking for fist rumour has it she's got evidence that proves Saren was involved with the Eden prime attack, she went to fist in clora's den to exchange the information for a safe place to hide but what she didn't no was that fist betrayed the broker and no works for saren," he seems to mull over what Barla von said finally he speaks " thank you you've been very helpful" just as he's about to leave he hears " go to C-sec there you'll find a bounty hunter that's been hired by the broker to help you find garrus and take care of fist," shepard nods and walks out. " kaidan lead us to C-sec ."
After rather long walk he finds himself in C-sec he looks around and spots a krogan in battle armour with numerous scars across his face and a shotgun strapped to his back, the krogan walks towards shepard and says " the great commander shepard, the lone survivor of Akuze," " yes that's me now I was told that you would lead me to Garrus and then to fist" "yes follow me Garrus is in the medical ward with doctor Michel follow me," shepard follows but then stops and turns " Ashley, kaidan go back to Anderson and let him know the situation," they nod and salute and walk off, shepard turns and follow Wrex.
Wrex leads shepard to the medical ward and pulls his shotgun out, shepard follows suit and pulls his assault rifle out and opens the door, as he walks in he sees garrus crouched low against the wall and a doctor he can only assume is doctor Michel being threatened by a armoured guard, he spins grabs the doctor and put his gun against her temple " freeze don't come any clos…" he didn't get to finish his sentence as Garrus jumps out of cover and kills the guard, the fight that follows is short but intense when its over Garrus explains his desire that he wants to see justice brought to saren and joins shepard team, he leads them to clora's den were they take up positions outside the doors " want to bet 10 credits fist knows were coming," wrex says " right wrex you go left I'll go right Garrus you provide sniper support," a quick round of nods answer his question. Shepard opens the door and runs right his rifle spitting death at any in his way he focuses as a guard engages him in combat shepard throws a punch at the man with his left hand adding power with his implants the man staggers back and about to attack again when shepard spins around him and grabs his head and twists till he hears a crack and drops the body, he aims his rifle and blows the head of another guard, he staggers as his shield flare from a hail of bullets he dodges and sprints to the guard he shot and picks up the body he rest his gun on the dead guards shoulder and pulls the trigger until all hostiles are dead. As he drops the body he watches as wrex chuckles and Garrus shakes his head "come on fist is waiting behind that door," he walks to the door and opens it to find a spacious office on other side he hears a whine of auto turrets powering up "damn Garrus overload them wrex and I will do the rest," shepard pushes himself toward the wall and breathes deep he nods to Garrus how's Omni-tool springs to life and he starts the overload, shepard spring out of cover and fires his gun until it over heats and he ducks back into cover, he pulls a grenade off his belt and throws it 5 seconds later it explodes and all fire stops, shepard walks out of cover to were fist is laying on the floor a hand covering a bullet wound in his stomach, shepard grabs his throat and lifts him into the air " where's the quarian," he feels as fist gulps " she's not here but there's an alley behind the markets she will be there in 15 minutes, she thinks she's meeting the brokers men but really it will be sarens men," shepard tightens his grip on fists neck "bad move" he looks down as he notices fist has wet himself "ha what's wrong fist you scared…. Well you should be wrex finish him off and then meet us in the alley behind the markets, Garrus stay here and cover wrex," with that shepard runs out before he can hear there replies.
Shepard finds himself crouched down in a dark corner of the alley he's watching as a turian runs his hand down the quarians arm, shepard ready's himself by the position of the turians men he knows there going to attack he starts to move towards them slowly and quietly he watches as the quarians hand pushes the turians away and she glances at him he held's up his finger to his lips and shakes his head god I hope she gets the message otherwise im fucked by now shepard is in position he slowly stands up and naps the neck of the first body guard the second one turns to him as the snap echoes in the alley way and shoots his pistol, shepard combat reflexes kick in and he rolls toward the second guard and uses his momentum to upper cut the guard he watches as his head snaps at an un natural angle, he turn to see the turian dead on the floor a shotgun blast to the stomach with the quarian standing over him her barrel pointed at him " who are you." he lifts his arms in surrender " my names shepard im with the alliance I was told you have information on saren." he watches as she lowers her gun " my names Tali, Tali'zorah nar rayya," shepard slowly lowers his arms and looks at her right so she's about 5'5 give or take a very tight and snug suit and those hips wow she sounds really cute to he shakes his head to clear his mind " were you hurt in the fight miss rayya," he hears the cutest laugh he's ever heard "please call me Tali and im fine.." shepard walks toward her but before he can get near a shot echoes around them he watches in slow motion as Tali falls forward and into shepard's arms.
So what you think hopefully a better fight scene let me know hopefully my grammers getting better to any way please review