Mass Effect Shepard Rises

Shepard catches Tali and pulls her into cover he rips his pistol of his hip and waits, he peeks out of cover and see the shooter on a balcony, shepard takes aim and fires hitting the shooter right between the eyes so sloppy didn't even have his shields up to over confidant. he rushes to Tali's side to find her hand covering her stomach, he brings up his Omni-tool and scans her "no major organs hit I think your going to be ok," he watches as Tali slowly shakes her head and for the first time notices a light when she talks on her helmet "no.. shepard my immune system is weak… from years on the fleet… infection already set in…" he starts to apply medi-gel but realises he doesn't have enough so he disengages his chest plate and rips his t-shirt off and starts to push it towards the wound until a three fingered hand reaches out and stops him, "not.. Sterile…. Could make infection worse…." shepard reaches to her hand and squeezes it "please Tali let me help?" he looks into her eyes pleading with her, he watches as she nods and he pushes his t-shirt into it and covers Tali's hand into the wound "now there's a clinic in the wards can you walk," he watches as she tries to stand but shakes and falls back down, " right im going to carry you OK," he bends down and slips a arm under her legs and places his other hand behind her back and lifts her up, he watches as Tali sets her Omni-tool and arrows appear, he nods and starts to run as he feels Tali push herself into his chest. Shepard runs as fast as his legs and cybernetics can push him he rounds a corner and runs into a crowd of people shopping and talking amongst them self, he pushes through them and starts to run again he can feel Tali start to shake and cough, "come on Tali hold on please I beg you," he notices the arrow pointing to a door with a medical sign and notices its Dr Michel's clinic he runs to the door and open it. He walks in a Dr Michel jumps up " please commander place her on the bed, what happened," he slowly places Tali down and explains how she was shoot, the doctor nods and activates a sterile field, he watches as the doctor get to work he's about to turn when a three fingered hand reaches for him " please don't go stay with me shepard," he walks forward and holds Tali's hand " OK I won't go any were," he runs he thumb over her hand he looks to the doctor as she looks to Tali " the bullets still in there im going to have to get the bullet out its going to hurt," shepard reaches out to her helmet and turns her head to look at him " don't worry I'll be right here," he feels as Tali squeezes his hand hard as the doctor starts to remove the bullet. He looks into her eyes as she screams " Tali look at me its OK I know it hurts but you can do this," he watches as she nods and pulls shepard to her, he rests his head on her helmet and with his other hand squeezes her arm. The doctor finally pulls out the bullet and dresses the wound and seals it with a patch but shepard doesn't notice any of that he just staring at Tali and she's staring right back panting, after a moment he realises what he doing and pulls away and rubs the back of his neck with one hand but doesn't make any move to let go of her other hand " rest Tali im going to talk to the doctor," he moves to the doctor " thanks doctor," he says " it was a pleasure commander she will be ok she might have a fever and infection for a few days but she'll be ok" she says " how much do I owe you" he says at first the doctor declines but eventually caves in and shepard pays the bill " im going to go for lunch I'll be about an hour please feel free to stay here with Tali I'll lock the door to give you privacy," and with that the doctor walks out.

Shepard walks to Tali and pulls up a chair, he looks Tali over what is it about her that makes me feel protective she really had me worried there and why do I find her so cute he's so wrapped up in his thoughts he nearly jumps when he hears Tali's voice " thanks commander I might not be here if not for you," he notices her voice sounds rough and her breathings fast and shallow, " hey don't thank me im just sorry you got hit," he laughs as Tali's hands wring together in a dance that he finds super cute, " no your fault commander," he reaches across and pulls her hands apart " please call me shepard Tali now we got a hour or so, get some rest I'll be right here," he feels Tali squeeze his hand " you promise," he squeezes back and goes to stand he leans over her and plants a kiss on top of her helmet earning himself a chuckle from Tali " I promise,"

So what you think so far please let me no and thanks again to kill-phil for his messages as always pointing out my flaws and were I can improve im thinking of bringing Tali and Shepards romance into this story and not my second story should I or not again please let me no