I am grateful of the many people reading this story (1201 veiws so far) but I would feel a lot more comfortable if people wrote reviews on the story: how I can improve it, where I should take it, what you like and what you dont like. Please dont hesitate, I want to write this so that you enjoy reading it.
Soon the day came to an end and Jonny and I are just getting Jasmine before we leave. I opened the door slightly and heard talking, who could Jasmine be talking to I wondered when the conversation stopped abruptly I threw the door open and noticed a worst figure of my past sat on the sofa. I can feel the tears welling up in my eyes "you betrayed me" I shouted at the top of my voice before barging past Jonny and running for the stairs.
"Jac, come back" Jonny's shouting after me but I need to get as far away from them as possible so I just keep on running. Little did I know that those two scoundrels were running after me as well? I got to the penultimate flight of stairs and Jonny is catching up with me but I just want to be alone so I keep on running but I tripped over and tumbled down to the ground floor.
"Jac!" Several people called my name.
The floor is cold and hard, and my body is ridged, I can feel people checking me over and I can hear people talking over each other. A bright light is shining in my eyes but I just want to roll over and go back to sleep.
This chapter is only short because the next one will be from Jonny's point of view. I have separated them so that it doesn'tget confusing. I hope your enjoying it so far and please do review