Thank you everyone for the favourites and the follows. A special thank you to:
SurvivourHawke: Thanks for the compliment and for the review. I'm glad you enjoy my stories and didn't think it was cliche.
Sherlockian08299: I'm so happy to have your review and i think your new?...anyway glad you don't think it's cliche and i hope their reunion lives up to your standerds ;)
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ElysiumPhoenix: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the twist, i wanted to do something no one esle had done and honestly, it didnt make sense that the image of an angel became an angel yet Amy being able to remember it and it not coming to life. It seemed like a way to wrap up loose ends honestly - and though i love that episode, the ending seemed a bit lazy that way.
ceil-de-crystal: Thanks for the honesty and i thank you for the review.
The Yoshinator: SO does Winter.
Lexi (X3): Thanks for the reviews - and yes, River punched her - and they got married. Glad you liked it.
DoctorDaughterAshlynn: Love your name! I'm so glad you like my story - i try to make it as original as i can.
ElevensWife: *SQUEAL* Your name is awesome and WInter would agree:) I'm sorry you didnt understand it but i hope you do eventually. Dont worry, it wont be like others where they are constantly going between the two Doctor's so pretty soon Winter will be with one of them for the majority of the time.
Lindsey: Yeh, i'm usually like the other authors but i have no school so i can write a lot. Right now though i cant write cuz my mum's laptop is really slow and mine dosnet come back till - hopefully - the 21st. So...i'lkl try. But i'm also really busy all this week preparing for a talent show so...cant promise much.
Don't Hate the Crime part 2
Winter had found – from the TV show Supernatural, that there were other ways of braking an entering that did not involve using psychic powers, and they had come in quite handy. Using the lock pick she had bought, Winter climbed through the window. People were always so careless with windows; sure they would get the best locks for the front and back doors, but they never think of the windows. And because Winter had worked in Adipose Industries for quite some time, she knew exactly what windows she could fit through. After all, one never knew when one needed an escape route.
Pocketing the lock pick, she moved quietly through the building. Mrs Foster's office was on a higher floor so Winter thought she would start there.
Making her way up the stairs, Winter began to hear voices. She followed them, making sure to stay as quiet as she could until she reached a door. She could hear the voices through the door but she couldn't risk opening it – that was just stupid.
Closing her eyes, she imagined the door as a one way mirror. She could see them but they couldn't see her. When she opened her eyes she grinned; she could practically see the particles of the door changing into what she wanted them to be. Her grin got bigger as she realised she was in the perfect position to see what was going on.
Mrs Foster was standing with her back to Winter and she was talking to a woman who was tied to a chair. "…Officially, the capsule attracts all the fat cells and flushes them away. Well, it certainly attracts them. That part's true. But it binds the fat together and galvanises it to form a body." Well I guess I know what the Exoctolydomide does now.
"What do you mean, a body?" The woman tied to the chair asked. Her voice was borderline hysterical but even Winter could hear the curiosity in her voice.
"I am surprised you never asked about my name. I chose it well. Foster. As in foster mother. And these are my children." Foster took out a little blob of something pink and rubbery looking and Winter held back a gag as she saw it move.
"You're kidding me. What the hell is that?" The woman asked, upset.
"Adipose. It's called an Adipose. Made out of living fat." There goes the name then.
"But I don't understand." The woman said. Winter could see the sigh Foster had given.
"From ordinary human people." She sounded annoyed that she had to explain what it was to the human.
Movement from the corner of her eyes made her look towards the window. There, like she thought was the Doctor – and he seemed to be having an animated conversation with someone. Winter looked to see where he was looking and found Donna there too. Winter refrained from slapping her head; she knew this wouldn't end well.
Suddenly, Foster's voice could be heard. "Are we interrupting you?" She asked, almost amused. There was a pause and then, "get her." Winter could only imagine that the Doctor had told Donna to run because soon, guards were chasing after them. Lucliky for Winter, there was another door they could go out of.
"What about me?" The woman asked. When Winter turned back to look at her she noticed that Foster had left so she opened the door slowly and walked towards the woman.
"Yeh, that would be what I'm, here to help you with." She said. The woman spun around as mush as her ties would let her and looked at Winter hesitantly.
"Who are you?" She asked.
"I'm Winter. Winter Swann. What's your name?" She asked as she took care of the binds around the woman's wrist.
"I'm Penny." The lady said. Winter smiled at Penny and she returned it as she rubbed her wrists to get the circulation moving again. "Why were you here?" She asked.
"Same reason as you I suppose." Penny nodded, understanding.
"What do we do now?" Penny asked.
"You? You're gonna go home and write whatever story you want to write." It was said with such a firmness that Penny was almost scared to refuse. "Me, I'm gonna go and help the Doctor."
"You don't sound very happy about it," Penny stated.
"I'm not. But what can you do? Family is family after all." Penny nodded understanding then stuck out her hand.
"Thanks for saving me." She said. Winter hummed as she shook her hand and urged Penny to leave. For now, she had to find the Doctor.
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Once again, using the same device she had to fine the Joule, Winter followed the tracker to where the Doctor was. It helped to have a DNA Sat Nav on her phone – especially when she actually wanted to find the prick.
She followed the co-ordinates all the way to the call centre and once again found the Doctor in the midst of trouble. "You know it's against the law to seed Earth – or any level five planet." How did she know that? Why did she know that? And from the looks Foster was giving her, she shouldn't actually know that.
"You!" The Doctor said. Ahh, forgot my disguise. "What are you doing here?" She glared at him.
"Me? What the hell man? This is actually my planet so why don't you shut up?" They both glared at each other but were cut off by Foster.
"It doesn't matter. I'm advancing the birth plan. Were going into pre-mature labour." Winter winced. That did not sound fun.
"Uh – just – just – just – hold on a minuet Matron. Do you know what happens when you put two identical sonic devices together?" He asked.
"No." Foster said carefully.
"Nor me." He said grinning. "Lets' find out." As both sonics came together, they created an awfully loud whirling noise. It almost reminded Winter of the Weeping Angel's laughter and that made her flinch sub-consciously.
They all ran to hide in a storage cupboard, the same place the Doctor had hidden in the beginning. It was cramped, but manageable.
"She's wired up the whole building. We need a bit of privacy. Just enough to stop them. Why's she wired up the tower block? What's it all for?" He asked himself not used to anyone answering, which was why he was so surprised when Winter did answer.
"She's probably using it to contact someone. Wouldn't you? Otherwise it doesn't make any sense. But even then…"
"Why are you here?" The Doctor asked angrily again. He didn't need a reminder of what she had let Lucy do. He had been happy without her.
"Why are you here?" She asked back, just as ferociously. "I was percfectly happy sort of fitting in and ou come waltzing back. Can't you just –"
"What? Stand back and let it happen?" He spat. "I don't think so. Unlike you I am not a vengeful vindictive coward!"
The anger in Winter grew. "No your not! Because the almighty Doctor can't do anything wrong can he?" From her small corner in the cupboard, Donna watched the two fight. She wondered what had happened that had made them hate each other so much.
"No. You don't do anything wrong. You just take people from their lives, their homes and make it so that they can never go back again. All they want to do is follow you around, listening to you as if they were your pets and you their owner!"
"Oi." That was cutting it a bit personal for Donna. "Watch it missy."
"It's true and you know it!" She said this targeted towards Donna and the Doctor. "He fell into your life, did something heroic and promised you the stars! Whether or not you went with him at the time is irrelevant and do you know why? Because you still want to leave with him now!"
"Shut up you." Donna said angrily. "It was my choice! Who are you anyway?"
"That's what you think." Winter said more quietly. "There never is a choice because he dosent give you one. Not really. And I know because I fell for it as well."
"What?" The Doctor asked with a mixture of shock and anger. "What are you talking about?"
"You stupid idiot!" She told him angrily. "I'm from your future!" The Doctor looked at her, shocked and unable to say anything. He hadn't known, or at least, he shouldn't have. "I met you and you whisked me off into space."
Winter sighed as she remembered what happened. "This is getting off topic now. Foster has probably already called the mother ship."
"What did you say?" The Doctor asked slowly. Winter looked at him curiously and repeated her lines. "Of course. So far they're just losing weight, but the Matron's gone up to emergency pathogenesis."
"And that's when they convert?" Donna asked.
"Skeletons, organs, everything." The Doctor said with disgust. "A million people are going to die. Got to cancel the signal." He began dismantling the pendant he had gotten. "This contains a primary signal. If I can switch it off, the fat goes back to being just fat." He attached part of the pendant to the inducer but nothing happened.
"No, no, no, no, no." The Doctor cried suddenly. "She's doubled it. I need. Haven't got time. It's too far. I can't override it. They're all gonna die!"
"Is there anything I can do?" Donna asked the Doctor, sympathy in her voice.
"Sorry, Donna, this is way beyond you." Winter frowned ad the Doctor's blatant disregard of Donna. "Got to double the base pulse, I can't."
But Donna insisted, not giving up. "Doctor, tell me. What do you need?"
"I need a second capsule to boost the override, but I've only got the one. I can't save them." And like an angel, Donna held up her pendant to show the Doctor. Winter grinned at the woman. She was beginning to understand what her Doctor meant when he said how wonderful Donna was.
Suddenly there was a loud noise in the sky and everyone looked up as if to see what had made it – but of course, they couldn't.
"What the hell was that?" Donna asked loudly.
"I think it was the mother ship - or well, the nursery ship." Winter said, frowning slightly. "I really think we should leave now." She said.
"Hang on, there are instructions from the first Adiposian family." Something about the way he looked at the screen told Winter that whatever it was, was a bad thing. "Ooh. She's in trouble now." Quickly, the Doctor bolted from the cupboard they were in to the roof where Foster was.
"Matron Cofelia, listen to me." The Doctor insisted.
"Oh, I don't think so, Doctor." She said happily. "And if I never see you again, it'll be too soon."
"Oh, why does no one ever listen?" He asked. Because you have the hair of an idiot and your fashion sense is weird, Winter thought.
"He's trying to help you, you nitwit. Just get across to the roof." Winter was beyond annoyed; these people were stupid and most of the people the Doctor faced ended up dead because of said stupidity.
"What, so that you can arrest me?" Foster asked. Being arrested is the least of your problems dude.
"Just listen." The Doctor tried again. "I saw the Adiposian instructions. They know it's a crime, breeding on Earth. So what's the one thing they want to get rid of? Their accomplice."
"I'm far more than that. I'm nanny to all these children."
"Exactly!" Donna shouted. "Mum and Dad have got the kids now. They don't need the nanny anymore." As if to prove her point, the levitation beam switched off and Foster was there frozen for a moment before falling with a scream.
It didn't take a genius to know that she wouldn't survive the fall.
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"Oi, whatever happened to that girl?" Donna asked the Doctor, feeling guilty for forgetting the woman who had been trapped.
"While you lot were running off, I got her out of there." Winter said casually. Donna stared at the odd woman – there was something about her, something that was buried under all the hurt and the pain the Doctor seemed to cause her.
"Well, I don't think she'd have been able to take it." She said, happy that the woman was okay. "Well come on then. Off to the TARDIS."
They made their way through the alleyway until they spotted the TARDIS. Donna gave a sqeal of happiness and the Doctor turned to look at her oddly. "That's my car." She explained. "It's like fate, and I've been ready for it."
She went to the car and opened the boot. Sure enough, it was full suitcases of all shapes and sizes – there was even a hat box in there. "Oh yes. Planet of the hats." Donna exclaimed, getting the box out. "I don't need injections, do I? You know, like when you go to Cambodia. Is there any of that? Because my friend Veena went to Bahrain, and she – you're not saying much."
"No, it's just. It's a funny old life, in the TARDIS." The Doctor said carefully.
Donna's whole body curled in on itself as she said her next words. "You don't want me."
"I'm not saying that." T he Doctor told her, quickly trying to fix whatever he had said wrong.
"But you asked me. Would you rather be on your own?" For a moment she turned to look at Winter. It took a while but she caught on and her eyes widened drastically.
"Oh no. No, no, no, no no. God no!" She said drastically.
"Alright." The Doctor said slightly offended.
"No, you don't understand." Winter said, backtracking slightly. "I already have someone – not him." Well it was partly true, she thought. It wasn't the Doctor really.
"Well what is it then?" Donna asked.
"The last time, with Martha, like I said, it, it got complicated. And that was all my fault. I just want a mate." A small part of Winter's heart felt sorry that he didn't have anyone – at least, not yet.
"You just want to mate?" It was comical, the way her eyes widened and she took a step back, away from the Doctor. Winter couldn't help but giggle.
"I just want a mate!" The Doctor said, trying to fix it.
"You're not mating with me, sunshine!" Donna exclaimed. She was even further back, in fact, she was hiding behind Winter who was currently trying to not burst out laughing.
"A mate. I want a mate."
"Well, just as well, because I'm not having any of that nonsense. I mean, you're just a long streak of nothing. You know, alien nothing." At that point, Winter burst out into a fit of giggles.
"There we are, then. Okay." It was still slightly awkward between the two of them but Donna ignored it.
"I can come?" Donna asked with hope in her voice.
The Doctor smiled at her happily. "Yeah. Course you can, yeah. I'd love it."
"Oh, that's just…" Donna was speechless and Winter got the impression that it took a lot to get Donna speechless. She watched with a small subdued smile on her face as they almost hugged. But then Donna pulled away with a frown on her face.
"What?" He asked her.
"I've still got my mum's car keys. I won't be a minute." She ran off and the Doctor turned and began pulling Donna's various suitcases to the TARDIS, not talking to Winter.
"So what? Are you gonna just ignore me now?" She asked with an eyebrow raised.
"Who are you to me in the future?" He asked.
Both eyebrows went up. She was not expecting him to ask that question. "I cant tell you that Doctor and you know why." She said softly. Winter restrained from the urge to trace over the pattern on her wrist again.
"Why not? What's going to happen if I know who you are? You can't be that important to me!" It was said in anger but the Doctor regretted it almost instantly as Winter's face grew cold and stony. "Winter I'm sorry I –"
"Shut up!" She hissed. "Shut up and don't speak to me again Doctor. You sanctimonious prick!" She began moving away from the Doctor but then stopped and turned to face him. "I hope you know that right now, you deserve to have no-one. You disgust me Doctor – and do you know what? I'm glad you regenerate! The next you is better than you'll ever be.
"And I hope when you look back and remember this day, that you know that I won't forgive you. Ever."
Winter stormed off back to her home. Somewhere at the back of her mind, she was laughing at the fact that they couldn't seem to end a meeting without her storming away from the TARDIS. But right now, Winter was more angry that she had ever been.
She wanted the Doctor to be unhappy. She wanted him to drop dead right there on the ground and – No!
That was the Angel talking. She hated the Doctor, even more than before. He had stopped her so many times, and now she wanted his head on a platter.
No. Stop! But there was so much anger.
With a jolt, Winter realized that she had once again forgotten to inject herself. She had been so busy looking up Donna that she hadn't realized the Angel was getting stronger and stronger in her mind, and that last little burst was what had driven it to taking over.
A dull, cold feeling crawled over her but Winter fought to stop it. "Oh no you don't." A cold emotionless voice said. "This is my party princess."
The Angel could feel Winter slamming at the wall at the back of her mind. Now, now, Winter. I believe we need to find you're husband. I have a score to settle with him. And just like that Winter knew that it wasn't Ten the Angel wanted to find, and because of that she tried so much harder to break the wall down. But however much she tried, it was no use.
The Angel was too strong.
Hope you all enjoyed it. I would also like to give a special thank you to Anon who said:
You know this "review or I won't update" shit makes me fucking sick! Just get the fuck over your whiny review pleading
I would just like to say to whoever that was that I DONT CARE. Opinions like these should be kept to yourself or at lease have the balls to say it as a user not a guest.
If you dont like what i do then you are welcome to NOT READ IT. i dont care. My life does not revolve around what people think of me. If it did then i would cry at every little thing people said.
Anyway, same deal as last time - only it has to start from next weekend as i have a talent show this week and need time to prepare for that.
Have fun people :)