Eddie went in and was so happy to see his girl he gave her a kiss

Loren: well hello to you too

Eddie: see everything went well and know your here with your mom and me and your best friend

Loren: and I'm glad and don't worry I'm not going anymore

Eddie: and I'm glad

Eddie gave her another kiss and they could hear Mel squealing and they laugh Eddie was glad to have Loren and Loren was glad to have Eddie they talk a little more


Eddie: I think my dad wants to meet you

Loren: wow I'm going to meet Max Duran

Eddie: yeah he wanted to meet you since a log time

Loren: really

Eddie: Of course

Eddie got up and gave Loren a kiss on her cheek and went out

Eddie: go in pops

Max: okay

Max went in the room

Loren: hi Max is good to finally meet you

Max: well is good to finally meet the girl who my son can't stop talking about

Loren blush a little

Loren: really it must get annoying

Max: actually it doesn't

Loren: well that's good he talks about you how you're the greatest dad and how he loves you a lot

Max: well I do agree with that

Loren:

Max: Loren please call me Max it makes me feel old when people call me

Loren: okay Max I want to tell is that I really love your son and that I'm not going to hurt him like Chloƫ did

Max:you make him really happy look at him

Max and Loren both look at Eddie that had a smile

Max: I know Eddie wouldn't hurt you

Loren: I know he wouldn't

Max: well it was good talking to you Loren

Loren: and it was good talking to you

Max got up and Loren a kiss on her cheek

Max: oh and Loren

Loren: yes

Max: thank you once again for making my son happy

Loren: you're welcome

Max nodded and left

Max: Eddie can I talk to you

Eddie: sure

Max and Eddie went to the cafeteria and sat down

Eddie: was up pops

Max: Eddie I want to tell please don't hurt Loren she really loves you

Eddie: pops you don't have to worry I will really stupid if I ever did that and I'm sure this time that Loren is the one I really love her

Max: I know you do I can tell in your eyes

Eddie: really so what did you and Loren talk about

Max: about how she was happy finally meeting me and how she loves you and that she would never hurt you

Eddie: is that all

Max: and how you talk about her and how you talk about me

Eddie: is that all

Max: yeah that's it we should go for can say good-bye to her before visiting time is over

Eddie: okay come on

they went back and they saw Nora talking to Loren

Mel: well your back come on you're the only one that hasn't said good-bye yet

Eddie: I know I waiting for them to talk

Eddie saw Nora getting up from the chair and giving Loren a kiss on the head and heading to the door so he headed to the door

Nora: go she's waiting for you to say good-bye

Eddie: okay

Eddie went in

Loren: well I guess I will see you tomorrow

Eddie: I guess but I can't leave without giving you a goodnight kiss

Loren:

Eddie didn't let Loren say anything he gave her a kiss

Loren: well goodnight

Eddie: goodnight I be here early

Loren: okay bye

Eddie gave her another kiss and left Loren was now alone she felt really bored she had nothing else to do she just stared at the ceiling she felt her eyes heavy and she fell asleep


Trent couldn't help it anymore he needed to see his daughter she got his hat and glasses and left to the hospital he got in and made sure no one saw him he went to the James office and found what room Loren was in and went he was really careful he found the room went in and close the curtains that the window had for they couldn't see him he sat next to Loren

Trent: hey sweetie I know your sleeping but I want you to know that your daddy is her for you and I will always be here for you I miss you so much I wish I could be there with you and your mom but I can't now maybe soon

Loren stared to wake she open her eyes and saw a man she didn't recognize him at first then her vision got focus and couldn't believe who it was

Loren: no it can't be you

Trent: Loren its me your dad

Loren: no-no no your dead it an't be you

Trent: Loren calm down it's not good for you

Loren: your dead

Trent: no sweetie I'm alive

Loren: no your dad

the monitor stared beeping fast

Trent: Lo please calm down

Trent could get Lo to calm down so he went and called a nurse she came in running and calm Loren down

Nurse: how did you get in here you're not suppose to be in here

Trent: I'm sorry

Nurse: please leave

Trent left and nurse stayed in there with Loren for no one could get in there

the nurse sat down in the chair

Nurse: everything is okay now Loren his gone and I will make sure he wont come back

it was morning now and the Doctor went to go check on Loren and saw the nurse sleeping on the chair and he woke her up

Doctor: what are you doing here

Nurse: so man came in here and made Loren stress out

Doctor: do you know who it was

Nurse: no he was wearing a hat and some glasses

they both saw that Loren was waking up and mumbling something

Loren: no your dead

Doctor: Loren who's dead

Loren: your not my dad my dad is dead

Doctor thoughts: Trent why did he come

Doctor: I will be back please make sure she doesn't have another panic

Nurse: okay

the Doctor left to his office and called Trent

James: Why did you come to see Loren

Trent: I'm sorry I needed to see her

James: why don't you think you almost killed her

Trent: don't worry it wont happen again

James: it better not I will call you later

Trent: okay

they hang up and James went to go check on her again


Eddie woke up and he took a shower and ate breakfast and left to the hospital he got there and went to Loren's room and saw that her doctor and nurse where in the room he knock and the Doctor saw him

Doctor: oh hi Eddie

Eddie: hi Doc

Doctor: is Loren's mom here

Eddie: not yet why is there something wrong with Loren

Doctor: she had a panic attack last night

Eddie: what how did it happen

Doctor: we are trying to figure it out

Eddie: I can I still be here with her

Doctor: of ourse you can but shes asleep right now and if she wakes up please don't tell her anything

Eddie: okay

Doctor: thank you

the Doctor and Nurse left and Eddie sat down and just stared at Loren and waited for her to wake up


Well heres ch 6 I don't feel that cofident about this ch but I hope you like it