Hey guys! So I got good news and I got bad news! Good news is that a new chapter is up! Bad news is that my writing time is going to be reduced due to some exams. This is an extremely important year for me as it may be my last year in school (OMG) so I have to revise. I will try to squeeze writing in and I will try to update but the updates will be longer sorry. I am super pleased with the reviews form the last chapter! If this keeps up, I will have to write quicker! But anyway, here is the chapter, cupcakes to all and now for shoutouts!


Changeofheart505: Whoop whoop! Thanks so much!

Dragonscorch: I know right?!:D

Live Laugh Play Music: Well yeah!XD

Jack Frost Lover Cadi93: Yes yes yes!

Littleheartache: I know right? Thanks! Mmm… soon enough, near the end but that won't be for a while.

GuardianWitchDemiGhost: Yes he is! Thanks and there will be more.

Rychan6: Haha XD

Skylar Lewis: I'm playing a very tricky game! I had to put it into parts! Revision really makes you do things :D

Isi7140: Yeah, probably but with a broken arm? None of us can be sure of that.

Wolfrunner99-2: Haha, sorry about that, school gets in the way.

Wicked Girl99: Thanks! Yeah, I bet that shocked him. Dude you read my mind! I wanted to do that but then her secret would be revealed maybe. Trust me, there will be something better.

BabyBird101: Hahaha, thanks and I hope you enjoy!

Luffy1Ace1Sabo: Well, I was tempted to break his leg but that wouldn't be good at all.

The Hand of Chaos: Thanks!

AvelynnLoverxX: Thanks and do you mean stuck?XD

River the With Girl: Haha *catches cookies with a net* Thanks! *gobbles them down*

NicoCheesediPizzaAngelo: Thanks! I know, but sometimes when iread them closely, I can tell that authors that have already reviewed, have reviewed again. That happened with my friend's stories.

Alaia Skyhawk: I'll say! *high fives you*

Pickles: Awesome name! Thanks!

Foxglove: Haha!XD

Archadian07:Yes…! Hehe!

Caithlinn13: Nothing keeps Jack down! Haha:D I didn't forget this time either! :D Oh, it'll be more than that!

Rex888: Whoooo!

AliceCullen3: Thanks!

GuppFish: Hope you enjoy!

Female whovian: Thank you very much!

DemiWizard4: Yeah!

EuthoxiaPena12: Thanks you! Sorry but that won't be for a while.

Guest: Aw thank you! That will need an update soon but a few more reviews are needed first. ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUS!? YOU ARE PULLING MY CUPAKES HERE! I NEED PROOF PLEASE! HOW DO YOU KNOW THIS?!

Dragon Rider 2416: Yeah yeah!XD

SilverDragon00: YES!

Setia Prenn: Haha:D Thanks!

.562: Thanks! I think a prank on someone is due. Its 'surprise.' Now that is a thought… well I reckon that Jack's blood is frozen but yeah that could be true. That's something for me to think about. Thanks for that! Oooh! I love them, thank you! You have one too! *Hands some back over and eats some*

Silver Simmons: He was flying on his broom and when he fell, he managed to grab it. Its like in the fight scene of Rise of the Guardians, when a nightmare knocked into him.

DarkDOLLYYumi: I know right?:D

ThatOnePerson: Thanks! I could tell lol :D Wow thanks!

Guest: Thank you! Aw thanks! Any cupcake is good to me! Here is a cookie dough cupcake! *hands one over*


On we go with the final part of the Quidditch game!


Jack had to continue standing up on his broom. He could sit back down on the broom but to do that, he would have to use the wind and he didn't want to cheat. Not that he wanted to show off or anything but he dove down near the stands where the Gryffindors were and he let out a cheer that made the whole house cheer even louder in response.

Jack then flew back up to Malfoy who still looked shocked. "Gotta do better than that Malfoy!" Jack taunted, then flying past Malfoy, who had to dodge out of the way sharply. Looking to the side, he saw that Slytherin had scored a goal and he frowned. "I think I'd better find the Snitch before I lose the other arm" Jack said to himself.

Looking around for the Snitch and the occasional bludger, Jack's eye caught sight of the Snitch just a little away from him. Unfortunately, Malfoy saw it too. Both Seekers shot each other glares and in one split second, they both gave chase to the golden ball that started to fly around the pitch. The pair then became neck in neck for the snitch with Malfoy on the outside and Jack was nearly touching the wooden walls.

"That Snitch is mine!" Malfoy shouted, then jolting so he almost pushed Jack off his broom, so he wobbled quite a bit and his arm burned in pain. Jack practically growled at this and he was about to do something until he saw something next to Malfoy. It looked like a shadow but it was solid and it was rippling as if it was racing with them.

Jack wasn't the only one who saw this as Star had very good eyesight. She turned to Colin, the Gryffindor with the camera and she held out her hand. "Hey, gimme that thing for a second" she demanded and Colin held it to his chest.

"This is mine!" he said and Star grinded her teeth in frustration as she then grabbed the camera from him and snapped a shot of Jack and Malfoy and proceeded to get a dent on the camera in the process.

"Yes!" she said.

"No! You dented my camera! It isn't worth keeping now!" Colin said angrily, then stomping off. Hermione and Ron looked at Star oddly.

"What was that for?" Ron asked.

"I'll explain later!" Star said, looking back at the game. Harry looked at her.

"You saw it too?" he asked and Star looked at him.

"If we're talking about the same thing… then yeah… I think I did" she said.

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Jack was snapped back into focus when Malfoy jolted into him again. His eyes went back to the Snitch which he was gaining on but then he looked back at the shadow but it had vanished. Jack shook his head and he stretched out his good hand to grab the Snitch and Malfoy did the same. Jack was in further reach of the Snitch and this was when Malfoy took a step too far.

He gave Jack a particularly hard shove and Jack banged against the wall and he yelled out in pain. What Malfoy didn't expect was for Jack to bounce back at him since the speed they were going at made him bounce back quite forcefully.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Star managed to get a few snaps of it with the camera and Hermione was hogging the binoculars. Ron had covered his eyes, Harry's and Hagrid's eyes were wide with horror as were the rest of the Gryffindors.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Both of them collided and they both were flung of their brooms and onto the grass of the pitch. Malfoy's landing wasn't so bad as he only landed in the sandy bit were he rolled over a little bit but he made it look as if he was in pain.

Jack on the other hand wasn't so lucky. He was flung further forward than Malfoy, spinning quite fast before landing on his stomach and then his back before finally landing on his side which was also his broken arm side. Jack actually was in pain unlike Malfoy, as he let out a groan as he came to a stop and all over his body, he felt nothing but pulsing pain and even when he shut his eyes, he felt no different.

The crowd gasped in horror and they all stood up and pointed down at them. Umbridge on the other hand wasn't doing this but shaking her head and shaking her head at Jack! "Mr Frost is such a silly boy, jumping off his broom like that" she had said. The Guardians were already out of their seats and on their way down to the pitch as were several other Gryffindors, including Jack's friends.

Lee didn't say anything for a moment but then he gasped. "Wait! Jack has something! What is it?" he called, making the crowd lean in further. Jack, who barely managed to raise his good arm, held up a dirty ball with scruffy wings.

"JACK FROST HAS THE SNITCH! GRYFFINDOR WINS!" Lee shouted, causing the Gryffindors to cheer uncontrollably and for the Slytherins to groan but a few of them did clap. Jack then managed to sit himself up as he then saw his friends and the Guardians running over to him.

"Jack you did it!" Bunny said, coming over and then going on his knees and helping Jack to sit up.

"Yeah I did" Jack said with a grin, "Bet you couldn't do that!" he added.

"No I couldn't!" Bunny admitted.

Tooth had dived towards him and was hugging him. "Oh sweet tooth, is your arm broken? And your teeth?! Are they still there?!" she said, sticking her fingers in his mouth until North pulled her back.

"You were brilliant Jack!" North said, followed by Sandy's thumbs up. Bunny's eyes then raised up to Jack's friends who were coming towards him.

"We have to go Jack. Our potions expire in a few minutes. We didn't think this would happen but we will send you a letter. Your arm will be fixed at the hospital wing okay?" he said. Jack nodded and Bunny gave him a nudge.

"I see what you mean about Umbridge though. Bit of a toad if you ask me" he said, then giving him a playful shove and he and the others ran off back to the stands. Jack smiled but then felt the pain come back to him and he held his bad arm fondly.

Hermione and Harry were on their knees by Jack first. "Are you okay? That was quite a fall" Hermione said.

"I think my arm is broken" Jack said.

"Ah, that'll get fixed up in no time when we get ye to the hospital wing" Hagrid said who had also come over. Harry then took Jack by the shoulders and helped him up.

"Good game mate!" Ron commented.

"Thanks Ron" Jack said. Star finally came over and she was completely out of breath. She was wheezing as she placed her hands on her knees and held up a finger. After a few seconds, she stretched and looked at Jack.

"I was just talking to the Slytherin captain. Well, me and some other Gryffindors. I told him how unfair it was and asked for an apology. It took a while but he said he was sorry and one of the players said you recovered well Jack" Star said and Jack smiled.

"Well, let's hope I won't have to do that again" Jack said.

"That was cheating!" a voice yelled. Everyone turned to see Malfoy stomping towards them along with Crabbe and Goyle. "You deliberately knocked me off my broom!" Malfoy accused.

"Last time I checked, you guys were the ones who knocked Jack off first and broke his arm!" Ron said.

"Yeah, Jack didn't even try to knock you off!" Hermione added.

Malfoy was still furious. "Wait till my father hears about this! He'll…" Malfoy began but Star interrupted.

"Oh will you shut up? You cause all this fuss like a little girl and throw a tantrum when you can't get your own way!" Star snapped.

"Yeah! Just lay off!" Harry added to Star's sentence.

That did it. Malfoy pulled Crabbe's wand from his pocket and aimed it at Harry. "Incendio!" he yelled. A jet of fire came from the tip of the wand and shot towards Harry who was then shoved out of the way by Star who pulled her wand out.

"Aguamenti!" Star yelled; water shooting from her wand and stopping the fire. Goyle then pulled out his wand and yelled the Flipendo spell which made everyone, including Hagrid, fall over. Jack was the first to get up and saw some teachers, including Dumbledore, rushing over.

Malfoy was literally red in the face. He aimed his wand at Jack this time and Jack saw no words escape his lips as something black came from his wand and hit him in the face. All he heard then was a loud snap and the yell of teachers and his friends as his word itself went black as he collapsed to the ground.


Now that my friends, is what I call bad sportsmanship! Tut tut Malfoy, I think a prank is in order for you. I think those spells are right, my friend told them to me when I asked her. She is like a spell book dictionary or something! Fifteen reviews for more chapters and cupcakes! What was that out of Malfoy's wand and in the game? I think some of you can guess! So Gryffindor wins! Please give your opinions on how I wrote my first Quidditch game and on the chapter! Oh and there WILL NOT be any pairings in this! I don't know if I mentioned this before but I'm saying it anyway. Bye for now!

~Star