I few weeks past and Eddie was planning on asking Loren to re-marry him while Loren past time with Katy
Eddie: hey sweetie what you doing
Katy looked up at Eddie
Eddie: what are you coloring
she showed Eddie her picture then he looked at Loren then he got up and sat next to her
Eddie: and what is my other sweetie doing
Loren: oh just coloring
Eddie: oh really cause too me it looks more like writing than coloring
Loren: well there's something wrong with your eyes
Eddie: I'm sure my vision is good let me see
Loren: no
Eddie come on
Loren: nope
Eddie: Katy tell mommy to show me
Katy just looked at them and just smile
Loren: okay here
she handed him the paper Eddie looked at it and saw lyrics and he read them out loud
Eddie: In a world that's full of darkness you're my light
When everything gets heavy you're what keeps me steady
And when innocence is nowhere to be found
In you I find the cure, you're so good and pure
he recognize the lyrics is they were from the song we came up he re-read them then looked up at Loren
Eddie: this are from the song
Loren: yeah I was thinking about it
Eddie: well then I wanted to ask you something
Loren: and what is that
Eddie: will you Loren Elizabeth Duran will like to go on a date with me
Loren: I will be delighted to go on a date with you
he gave her a kiss
Eddie: come here my little princesses
He grabbed Katy and gave her a kiss on the cheek
Eddie: well a few hours and we can leave Katy with grandpa and grandma
Loren: okay Come on lets go change you
Loren got Katy and went and change her then Eddie called his mom and dad they came and were waiting for Katy
Katy: here is the thing that you wanted
Eddie: thank you Ma are sure you want me to give it Loren I could just by her on
Katy: yes I'm sure and this ring has been in my family and I want Loren to have it then Katy
Eddie: Thank you Ma
Katy: your welcome son
Max: I'm happy for you
he gave Eddie a hug
Eddie: Thanks pop I'm happy I found the one
Katy: we all are
Loren came down with Katy
Loren: we all are what
Eddie: Happy that you came into our life
Loren: aw you guys are sweet I'm happy I met you guys I don't know what I have done if I had never met you
she gave Eddie a Kiss
Loren: well here's Katy ready to go
Katy: come here Katy
she grabbed Katy and Max grabbed the rest of the things they needed said goodbye and left Eddie than call Mel to see if she did what he told her
Mel: hey Ed what's up
Eddie: I was just checking if everything was going okay
Mel: of you don't have to worry so where's Loren
Eddie: she's getting ready
Mel: don't you have to get ready to
Eddie: yeah I just wanted check
Mel: okay well I will leave you
Eddie: Mel please
Mel: Eddie please just go get ready and don't worry about a thing
Eddie: okay
Mel: well bye
she hang up and Eddie went up and got his clothes ready he saw Loren coming out the bathroom with her bathrobe and a towel on her head
Eddie: well there's my beautiful wife
he gave her a kiss she apart before the kiss depend
Eddie: why
Loren: cause I need to get ready and so do you
Eddie: okay but you own me
Loren: okay
he gave her one more kiss then left to take a shower while Loren found a note on a dress she had never seen
Note:
Lo pick this dress
~Love Mel
she wonder how she knew about her and Eddie going out she took out the dress and saw some heels and jewelry that went perfect with the dress she change and light curl her hair she put on her eye liner, mascara and did her make up light she finish then heard the bathroom door open and saw Eddie walk out dress already he saw Loren and was speechless
Loren: hello Eddie Earth to Eddie
Eddie: huh what
Loren: you zone out
Eddie: I'm sorry you took my breath away by the way you look stunning
Loren: thank you well thank Mel
Eddie: Mel?
Loren: yeah Mel she pick this dress for me
Eddie: well I will thank her later so are you ready
Loren: yeah
Eddie: well after you my lady
they left to Rumors and ate until an unwanted guess came
Chloe: hey Eddie valley girl
Eddie: please go away and leave us alone and don't call my wife that
Chloe: wife
Loren: yes Chloe wife you know w-i-f-e
Chloe: why her I'm the one who supposed to be the one married to you not her
Eddie: well you're not and I'm glad and why her because she's the most amazing person I have ever met she's was the missing piece of my life
Chloe: this isn't fair Eddie I apologize for lying
Eddie: and that doesn't make a difference you lie to me our relationship was all a big lie so please just leave
Chloe: you will pay Valley girl
she finally left and they enjoy the rest of their dinner Eddie payed and they left they went up to their spot it was decorate and Loren was amaze
Loren: Eddie is this part
Eddie: yes it is
Loren; it's beautiful
Eddie: well I'm glad Mel did this
Loren: Mel? why Mel
Eddie: because I want to ask you something really important
Loren: what is it
Eddie: its nothing bad but I know at first our dinner got interrupted by and unwelcome guess but the night isn't over yet I wanted to ask you is if you will like to be my wife again
he got on one knee and took out the ring
Loren: yes Eddie I would like to be your wife again
he put on the finger and got up and carried Loren and spin her around then but her down and gave her a kiss
Well here's chapter 24 hope you like it and I'm sorry if it's bad I'm been feeling tired and I have homework already
"I want to go with the one I love.
I do not want to calculate the cost.
I do not want to think about whether it's good.
I do not want to know whether he loves me.
I want to go with whom I love."
~ Bertolt Brecht
and If you wan to see Loren's dress go to my profile