AN: Hey everyone! Last chapter. Makes me kinda sad, I had fun doing this. Anyway, Thank you I'm awesome and y'all know it for reviewing and another Thank you to Kisses Under The Apple Tree for reviewing(SIX times, can you believe it? I'm honoured). Now, on with the chapter!

a/n: ok r u redy 4 more? Bring it on, Twila! becuz sum certain bitch prepz were comploining i got more editars ok!1 Are they fictional too? 'Cuz I don't see any improvement… GET OVER IT! No way! dansk 2 everyon hu lieks it! kep reding LOL GOFFS RULE FOREVER.

CHAPTER 12

Four days past and I relized that I didn't love Edwart anymore. Yes! A dream come true! I couldn't beleve it miself. I woke up in da morning wif black tearz of deep sorrowfull endless evol depression all crying down mah face. What. The. Hell? "Black tears of deep sorrowful endless evil depression"? Just saying you woke up crying works too, you know… I put on some Metalika musik nd cut rist. *Bangs head into wall*

"Twila are u in there?" someone whimpered from outside my room. I gasped. It sounded like Ed. Here we go! Someone bring the popcorn? But I just turned up the song and sang allong 2 it, screming "HOLD MI BREATH AS I WISH 4 DETH, OH PLEASE SATAN, WAKE ME" (a/n arent dose lyricz so menengful.) No. Especially since you and "Satan" aren't really on speaking terms right now… Or did you forget about that?

"OH FUKKIN SATAN NO WHAT R U DOING IN THAR!1111" She's singing along with a song, moron. As am I :) Edward exploded crying becaus he knew what this meant. Then can you PLEASE explain it to me? 'Cause I don't get it… He knew that I didn't want to c him because I had fallen out of love. How does he know that? Can he read minds or something? Oh, that's right. HE CAN!

"Darkness imprizoning me," I wept sadly. "All that I see- absulote HORROR I KANNOT LIVE- I KANNOT DIE!" Yes you can! Kill yourself! You can do it!

Sullenly the door broke down and a bunch of people kame in. Poor door… It waz all da Cullens I half expected it to be Satan's Horde or something. You never know with this story who were still alive n Jake (he had found hiz way out of da woods). They all storted to pin my hot body down This isn't the moment to remind us (again) how pretty everyone seems to think you are… so I could nut move.

"WTF ARE YOU DOING ASSHOLES." I shrieked. My rists were bleding everywhere. "NOW THE WORLD IS GONE ND I'M JUST ONE, OH SATAN HELP ME." I thought he was your enemy? Why would you ask him for help?

They turned off da musik Oooh, it was the MUSIC! Why didn't you just say so? nd I fainted. Why do you faint when all they did was turn off the music? "You can't do this Twi." WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP HER? I WAS FINALLY GONNA GET MY WISH GRANTED! They looked all serious. "We all entered da pakt by making out wif Hamez." What. The. Hell? They said nodding. I gasped again. You fainted. You shouldn't be able to make a sound. And what do you mean "again"? When was the other one? "And Twila, u can't deny ur felines What's that? for Ed." What are felines and what do they have to do with Eddy?

"Remember the pakt is that if you die, we all die." No. That only goes for "Hamez", not for Twila I woke up and asked "Yeah. But isn't the pakt just me Ed Hamez and Victory. If this is a question, where's the question mark? What's gong on?"

"I know lol," I promised. Wait what? You promised yourself? "I fink it was just a fase I just went thru." I've got a feeling there's at least five sentences missing… But then Carloyle Now who the Hell's that? stepped forward looking at me all weird. "Nu," Ni! Ni! Ni! he laughed darkly. "I told u it wasn't over Twila Beautiful Psycho Topaz Sad'ness Damian Cullen. First it was just Topaz, then it became Topaz Cullen, then it became Topaz Sad'ness Cullen, and now it's Topaz Sad'ness Damian Cullen? What's with you and all these random extra names? I was trying to make you not love my son wif my powerz so you would kome back to me." 1)Right, because that's not creepy At. All… 2) CARLISLE DOESN'T HAVE ANY POWERS! I think it's weird I seem to know more about the books than you, and I HATE the books, Twila.

"Well letz celebrate." Jake screamed. "Twila doesn't want you Carl. You need to get over it." You were flirting with this girl only one chapter ago…

"You really seem to understnad me?" Where did that come from? Carlisse froned confusedly at Jake. "No one has ever realli understood me." Neither does Jake. All he did was tell you to stop pining over Twila

So we all went to Vegass and had a party and came back to Washerton. Washerton… Never heard of that place. Where is it? Carlile and Jake got marred there. What about Esmee? Then Jake died sadly in an axident so Carliel Who? got remared to Esmie. Then I don't see why he divorced her in the first place. They got back together anyway.

"Twila this place isn't safe." Edward told me that nite. "Did u see what happened to Jake, It was a bloody ACCIDENT. It's not your fault if Jake forgot to wake up that morning… we need to go someplace safer. I know a safe place for vampirs it's called Black Cavern of Bloody Despair." "Black Cavern of Bloody Despair… Hm. Doesn't SOUND safe at all…

"Den letz leave at dawn." I said staring at him deeply wif my eyes. "We kan start a new goffic life." Excuse me. I gotta puke…

"Okay he said."

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AN: Well, this is the official end of It's Another Twila Commentary! Glad y'all liked it. I'm gonna do a poll on what I should write next. Please feel free to vote! Perhaps I'll see you again in another story :)

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