AN: Hey everyone! Thank you SparkleXRiverX for reviewing, I hope you all had a Merry Christmas! On another note, I've decided to write the alternative ending for Twila, not sure when it will be up, but I'll give you a warning when it is.
Warning: Attempt to write rape at the end of the chapter. If you don't like that, stop reading when Donkey gets water thrown over her head.
I think that's everything, now on with the chapter!
AN - hi guys hope u like this one Probably not im quite proud of it! Oooh, boy. Never a good sign… thanx for the suport from my frends love u girls!glad u like it! oh an VINCENT ur so dumb of course tiaa didnt go to math in only her bra Really? shes not a total ditz! She ISN'T? Evidence says she is one more time...DONT READ IF U DNT LIKE IT!NO frickin flames what is the POINT of flamin It's fun ppl there is NO POINT I just told you there is so f off! No
Capter 3 - uncle larry My favourite character of this entire story
I sa t alone watching tv at dave and maries house. I couldnt stop thinking about my encounter with Ewdard Cullen earlier that day. The one where you made him cry and then flew away on your magic carpet? Or the one before that? He was so beuatifull and sexoy with such amazing hair and eyes I could hardly believe he had notice someone like me! Yeah, 'cause who would notice a girl with shimmering hair, deep blue eyes and big boobs? Totally crazy right? Right… But I was angry at how he had made me feel, how I'd burnt like crimson hot flame wean he touched me and how he'd not listened to me when id' told him to fring off, If you didn't like that, then go to the police… and how he dared to touch me at all when he had a GF anyways, even if she was a mean girl with an ugly heart and not that hawt. I thought she "seemed okay"? But nomatter how much I try to hate him, I simply couldn't. Suddenly the phone range Wow, sudden change of subject…
"hello "
"hey, is that altantiana?"
"yah who is this?" I aksed.
"its Mike nooton Mike who? from your class! I was wondering if your wanted to go to La Plush What's La Plush? with me too morrow night maybe? Theres a party on the beech with whole crowd of us going and I thought you seemed relay nice You haven't even spoken to her for two seconds, and probably only saw her for five minutes… so I thought maybe youd want to me my date please? –
"arent you the guy who hangs out with all the pathetic Who're you calling pathetic? chearleaders and stuff?" "And stuff"… What do you mean? I asked
"you mean bella and jessica's gang? Since when are they in a gang? Sometimes I guess but theyr'e way shallow Believe me, Mike. Donkey's even WORSE and not as hot as you. Since you only care about appearance anyway, you're shallow too! You're pretty much calling the kettle black, here… And they can be mean sometimes.-"
"then why do hang out white them then you shallow CREEP! Why are you calling him a creep? and why are you askin me out when you harely no me mike! Because he likes wasting his time with idiots… Cos u think im' hot? Why cant you see your just as shallow if you want to date someone just cost of what they look like -I'm not THAT pretty anyways! No, of course not… And even if i was, I'm SO screwed up in the bran you cant even imagine! If that's the case, why are you still living in a normal home? u would no want to date me if you new how screwed up I was!" *Bangs head into keyboard*
"I would, tia, beleive me I would! No you wouldn't Your so beautiful you cant even imagine. Where did I put that bucket? I lost it after last chapter… Your so pretty people lose there minds when your around and forget there names and forget to brethe! Oh, please How can't you have noticed that? Because she only has attention for two things: 1) Herself, and 2) Eddy And I don't CARE how screwed up you are! It only maked you more interesting! Oh, PLEASE! Your cool and different and you are honest No she isn't about stuff! you are right to be angry with me. I'm sorry for benign shallow and dumb NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! OH COME ON! just give me a chance to show you how much I care, please? "
"well...ok maybe ill go along if I dont have anything else to do" i said, not believing a word he said about how pretty i was. Seriously? THAT'S the only part you could focus on? That only proves my point, you know…
"thank you altantiana thank you so much!" he sounded so happy If I asked you to kill yourself, would you do it too? It would make me happy… I couldnt help but smile as I put the phone down but my smile faded as I return to my thoughts. Mike Nooton was kinda cute and seemed like an ok guy but he was nothing next to Ewdard Cullen. Who's Ewdard? Even though I was anger with edward than I have ever been with anyone in my life and part of me wanted to chop his head off Then DO it! with a sore, A what? a part of my soul would all ways remain in that coridoor where we had kissed so hard and passionably. *Screams loudly while banging head into the wall violently* I creamed myself. Ew, gross My heart had soared that day like never before, and i new that no one else would ever make me feel like that again, then I thought how he was a cheater and a bastard and my face burnt with shame. It should I couldn't beleive I had behaved like such a hore. Surprisingly, or, well, UNsurprisingly, I can… I was scared of the affect he had on me.
"bye tiaa! We'll be back on Thursday ok?" Wait, what? mari put her head rind the door suddenly
"Ok then, have fun" Hang on, hold on. What's happening now? I wispered clammily..dave and marie where visiting relatives for a few day. When did that happen?
"you look so pretty" Right, because that's not creepy at all… she says, smiling -your the prettiest gril i've ever seen!" Suuure…
"omg whatever" You know she's your MOTHER, right? I reply. I hated it wen people say that. Yes, you've said that about 20 times now. I think I get it… I pulled my blond hair over my face. I was wearin Here we go a short hot pink dress How can a dress be hot? cut low with black lace frills at the bottom and black lace stocking. Why choose this moment to tell me this?
"daves brother larry will be looking after you wile where gone you'll be ok when where gone wont you tiaa? Donkey! I hate to leaven you alone like this!" You just said she wouldn't be alone…
"i don't need a freakin babysiter u no!" i was so embarasing, I could look after myself! Evidence points in the opposite direction…
Marie smiles and leaves the house.
"greeting What's wrong with a simple "hello"? a;latnaniana What? my names uncle larry" said uncle larry, he came in threw the door he was fat and bald with tiny black eyes and a red face Sounds nice…
"Hey - i said
"your the orphan arent you" he says "is it true you kiled your mother when she gave birth to you?" What? Whatever…
"Wat!" I cry, my eyes filling with tears
"your an evil bich arent u? Go outsite and wash my car" he shouts angerly Err, okay? I think…
I stood up and left to wash his car. I got soap and a bucket, afraid of what he would do if I refuzed. I went outside and started to wash hush car it was a red porche. So he's rich too, huh? He came outside and wached me and I new he was waching me! Yes, you just said he watched you… After a minite he came over and hit me hard across the face
"wft!" i shouted What fuck the? What's that supposed to mean? And by the way, people who don't like Becky's lemons should probably stop reading NOW. I'm gonna keep on commenting though…
He poored the bucket of water all over me and hit me again,. I was wet and crying *Facepalm* and he started to rip my dress and bra of me and rip my clothes. You're in broad daylight, on a street where more people are than just you He touched my naked breats and I try to push him off me I screamed at him to stop but he did'nt. Screaming too? Are you seriously trying to tell me NONE of the neighbours even THOUGHT about going and seeing what it was all about? He bent me over the bonet of his car and spanked me on the ass for half an hour Still no neighbours then he pulled my panties down and started to rape me! Perhaps they DID see, but they just didn't care. Hmm, *thinking*
"stop raping me!" I cry but he didnt stop! Who does? The pain was terrible even tough his manhood was small. *Facepalm*. Again I cryed and cryed but he didnt stop for hours HOURS? And you're telling me NO ONE saw, even though you're on a street, in full daylight, with people walking past you? and when he finally stopped he left me on the floor and spat in my face and left me there. You already said that… I pulled on my clothes and cryed madly and ran off into the seething Seething? How's that possible? darkness of the midnight street. Wait, when did it become midnight? I ran and ran un till I came to some woods and then I fell down in the woods and cryed. People who skipped over the lemon, it's safe to read again.
Suddenly a blast of white light exploded in head I hope your head exploded with it and my mark on my hand burned like a flame. Oh, please I closed my eyes and saw the face of a tall white man looking over me with no expression, his eyes were burning red and his face glimmered cold and bright as the moon,. Three words, really. What. The. Hell? I fell back from the brightness of his body, his hair was dark as night,.
"atlantiana?" he whisperd in a voice softer than clouds -my daughter?- Ooooh, the suspense!
"omg" I whisperd as my mind went blank and the world went dark. Hallelujah! An entire sentence with only ONE spelling mistake!
AN: Well, end of the chapter. Thank god. Anyway, third chapter done and over with, only 5 to go, please review and see you later!