HEY GUYS THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR LIKING MY STORY I KNOW ITS NOT TO GOOD BUT ITS MY FIRST TRY AND I DID,NT COMPLETELY THING ABOUT THIS STORY JO DEMAGH MEA AYIEYA LEAKH DIEYA I AM HAPPY KAY APKO PASAND AYIEA I GET 45 FOR FOUR CHAPTER OF STORY AND TODAY IS THE LAST CHAPTER I KNOW ITS VERY SMALL STORY AUR SAAB BOHT JALDI HOGIYA BUT I PROMISE KAY JO MERI NEXT STORY HAI WOH BHI DAREYA HI PER KIYION KAI APE SAAB KO AUR MUGHE BHI WOH BOHT PASAN AND MY NEXT SWTORY WILL BE LARGER THEN THIS ONE AND HOPE YOU LIKE MY NEXT STORY ALSO I WIL UPDATE IT ON SATURDAY AUR SUNDAY HA SORRY BOHT BOLIYA MEANAY
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.thank you for your review you want dareya aur sachive i will write different stories on them one on dareya and other on sachivi ok
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i know that kay zyaada logo ko woh pasand nahi but you are my regular reviewer to apkay liya unper bhi leakho gi and all other don,t mind it ap saab kay leaya dareya hi leakh rahi ho ha
IN CID BUREAU
all are working adi is continuously staring at sara staring her beauty she is just a flash of her mother he come closer to her and ask her
adi:sara kiya aaj hum dinner saath karsakte hai
sara:why not mea ajao gi tumhare ghare badi ma aur badiya papa say bhi millo gi
adi(suddenly) nahi ghare mea nahi hotel blue sky mea
sara:per waha kiyon
ad;woh to surprise hai raat ko 9 a clock ajana (and he left from bureau)
sara :adi ko kiya baat karni ha khuch ho leaken aaj to mea usay apnay dil ki baat bata hi dugi she again start working on computer with a smile
IN PARKING
rahol and ara come out from the car ara is going from their but rahol call her
rahol:ara
ara:(she is also beautiful like her mother )ha bolo kiya hai
rahol (hesitate a bit)woh ...ara...kiya ...tum aaj ...mreay ...saath dinner kay liya chalo gi
ara:ha kiyon nahio zarrore
rahol(with smiling face ) ok 9 clock hotel red wing mea theak hai
they go inside bureau
DAREYA HOUSE
shreya is busy in setting the cupboard (now she is littel old with some white hairs and glasses daya is also old have back white mixture hair with glasses )come and hug her
shreya;daya apko zara bhio sharame nahi ati kiya ise ummare mea bhi ape apne harkato say baze nahi ayie duo jawane ladkiyon kay baape hai aur harkatiya deakho chodo mughe thoda in safade balo ka hi khiyaal karo
daya :are shreya yeah safade baal dye say kaaly ho jatay hai aur shrame kiyon karo tumhe to khush hona chahiya kay shadi kay 26 saal baad bhi mea tumsay itna piyaar karta ho aur tumbnay woh gana nahi suna
AYE meri zohra -jabeen,tughe maalum nahi
tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawan
tughepe qurbaan meri jaan aye meri meri zohra -jabeen
shreya;are bus bus theakh hai apsay koi nahi jeet sakta (a vioce come from behind )
seyai meray kiyon papa its sara and she hug her father he to hug her
daya:woh to hai meri princess
sara:papa mumi mughe apsay permission chahiya kiya mea aaj adi kay saath dinner kay liya gasakti ho
daya;are yeah koi puchnay waali baat hai jao zarrore jao (she hug him again then her mother and left from their )
after 2 hours ara come and same thing happen
daya;shreya kiyon na aaj hum bhi baher hi dinner kariya
shreya:ok
they go to hotel blue sky
abhirika go through same situation they go to hotel red wing
AT HOTEL BLUE SKY
adi and sara sitting on a table weather was romantic hotel is decorated with flower and balloons
dareya enter in hotel see sara and adi they smile
daya:chalo unkay pichay wale table per ja tay hai and sit on the table that is just behind adi and sara table
start listening them
adi:sara i want to say something
sara :tell me
adi sit on his keens with a ring in his hand ;sara i really love you will you marry me
when sara listen this a smile appear on her face she nod her head in yes :yes i love you to they hug each other all other clap for them dareya come in front of them they got shock to see
shreya;to yeah saab chal raha hai tum hare beach humay batana nahi saktay thai hum thodi na mana karte
daya:are ha jab ladka ladki to kiya karay ga kazie both blush and they from their
same happen at hotel red wing
abhirika house
abhi ;daya to ab dear kis baat ki chat mangni aur paat viah kartay hai
daya:ha theake hai leaken mea apni betiyon say dour nahi rahe sako ga he had tear in his eyes
abhi :daya to bhi na hum ek bada ghre lay gay or saab waha rahay gay
daya;abhi mea apni beti kay sasural me nahi rahe sakta his daughter come and hug their father he to hug them
tarika:are to ek ur solution bhi hai humare ghare kay samnay jo ghare hai tum loge woh lay lo
daya:ha yeah theake hai
they brought that house in front of abh house
and children got marred over two best buddies become samthi now they all live a happy life together forever
THE END
A/N so kiasa tha itna acha nahi hai pata hai per sorry if i disappoint you next story isay ziyada badi hogi thank you review me and give suggestion sorry for spelling mistakes
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