The actual chapter 10 but I'm calling it chapter 11:
AN:
Thanks guys. 3000 views in one day. I couldn't stop repeating to myself 'Holy shit' over and over again. That amount of views is just fucking incredible! But it is one review for every thousand of you who viewed my story but hey at least you viewed! One thing I found slightly funny was the fact that my chapter 10 has 200 more views than my chapter 7. Anyway about 2880 of these views came from the USA *clap clap* well done but I am disappointed in my country which only gave me 577 views (UK). But then again I understand that fan fiction hasn't exactly caught on here yet. Anyway the vote is still up and please do vote because I need to know these things. I also noticed a bit of a plot hole in that Harry is the first human there in centuries and yet Tonks is there… so she'll be either a vampire or elf. Anyway ON WITH THE STORY…
Chapter 11:
As Harry entered the Great Hall he attracted stares, once again. Sighing he sat down next to Tonks and her giggling friends. 'Why is everyone staring at me and why are your friends looking at me, blushing and then giggling again?' Harry mumbled to Tonks.
'Harry, you just took down one the most hated people in the school, you're a human, you displayed a ridiculous amount of power at dinner and then your magic takes on the form of a dementor to kill the most hated guy in the school and I'd say that's cause enough for quite a few girls to be attracted to you.'
Her friends giggled and blushed once again at this. Harry merely raised an eyebrow and looked around the hall. Sure enough quite a few girls were eying him up and a few boys. Vampires Harry shuddered who decided to make them attracted to power. Harry had nothing against Homophobic people, he merely didn't like them when they were eying him up like a piece of meat and when he would probably be drained of his magic if he was in a room alone with them. As breakfast finished a man slammed open the doors and came storming in. So this is Alastair Nekovitch. The man wasn't completely ripped like he first imagined, instead he obviously was strong but the main thing about him was his eyes, they were green, with hints of red and black but they had this sparkle about them. It's hard to describe the sparkle, it was obviously intelligent, but not cold, but not warm either. It was a sparkle of life Harry finally came up with. There's no other way to describe it. Nekovitch then eyed all of the new year up. 'You have come here to learn' he spoke in a voice, smooth as silk, but a lot more dangerous 'In my class you will listen, or you will die and painfully. My class has the highest death rating and that is just from people who don't listen, not the people I don't like, they usually die some other way.' He finished with a slight grin, showing his fangs and then swept back out of the Great Hall, leaving behind a shocked crowd. That would be the Bloodmagiks teacher. Harry thought, he was right, it was.
(An: I have lengthened this chapter and I have to say… FUCKING HELL! 4500 VIEWS IN ONE DAY! HOLY SHIT! Now with that out the way I must say that I am surprised. On a worse note this means less than one in a hundred of you clicked that review button 0_0. And that's with the reviews posted beforehand. In reality compared to the total number of views I have about 1 in 1500 of you decide to review. I'll be honest and say thank you to all reviewers for reviewing but the rest of you REVIEW! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT TO CHANGE AND WHAT TO KEEP THE SAME! IT MATTERS! And a new word shall appear later Hek magic. This is basically Hell magic – summoning demons and the magic that is actually actively evil, not dark. And with that out the way continue on with the story…)
Flashback
Harry was in The Headmistresses office.
'You performed a blood ritual?' Rafael asked, shocked.
'Yes.' Harry said nonchalantly. 'It was fun.'
At this the Headmistresses mouth dropped even closer to the floor, if that was possible.
'FUN? FUN? CUTTING YOURSELF AND POTENTIALLY KILLING YOURSELF IS FUN? THE ONLY PERSON TO HAVE CALLED IT FUN IS ALASTAIR! AND HE'S A BLOODY VAMPIRE!'
'Yep. I would consider it fun.'
'So what ritual did you actually do?'
'One to improve my eyesight, give me my animagus form and then the last one to remove the horcrux from my head.' At this Rafael's head snapped up.
'What do you know of horcruxes' Rafael spat out the word like a curse.
'All I know is that it's a piece of someone's soul to keep them tethered to the mortal plane.' Harry held his hands up in a calming gesture, as Rafael looked ready to explode.
'Also that it's very dark magic.' At this Harry mentally cursed, he may not agree with the English opinion of dark magic, but it still slipped out sometimes.
'Not just dark magic.' She spoke with some warning here. 'Hek magic.'
Harry shivered as it was spoken. Hek magic was the worst kind of magic possible for a wizard to perform. While some Dark magic might be considered evil, Hek magic was evil. And actively so. It was not to be messed with as the practitioner either had to make a deal with a demon, bond with a demon or sacrifice part of themselves. It was never good. Dark lords despite being 'evil' rarely ever do Hek magic, for even they know what could happen. A lifetime of heaven on earth for an eternity of torture in hell. Some parts of Hek magic supposedly allow the user immortality but Demons are crafty creatures, they either just want your soul and will find a way to do it or, more worryingly, are thinking of a grander invasion. For years Earth has been contested by two races. Elves, and Demons. The Demons just want Earth and to enslave all of humankind, the elves hate the humans but realise that the Demons won't stop with Earth and it was easier to fight them i situation rather than the Demons populating Earth and massively outnumbering them. So the Elves, however reluctantly, help the Humans whenever a situation with Demons pops up. For Voldemort to have made a, rather literal, deal with the devil was more than worrying.
Rafael shook her head, as if to dislodge the thought from her head. 'Anyway I'll tell Alastair to examine your blood talent and maybe move you up a class or two.'
Harry frowned at this, not really liking the man, but went along with it anyway.
'Anyway its late, I need to sleep, so do you!' Rafael spoke.
Harry merely nodded, deep in thought, and left the room.
Flashback end
After Harry finally made it to the classroom, he was late and a little angry. I could fucking swear that staircase was there before. As he entered the classroom, Alastair was there. He merely glanced at Harry as he walked past and spoke 'You're late Mr. Potter.'
'Sorry sir.'
'Very well, sit down' He motioned to a desk on the front row, which was noticeably empty. Anyone on the row always gets called upon for answers and to demonstrate a practical he remembered Tonks saying. He simply sighed, sat down and looked at the board.
An:
I am delaying the classroom bit for as long as possible because I simply have no idea how to do it! Anyway answers to some reviews (sorry it took so long).
ICE-SIREN27 – It has improved – thank you. And I might go to chapter 20, then combine chapters 1 – 10 together, then go to ch 30 and combine ch 10 – 20 together.
Lordof reviews (aka anonymous guest#3) – yes it is very sad they were not finished, but damn incredible stories!
Anonymous guest#4 – I do try but meh I was close enough.
NCIS FTW – Thank you my continuous reviewer! And yes, but not in the way you might think.
anarion87 – thank you.
Danneyland – Congratulations on the longest review I've ever seen! You do raise some good points though. Dumbledore does know that there's a kid missing, but doesn't really give a shit! And I wonder to because I honestly have no clue. And I still have no clue what Tonks should be, Harry is going to be something light, I think being a metamorph is enough, maybe expand a bit on that? Make it that being a metamorph means you are not human.
He-with-Many-Hyphens – I am 13 years old – I am allowed to make some mistakes (and an overuse of commas!) and I have constantly apologised for the chapters. They really are a bitch in class, especially if you have multiple tests that day!
Any way review and do your own shit.