Chapter 2 The Goddess
Hey, everybody, I am back, again. I was really busy for the week and yeah.
Right now, I'm feeling much better, the shower was like a healing/rejuvenation chamber, it was so relaxing it was like I was in a massage chair.
I return from my nephew's first birthday party. Yeah, he's my nephew and I'm his uncle who is literally 14!
I realize that I had spelling errors and grammar when I checked over chapter 1.
Sorry about that guys, I was probably on a rush or so i think.
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After I finish this chapter I'll be writing Chapter 8 for Pokemon: Advanced Life. On Sunday, oh yeah, I have to go school on that day. (Give me minute,)(Goddamit!)(Mother...trucker!)
(Whew!, okay, I'm better now.)(I have to go to school for language class, or in other words, Vietnamese, yeah, I don't even know my own heritage or language)(Wow, great job Xtor50, you did it again, congrats for not learning your own language for the past 14 years.)
Also on Monday I'll be going to my friend's house so I can't post this chapter yet until by Wednsday at the least, so sorry.
Anyway enough of that, thing of craziness, let's get this chapter started.
So here it is folks Chapter 2 The Goddess...
"Woah, nice palace." Awed Ash as he entered the massive palace, with diamond floors, high tech tv, floating tables and chairs and lots more.
"Thank you, you may have a seat on the couch." Said the goddess as she appeared from upstairs.
She was beautiful, just like a heavenly angel floating through the glittering sky.
Her hair was like a rainbow, had a nice figure and had shining blue eyes. She wored a white dress, with crystal like slippers and a gold necklace.
Her long rainbow like hair glittered through the lights of the palace and Ash was gazing at her and drooling.
"Uhh, excuse me, are you okay?" Asked the beautiful goddess.
"Uhh, oh sorry, I was spacing off back there." Replied Ash.
"Woah, she's gorgeous, her rainbow hair is like she was made out of gold, damn, her hourglass figure, my god, I wish I could date her but she's a goddess, I can't." Thought Ash as he continued to stared at the goddess.
"Excuse me, please stop staring at me like that, it's weird." Said the goddess as she was embarrassed that a teenage boy was looking at her like that.
"Sorry, I-I just thought you were pretty, that's all." Said Ash. "What the hell am I doing, I can't date a goddess!, I'm a mortal and she's a smoking hot rainbowed long hair goddess, with nice clothing and hour glass figure!, I can't!" Thoughted Ash.
"Are you okay?" Asked the goddess.
"Oh, I'm alright I was a-a little drunk, yeah drunk." Said Ash.
"Drunk?, anyway I'm Valerie nice to meet you." Said the goddess.
"Yeah, nice to meet you, the name's Ash." Said Ash.
"Ash, it seems to me that you lied to me when you told me that you were drunk, you're a teenage boy, you're to young to drink alcohol, and you were in a car accident, there's no possible way that could be drunk." Said Valerie.
"Uhhh-." Spaced out Ash.
"It's okay, I'm fine with that, and besides you are dead so drinking alcohol makes no difference, and also, when you told me that I was pretty that was nice of you to say that, that's very kind of you." Said Valerie as she blushed a little when Ash said that.
"It's no problem, it's just that all the girls I've seen you're very pretty, and you're a goddess, oh and what kind of a goddess are you?" Asked Ash.
"I'm the goddess of dreams or wishes if you want to call me that too." Replied Valerie.
"I see." Said Ash.
"When I reached above the clouds, I felt chills run down my spine, like darkness was taking over me." Said Ash.
"I guess, I'll tell you the full story now that you are here." Said Valerie.
"What story?" Asked Ash.
"When people die in the world of the living, the ones who have good hearts can enter heaven, while the others who have cold heart are sent to hell."
"Those who are sent to hell, rebelled against the gods in heaven.""Even gods from heaven can be banished in hell.""They were also able to gain the trust of Hades the god of the underworld." Said Valerie.
"God of the underworld Hades!?" Said an surprised Ash.
"Yes, that's correct, Hades and the people of hell worked together to gain trust with other banished gods, which they were able to succeed." Replied Valerie.
"That's bad news." Said Ash.
"Now in the present day, 40 banished gods including Hades and billions of people of hell, were able to break the barrier of hell and entered heaven."
"Soon they were able to take control of heaven after killing the-the god's counselor Shunhei, soon after they-they started destroying sacred cities and killed gods." Cried Valerie.
It's okay, please don't cry, please, I'm here with you we can try to stop them, even though I don't have the powers to stop them." Said Ash as he tried to cheer up Valerie.
"Thank you Ash, much appreciated." Cried Valerie as she weep on Ash.
"It's no problem, glad to help." Replied Ash.
"Ash, since you are here, you are our last hope, the remaining gods in heaven remain hiding to plan out a strategy and fighting to protect the innocent, please Ash." Sniffed Valerie as she gave Ash some puppy dog eyes.
"I was about do that anyway, but I'm merely human, I can't do anything against a god." Said Ash.
"Then, how bout I'll grant you a wish, I am the goddess of wishes after all am I." Said Valerie.
"Yeah, that's right." Replied Ash.
"What should I wish for?, hmmm..., maybe become my girlfriend, no!, this is not the time!" Thought Ash as he thanked about his wish.
"Hmm..., alright, I got it!" Thought Ash.
"Valerie, I wish for a weapon, that has strength and durability from my emotions and desire." Said Ash.
"Very well then, your wish has been granted." Said Valerie as she raised both her arms to a 45 degree angle and chanted.
"The wind, the stars, the emotions and desires, form into one, and bring your essence to life, to protect others to those in need, come forth!" Exclaimed Valerie as she chanted.
Soon a large flash of light shine the palace, like blossoms blooming.
Then a dark long katana, with black and blue strapped handle with black chains appeared in Valerie's hand. (It's kinda like Ichigo's Tensa Zangetsu, but has blue straps instead of red.)
"Woah, that's so cool, hmm.., are you okay Valerie." Asked Ash.
"Yeah, it's actually quite heavy than I had imagined, whatever your emotions and desires are, it's quite strong." Replied Valerie as she handed the sword to Ash.
"Well that's because I like you Valerie, wait!, what the hell am I saying!, don't tell her that!, as much as I want to, I can't she's a goddess, and the time is not perfect for that yet." Thought Ash.
"Yeah it's quite heavy, I got to say it's 20 pounds plus." Said Ash.
"Than that's why we need to train, and we can't hide here forever, sooner or later Hades and the people of hell, will find this place." Said Valerie.
"Then, we need to relocate and prepare ourselves right." Said Ash.
"Correct." Replied Valerie.
"Alright shall we begin our training?" Asked Valerie.
"Yeah, let's get started, there's no time to waste." Said Ash.
The intense training of Ash's life and the god's begins now...
Meanwhile...
"Where is Zeus?" Said Hades.
"We're still trying to find him sir, I'm pretty sure we will find him eventually." Said a hell soldier.
"Damn it all!, very well then, continue the search and I want him alive, I'll kill him with my own hands." Said Hades.
"Yes sir, the mission will be one day complete." Said the hell soldier as left.
"Soon my brother, the day of your reign is over and our comeback has just begun."
"Your head will be resting at my feet, and I will become king!" Laughed Hades as continue to taunt Zeus.
... ... ( Yeah I know the chapter is short isn't it?) ...
(NEXT TIME IT WILL BE LONGER, PROMISE.)
Anyway that's it for chapter 2.
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So what will happen in the next chapter?
How will Ash's training go?
Will Hades be able to kill and obliterate Zeus, and claim the title of King of the gods, hahahahahaha!
Is my oc, okay?, come on guys, this is my first time using an oc, and I think i did pretty good.
Come on guys and girls, you like it?, but you don't admit the fact that this is great!
Right!? Right!?
Was the weapon a good choice for me to pick?
What should I name the sword? (It can't be Zangetsu, or Tensa Zangetsu, need some ideas guys.
I know, I'm not famous or well known, but need your opinions and ideas guys, truly helps.
What other powers does Valerie have?
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Also the Dragonball z... Badass super saiyan Vegeta! Coming right up!
"I SEE KAKOROT, I FORGOT YOU WERE A SUPER SAIYAN AS WELL."-BADASS SUPER SAIYAN VEGETA
"OF COURSE I WAS, AND WHY VEGETA?, WHY DID YOU BLOW UP THE EARTH, YOU EVEN KILLED BULMA!"-REGULAR SUPER SAIYAN GOKU
"KAKOROT WEREN'T YOU LISTENING TO ME!, YOU SHOULD SHOW RESPECT TO YOUR SUPERIORS!, AS I, VEGETA SHOULD BLOW UP THAT FUCK'IN SHIT HEAD OF YOURS INTO BITS!"-BADASS SUPER SAIYAN VEGETA
GOKU SLAPS VEGETA IN THE FACE
"WHAT!,WHAT!, NO ONE DOES THAT TO ME!"-BADASS SUPER SAIYAN VEGETA
"YOU DESERVE THAT ONE VEGETA!"-REGULAR SUPER SAIYAN GOKU
"YOU-YOU!, MONKEY!"-BADASS SUPER SAIYAN VEGETA
VEGETA PUNCHES GOKU
"OWW!"-REGULAR SUPER SAIYAN GOKU
"THAT WAS FOR MOCKING ME."-BADASS SUPER SAIYAN VEGETA
"BUT AREN'T YOU A MONKEY YOURSELF VEGETA"-REGULAR SUPER SAIYAN GOKU
AUDIENCE-GET OWNED BITCH!
"SHUT THE HELL UP!"-BADASS SUPER SAIYAN VEGETA
THAT'S IT FOR DRAGON BALL Z BADASS SUPER SAIYAN VEGETA SERIES PT 2
Next will be part 3
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